VirmanOS Tonight I'm Getting Over You part6,7 PG64

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sweettasi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

hey m a silent reader...to be honest I don't comment regularly bt seeing ur warning "I Don't pm to silent readers"...so I can't take risk...lol I want to read 2nd part... k sry for my bak bak...now about d os...girl u r amaging writer yr...I can actually imagined this whole os scene infront of my eyes...manvi's feelings are well written...plz continue soon... PS. plz continue soon PM me voodoo...:-)

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EHMMBH_fan1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Y do I think Virat it dead? :(

Anyways gr8 start!!! Really enjoyed reading it! I especially loved how u connected the past to the present! Continue soon :)

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garimaksgian

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Great story waiting for the part to knw wht hapend that mnvi is behavng lik ths...

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ashni0905

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

unique way of writing...loved it...

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Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Beautifully Written,..Awesome OS...!!! each n everything happenning around her reminds her of Virat...every single thing...this reminded me of the words told by an actor in reality show..'when a person leaves u, he doesnt leave without taking anything. ur 50 % of life is already gone and u start feeling hallow n lonely'(Vikrant Massey)(its from the serial).,...n yes its true...Eager for the next Nisha...Thnks for the PM..~!!

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titliluvsvirman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

its so freaking awesome...👏
wanna knw how virman parted ways...
i wud love to see sumthn lyk dis on da show too😉

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Nisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Hey m nishi,i hav jst joined dis forum few days back n i m a die hard fan of virman..i mst say u r an awesome writer..nd dis one is beautiful,i js lvd it to d core..plz add me to ur pm list,i wld lv 2 read ur writings..

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Nishaaa OMG y its a OS >.< >.< make it a FF plzzz' it's sooo good!!!!!!!!I love the intro ... This is my favorite now!!!!!^_^ loveee all the dialogs.. Like it how u went flashback n present!!! Plz plz pkzzz make it a FF!! Don't end it :( waiting for part 2! I know u dong have much time to do all this but since u did it u gotta pay for it... Hehehe do continue more n don't end on part 2 thanks for the pm will be waiting for next one! Hope u have a great day

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archiekini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Wow!!,you have a brilliant flair for writing!!

Enjoyed every line that you wrote.. Was practically picturising the whole scenario..

Would love to read the remaining part of this story!!!

Heard you PM the remaining parts only this who comment..am a new reader here. So well do I get a chance to read the ending of this story??

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imsid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

..great ya . . . . Its awsum loved the flashbcks.. Their romance aww virat loves her so much u are a superb writer.. Ye hath mujhe de de nisha :p :p kidding.. ;) continue soon . . . I loved ur story..great ya . . . . Its awsum loved the flashbcks.. Their romance aww virat loves her so much u are a superb writer.. Ye hath mujhe de de nisha :p :p kidding.. ;) continue soon . . . I loved ur story..great ya . . . . Its awsum loved the flashbcks.. Their romance aww virat loves her so much u are a superb writer.. Ye hath mujhe de de nisha :p :p kidding.. ;) continue soon . . . I loved ur story..

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