Fan-Fic 4 Saarrthi: Mohabbatein! - Page 27

Created

Last reply

Replies

472

Views

25k

Users

10

Likes

2

Frequent Posters

amina877 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Shirley

awww...thanx amina jaan!

And a Happy (Late) New Year 2 you too!!😃🤗

may you meet a lot of successa dn happiness in this year! keep on posting those smileys!😃

tc...lub ya...Shirls😳😃

Awww thanks sis 4 those lovely words!!🤗

They brought a huge smile on my face just like😃😉

And wonderful updates!!!gr8 job!!👏

Love u:)

Amina

Shirley thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: amina877

Awww thanks sis 4 those lovely words!!🤗

They brought a huge smile on my face just like😃😉

And wonderful updates!!!gr8 job!!👏

Love u:)

Amina

awww...nice to see those big smileys....made me smile..like this...😃

bet you..are smiling like dat..right now...😃

anyways..gud luck wid yur exams..(read yur siggy)😉

Love u...Shirls🤗

Shirley thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
ok ppl - updating episode 33 😃 😉
Shirley thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 33

(evening time - both families about to dine)

mihir: karan?
karan(2 diya): one minute...(2 mihir): yeah dad?
mihir: idhar aao..
karan: yeah? whats up?
anu: beta mohini...
mohini: jee?
anu: idhar aao..aap..
mohini: theek hai...
mihir: beta...humne tumhare shaadi karne ka faisla kiya hai..
karan: acha?
(looks down..thinking of diya)
anu: mohini..abhi abhi..mihir ni kaha hai..ki karan ki shaadi hoge...tumse..

(karan looks up in shock)

(diya hears this..and is heartbroken)

karan: lekhen..papa...main...main...
mihir: kyun beta? koi aitraaz?
karan(standing up): aitraaz? aitraaz hai..main mohini se shaadi nahin kar sakta...

(everyone comes in the lounge room..seeing whats wrong)

prerna: beta...aisa..aisa..maath karo..humare saath..mohin..humare beti jaise hai...
karan: aunty..main mohini se pyar nahin karta..
mohini(crying): lekhen..main karti hoo....
karan: mera dil kisi aur ki paas hai..

(everyone is shocked)

karan: main kisi aur ka hoo...
mihir: kaun? kaun hai voh?
karan: anu uncle..voh larki aapke apni beti hai...Diya!!

(everyone stares at diya in shock)

karan: main aur diya ek doosri se buhut chahti hai..ek doosri ki beegair jee nahin sakti...
prerna(2 diya): kya yeh sach hai diya?
diya(silent)
prerna: khamosh kyun ho? jawab do..
diya: haan mama...2 saal pehle ki baat thi..school ki khatam hone se pehle...
vanchita: satyanas! iss larki ni humara naam ko disgrace kar diya hai..
bauji: vanchita...bas! diya ni koi galat kaam nahin hai...pyar ko koi paap nahin hai...
kashish: diya...its ok...tum jao...aapni room mein..ok?
(diya leaves in distress)
mihir: karan...tumhare khushi mere khushi hai...tum kisi khush rahoge? diya? ya phir mohini?
(karan turns around to see mohini..who is crying...and then looks up at diya..)

karan: diya..

(mohini screams and runs upstairs)

tulsi: humne faisla kiya hai..diya humare ghar mein bahu ban ki aayege..

(all sinha girls smile)

bauji: mubarak..ho beta!
kavya: congrats...brother!
(hug him)
daniel: good for you..mate!
karan: thanx!

(all sinha girls rush up to see diya)

gauri: hey..diya..chal...shopping time..
diya: ykun?
amal: ithni innocent maath acting karo...tumhare shaadi hone wali hai...
diya(happy): kya?
amal: haan..karan ni tumhe choose kiya hai..aur mihir uncle aur tulsi aunty iss baat ko lekhar khush hai...so are mummy and papa...
diya: erm...

