VirmanOS Tonight I'm Getting Over You part6,7 PG64 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Awesome os... Loved it each n every dialog just wow... Virat loves manvi n manvi too thn whr is virat wht happend to him?????? Y she try to forget him????? Looking forward to the update ... Tnx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
OMG!! Amazing again Nisha :) this new story is really incredible. But what is causing her to do this to herself And him? I hope nothing happened to virat.. What is the reason behind manvi's behavior.. Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

"I love you baby." He whispered into her ears.

"I love you more." She brushed his hair with her fingers and kissed his nose.




awww!!!!!kissing the tip of nose...this the most adorable n romantic n cutest form of kiss.


plz don't tell me virat's dead.plz plz plz.😭



.1."Promise? You won't ever leave me?" She extended her hand and held it out for him.
"Cross my heart and hope to die."


.2.He held her hands. "I don't like it. I don't like it when some other guy touches you. You are mine only mine." He answered protectively.

Letting out a sigh she assured him, "Ofcourse baby I'm all yours."

"He doesn't like it when I dance with someone else." She mumbled.



.3."No don't stop." He whined and placed her hand back on his forehead.



.4."Virat I'll trip." She frowned and he couldn't resist kissing her frown away. "I'll never let you trip baby. I got you."


this is the depth of his love.so it's impossible that he betrayed her.you're such a cliffhanger!!!i hate u.❤️

i wanted to quote each line of the story n say something 'bout them but refrained myself.manvi's pain...it's heart-wrenching.

p.s. you're so cruel!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
If it was much longer than this i will definitely cryed on reading it.
Loved it do update soon and plz pm me when u update.
:-):-):-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
amazing story
maanvi is so much in luv with virat
her thoughts are very nice
thanks for pm me
plz update soon n pm me also
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Why do I feel that Virat is dead in this story??? And Manvi is trying to get over him??
Ok.. the concept is beautiful... the way she sees him in everything is heart-wrenching...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
A new OS, superb yeah!

Wonderfully written about MAanvi love feelings towards Virat, really lovely story, can hardly wait to read more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Awww...this isss shoo shaddd !!!
Why did Virat do ??
Beautifully written - the flashbbacks n present !!!
Eagerly waiting to read part 2 !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
it's really nice...
But wht hppnd to my Viraaat????? he s no moreee????😭
Waitin 4 part 2
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
lovely part...
cont soon and pm me dear😊

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