VirmanOS Tonight I'm Getting Over You part6,7 PG64 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Awww what a beautiful OS
I loved the flashbacks, they were so in love
Wonder what happend between the two of them
Cant wait to read the nest part to find out!
Thanx for the pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Am loving this effect PMing is having ur u! LMAO! its really inspiring you to write! Another awesomeee OS! Loved it! Its different! They way your adding the flash backs and everything! Loveee it! Ughhh do u always have to stop in such a crucial moment! :S Anyway cont asap!!! :D
And I dont need to tell you to PM me I know I'll get one anyway! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
brilliant start
wondering what virat did
continue soon
pm me

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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
another storyyy frm uuu wow man its amazing!
first i thought virat would b at bar n gulping winen recalling hs past (as normally we see guy in tis scenerio) bt u changd it n fit manvi hn that scene i really lovd it...
the flashbacks were amazing...virats absence is really haunting her n she is dam missing hm what-so-ever is the reason bt still her present state show she cnt live widout hm or she'll go insane...
eagerly waiting to knw whats the mystery behnd all tis havoc
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
It was amazing,plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
This is so awesome Nisha...really loved it...~~~ ⭐️ ...mind blowing concept..n beautifully written.. 👏 👏 ...it is so interesting...the way u described the feelings n everything is fantastic... 👍🏼 ...manvi helplessness to forget him..the love for him...wow...it was really really fab...each n everything remind her if virat...beautiful Nisha...really eager to noe wat had happen between them..looking forward for update..will be waiting ...thank u so much for the pm Nisha.. 😊...n the song was fantastic too.. 😊
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Cintila thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Omigosh nisha !! This is sooo amazing !! Sooo different and sooo interesting !! You seriously should become an author or something. You have it in u gal !! This was just mindblowing. Sooo emotional. Poor manvi. Really eager to know what actually happened between them for them to split like this. Its just soo good. Please pm me when u update next :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Wow.. One more OS. Loved it.. Nisha. And plz check your Inbox. And continue this fast. I love the way you explained her emotions.. Wanna knw what Virat did dat she is this upset. Cant wait... 😊
And I cant wait for your vacations lol.. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First of all congartulations!!! ur exam got postponed! wow! it never happens to me even if want them to get postponed! :P
Ok let me come to the OS!
Maanvi's frustration on not being able to forget virat was really painful. She was just too much in love with him. Each thing she saw reminding about virat and making it really difficult for her to control her emotions were just too sad. Ok now what happened?? Why is she trying to forget him?? Ohh god the suspence is killing me nisha!!! :P
Thnx for the pm! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Nisha wonderful OS ⭐️⭐️.. Just superb.. The way you have included the flashback part in the update is just awesome.. Very well portrayed 👏👏.. They were so much in love .. But what actually happened between them?? Manvi is all depressed and broken 😒.. Each and everything around her reminds her of Virat.. She is not doing anything which he didn't like.. Don't tell me Virat is already dead 😔.. Beautifully written Nisha 👍🏼.. Eagerly waiting for the next part.. Loved the song.. Thanks a lot for the pm.. Take care 😊

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