VirmanOS Tonight I'm Getting Over You part6,7 PG64

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Pyaasi Chudail

@PyaasiChudail69

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

it was amazing nisha just perfect u expressed maanvi's emotions so perfectly
M eager to knw wat happend btwn thm
But frm flash bck it seems lke viraats luvs her too
But thn suddenly wat happnd i knw i hve to wait for tht
Bt i loved it

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virumanu

@virumanu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Hey wow realy nice ad interesting...hey I hpoe viru did,'t die or smething...i feel smething like tat happened or our viru cheated our manu or wat..?so confusing... plzzz continue soon plz plz plz plz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz
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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

oh gosh this is too confusing...😛
awesome update and very well written that makes it soo interesting with suspense 👏
but is full of pain and sadness manvi in soo deep depression is it coz of virat ???😕
those flashback scenes were soo beautiful and romanctic full of love 😊
i dont think it was all fake...but who was the guy???
plzz update next part soon and do pm plzz will be waiting or your update 😊

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

brilliant os... loved how u described manvis feelings... wherever manvi looks, she can only see virat... every single thing reminds her of him... she is going all crazy... its so sad to see manvi shattered like this... i hope virat is not dead or betrayed her... pls shock me with a happy ending, pls pls... waiting eagerly to read th next part.. thanks fr th pm nd cont soon...:)

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ananya

@asr.virman

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

TY for the PM

you have wonderfully portrayed manvi's love for him, maintaining suspense along with! 👏

solve all their problems soon.

i appreciate your writing 👍🏼.

and sorry for the late comment.

Edited by asr.virman - 12 years ago

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hangok

@hangok

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

oh my god,
what is this 😊another great work from you,
oww manvi is so much in pain, she cant forget him..
why i have the feelind that he is dead😔
dont seperate them , pleasee bring him back in manvis life..

thanks for pm

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shaimah

@shaimah

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Awesome OS
Loved it!!!
Cant wait for the next part
Continu soon and thanks for the pm!!

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X_Life

@X_Life

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

another best rather awesome write up of your's
cant see the cute lady in so much all becoz of virat :-(

the way she recollects the memories spend with him is just fab
she's doing all sort of things to get rid of this thoughts but its not working poor girl

what could b d reason ? cant wait for long update soon

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Barbierose

@Barbierose

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Nyc os... Wot happnd 2 virat? Is it a tragic story?... No... Plz Don't do dat... Im waitin 4 their meeting and reacn of manvi aftr seeing him... Tks 4 d pm... N pm me wen u update d next chap...:)

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@.jai.

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Awesome os... Loved it each n every dialog just wow... Virat loves manvi n manvi too ... whr is virat wht happend to him?????? Y she try to forget him????? Looking forward to the next update ... Tnx for the pm

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