(diya runs down)

bauji: khush rahe...beta..(embraces her)

angad: buhut acha hua na..anjali? ki karan aur diya ki shaadi hone wali hai?
anjali: haan...tum phir hum dono ki shaadi kab hui gi?
angad: erm..
rpiya: buhut jald hoga...(smiles)
anjali: erm..priya..aaj thak jo bhi maine kaha hai...forgive me...i'm sorry...
priya: arre...sorry kis baat ki? tum angad ki hone wali patni hoo...its yur right...
anjali: hmm..

(all of a sudden..anjali starts coughing badly...)

priya: anjali?
angad: anjali? priya?
priya: haan...?
angad: anjali..ko hospital karti hai...fmaily ko kuch maath kehna...itne khush hai ki...
priya: chalo..

(both take anjali to the hospital)

(marriyam comes in the house wid yuv)

marriyam: acha..yuv..aaj ki liye..tho dinner karki jao?
yuv: erm...marriyam..aaj mere exams ki preparations karne hai...main zaroor kal aaonga...
marriyam: acha...
yuv(whispers): waise..aapne mummy ko batana maath bhool na...you know..hum dono ki baari mein...

(arjun sees them two)

marriyam: nahin..zaroor bataonge...
yuv: ok..phir bye..
marriyam: bye..

(yuv leaves..marriyam walks over to her sisters)

(sujal and amina are talking with each other..shravan feels bad..at this..)

sharavn(thinking): pata nahin aisa..kyun lagta hai ki...aaj pehle baar aisa kuch ho raha hai? kyun main har baar amina ki baari mein sochta hoo..?

swayam: sharavn?
shravan: haan..?
swayam: kya soch rahe hoo?
shravan: swyaam? mujhe lagta hai ki..mujhe amina se pyar hogaya hai...
swayam(thinking): yaar...hum sab inn singa larki ki peeche kyun hai? main..kashish ki peeche...yeh..amina ki peeche..jatin..priya ki peeche..aur..ansh rose ki peeche...uff..
shravan: mujhe kya karna chahe?
swayam: batao usse? yeh..phir..prerna aunty se kaho...buhut jald tumhe aapne damad bana de gi...
sharavan: aisa ee hoga..

(Precap: Anjali has some shocking news for Priya, Sujal realises of Shravan's feelings for Amina and is heartbroken and Prerna decides to announce Marriyam's engagement, Kashish feels different than ever before, Daniel says goodbye to Rose for his first duty, Sohan~Tuhina share a memorable moment, Amal gets closer to Adi.

Howz dat, ppl?
amina877 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Shirley

awww...nice to see those big smileys....made me smile..like this...😃

bet you..are smiling like dat..right now...😃

anyways..gud luck wid yur exams..(read yur siggy)😉

Love u...Shirls🤗

Awww shirley... so sweet!!🤗

And yep is it so obvious?😳

After reading ur ff and lovely posts there is a HUGE SMILE on my face😃

Thanks..i hope i did gr8 on exams😃

Anyways A very Happy Hug Day to you!😃🤗

Love,

Amina

p.s awesome update!!👏

Shirley thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sia_lovely

hey shirley nice part! 👏

thanx sia😳

Shirley thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: amina877

Awww shirley... so sweet!!🤗

And yep is it so obvious?😳

After reading ur ff and lovely posts there is a HUGE SMILE on my face😃

Thanks..i hope i did gr8 on exams😃

Anyways A very Happy Hug Day to you!😃🤗

Love,

Amina

p.s awesome update!!👏

thanx amina....yurs and sia's comments r so sweet....😳😃

dont worry...u will get gud results....you got a brainy mind....no wonder sujal's after you..hehe...😛😳😆

anyways.....than 4 the hugs cards....you r a true friend😃😛

luv shirls🤗

Shirley thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 34

(6:00am in the morning...daniel's aalrm starts ringing)

daniel: uff...shut up...just shut up..(turns his alarm clock off)...hmm...better...
kavya: still sleeping? (shouts): DANIEL!!!
daniel: argh! what?
kavya: get dressed...yur first day at the base...make it good..
daniel: oh...great!!

