Fan-Fic 4 Saarrthi: Mohabbatein! - Page 6

Originally posted by: tunna

are wah!!! isse kehte hain timing.. wenever u say posting.. i'm here waiting 😉
waiting as usual shirl..i mean rose.. 😉

heeeyy..thanx 4 yur wait...but i am trying to make sure that yur wait is worth it...and trying to make these stories more refreshing..more different from ekta's stories...😉

Originally posted by: tunna

but shirl... fab fba fab fab fab fab fab fba fab fab fab fba fab
FABULOUS EPISODES 👏
all the jodi scenes were toooooooooooooo good !!!
u think of sooooo many ways to unite na..
goons,heroes,tag,mobile,accidents,drawing bks...everything... mind u ur n daniel scene ws like sooooooo reminds me of veer-zara 😉 😉 i can imagine u too hanging like srk n priety 😉 wat a pretty site no.... 😛 😉 😉 😉 😃 😃 😃

thanx tuhina...so glad that you liked them...and yeah..i kinda got that idea from veer-zaara...so chhwweett of you...me and DT like them two..thanx 4 that...😛

Episode 5

(the 12 jodis go to school together...)

arjun: school..school..school...whats the great thing about it...?
marriyam: we get to learn sumthing...besides..its jsut this one last year..then university..then we are totally free....
diya: when will that day come?
karan: soon..bcoz time goes really...really...really..fast...so fats that we dont even realsie it..
diya: u r starting to sound like my mum a little..
karan: huh?
diya: ok..registration time...shall we go?
karan: 5 minutes left..not that quick..
diya: ok...5 minutes then..
angad(luks at anjali-priya's frend): wow...she's hhoootttt!!!
priya: uff..not again...everytime..everywhere...he starts flirting with girls...
kavya: thats his habit..neva mind him..priya...
priya: oh well..his loss...anyways...
rahul: yep..his loss..
angad(2 anjali): hi..
anjali: hi...
angad: erm...you know..i think i seen yuo somewhere before...
anjali: oh really? where?
angad: at robbie's party..? maybe?
(priya is shocked on hearing this)

priya(thinking): thats the exact lines he said to me..uff..the silly...
anjali: you must have seen me..i go to lots of parties...
angad: same here..i go to lots..they r a lot fo fun..arent they?
anjali: yeah..true..

priya(thinking): the..two-faced...guy..says one thing to me..and says another thing to her..
angad: erm..so anjali..isnt it?
anjali: yeah..
angad: so anjali..why dont we meet up....somewhere...yeah? somewhere...wid you and me...
anjali: yeah..why not?
angad: i will call you...ok?
anjali: u dont even have my number...
angad: i will ask priya...
anjali: ok..kool..see you..then...
angad: bye..
anjali: bye..
(anjali leaves)

priya: tumhe buhut mazaa aata hai..haina...aise larkis ko flirt karna...aur wagera..?
angad: buhut mazaa aata hai..lekhen...
priya: tum fed up nahin hote...inn stupid larkis ke peeche bhagna..?
angad: main larkis ki peeche nahin bhagda...larkis mere peeche bhagthi hai..
priya: oh..plz...dont give me that...you run after girls..they dont run after you..
(priya leaves for class)

angad: shararat...i hate girls..

(next scene: maths class)

kavya: amths..dont you just hate the word...maths? uff..
kashish: kavya..tell me...one thing...who exactly luvs maths..? any1 who does..is certainly not normal..
amal: kashish..stop talking about yurself..
(the sinha girls start sniggering)

kavya: oyeee...luk who is talking...
adi: are you talking about me/
teacher: class..quiet!!!
rose: quiet..everyone...
teacher: ok..today...we will be doing fractions...and..the first thing will be...has everyone done their homework?

(all the boys except karan, daniel, kavya, adi luk guilty)

daniel: uh-oh..guilt...(laughs)
rahul: sshh...daniel..
teacher: who hasnt done their homework?
(no-one puts their hand up)

teacher: gud..i will assume that you all have done it..
sohan: some teacher she is..(sniggers)

(the lesson goes through and then finishes)

rose: finally...break time...phew!!
teacher: pages 33-34..homework for tomorrow...make sure you complete it...
dnaiel: homework..and homework...and homework...gosh...so fed up of it...
kavya: welcome to my club brother...life is like that...
vikram: i didnt do my homework..and i got away wid it...YES!!
sia: dont show off..too much...i did my homework...because i'm good..not like you..(leaves)
vikram: attitude...she hasnt lost it..has she?
kashish: a lot of homework..and this maths thing..is seriously out of my control...
kavya: oh..erm...i cna help you..if you want..
kashish: oh really? how sweet...so...when?
kavya: erm..at a free session..yeah? maybe 5th lesson...?
kashish: sure..i got that free too...

daniel: so..erm...any injuries...from yesterday's accident?
rose: erm...jsut my hand..(shows her bandged hand): but..its not that serious..
daniel: sorry..i yelled at you...
rose: no..my fault..i shoudln't have screamed like that...
daniel: anyway...are you visiting around our house 2night?
rose: yeah..yeah..i am...we all are..
daniel: ool..i will see you then...

diya; gunjan..i need yur mobile...
gunjan: why?
diya: bcoz i wanna play games..thats why...
gunjan: no...last time..you played on my mobile for a long time..that the battery went dead...
diya: oh..plz gunjan..

(karan comes)

karan: use my phone..if you want...
diya; oh...how ncie of you...thanx...i will sue his then..
gunjan: oh right then..
diya: so..karan..tell me more about america...
karan: america..oh..not matter how good it is...it was lacking in one thing...
diya: whats that?
karan: a best frend...(smiles)
diya: awww....so sweet...

Precap: Tuhina's birthday comes up soon, the Sinha family begin to prepare for the occasion, Sohan plans onto what to get for her.

Howz dat, ppl?

Erm, besides guys..tell me all of yur birthdays..so i cna put them in the fan-fic..list them down here in this topic! 😳 😃 😉

Originally posted by: Shirley

Erm, besides guys..tell me all of yur birthdays..so i cna put them in the fan-fic..list them down here in this topic! 😳 😃 😉

erm.....mine is on 22 april

😊

wow......shirley....all the parts were gr8,romantic and funny at the same time👏

gr8 going shirley👏

u know whenever i read ur ff ....u bring a huge smile on my face just like this😃😉

love u lots🤗🤗🤗

Amina

p.s my b'day is on July 1st😛.....

Originally posted by: sia_lovely

just awesome......superb!! and haan beautifully written.......👏

thanx sia dear😛

Originally posted by: sia_lovely

erm.....mine is on 22 april

😊

ok..then..thanx 4 that😃😳..when 22 april comes..i will write yur birthday in the ff too😛😳😳

phir aur bhi mazaa aayega..haina?😉😉