(showers..and gets dressed...does his hair and goes down)

tulsi: daniel...finally..come down and have some breakfast...
daniel: i cant...i'm in a hurry...
savita: at least..have some juice..without breakfast...you wont be able to concentrate...
daniel: ok..ok..(drinks a glass of juice): right...i'm going..bye...
angad: bye...

(daniel leaves...and goes to sinha house..where rose..is out collecting all the letters)

rose(picking them up): he always does this...throwing them down in the puddles...
daniel: hi..
rose(looking up): hi..you alright?
daniel: yeah..and you?
rose(hugging him): yeah...
daniel: i'm here to say bye...its my first day..at the base..
rose: right..ok...good luck...
daniel: thanks..
rose: when are you coming back?
daniel: erm...maybe...a week alter..its only the start..
rose: ok...take care..
daniel: i will..and you take care as well..
rose: i will...
(daniel embraces her tightly)
daniel: i'll keep in contact ok?
rose: yeah..

(daniel leaves...rose goes back inside)

rose:(sighs)
gauri: whats the matter? boyfriend trouble?
rose: no...not trouble..he's gone
gauri: where? work?
rose: yep...
gauri: seriously..rose...you need to lose that melancholy face..it doesnt suit you...
rose: i cant..i got diya's wedding arrangements to do as well...and my work..and daniel's gone..
gauri: cheer up...or i'll ask the weevils to cheer u up..
rose: no thank you...

(kashish comes in on the phone)

kashish: yeah...decorate it nicely...wih reds..and whites..and purples...any vibrant wedding exotic colours..ok? look...look...no...i dont want any black in my sister's wedding..this is a shaadi..not a funeral..ok? yeah...ok..bye..(hungs up phone)
prerna: is the hall booked..beta?
kashish: yes...we just gotta sort out the decorations...
amal: how..about a photo of karan..on one side..and one photo of diya on the other side...
priya: yeah...yeah..thats a great idea...

(mohini comes down)

mohini: listen everyone..i have something to say..
diya: what?
mohini: i know..that karan is not going to be mine..but..i'm happy with that (smiles): and happy for you diya...and..just make me happy too..with yur wedding..
diya: are you sure..you r happy? you..know..it's not..easy..
mohini(interrupts): i know..its not..easy...but thats life..and i might even find someone new..yeah?
diya: yeah..
mohini: congrats diya...(hugs her): come on..we have to go shopping...wedding is about to happen...
amina: yeah..i'll get the driver...ok?

(anu and prerna watch all the sinha girls together)

prerna: kya baat hai..anu?
anu: pata nahin..prerna...kal ki baat thi..jab humare aulad..sab bachay thi..
prerna: abhi bhi bachay hai..
anu: mera matlaab tha..ki waqt kitna jaldi pass karki gaya hai..haina?
prerna: haan..
anu: abh dekho na...diya chale jayege...aapni ghar...gauri bhi kaam akrne lage hai...phir kashish jayege...phir..amina...amal...priya..rose..tuhina..mohini... voh bhi aapne bhi hai...aur sia..
prerna: aur...maa baap ki liye aur koi khushi ki baat hui nahin sakti...haina?
anu: hmm..

(priya decides to see anjali in hospital)

priya: erm..hi...i need to see anjali..sharma..
reception: anjali sharma?
priya: yeah...
reception:a dn how are you related to her?
priya: a friend..what ward is she in?
reception: in ward 15..
priya: ok..thank you..
reception: you are welcome...

(priya goes to ward 15...and goes to anjali's room)

anjali: hi..priya..
ppriya: anjali..kaise ho?
anjali: erm...priya...mujhe tumse koi baat karne hai..
rpiya: kaise baat? pehle tum aapne health ki baari mein batao...kaise ho?
anjali: rpiya..mere baat suno..(whispers): first get rid of the doctor)
priya: erm..if you dont mind doctor...can you excuse us two?
doctor: erm..ok..but if there is any problem...then call me..
priya: ok..

(doctor leaves)

priya: aise kaunse baat hai..jo tum doctor ki saamne bhi nahin keh sakti?
anjali: rpiya..main yahan do din se aaye ho..
priya: haan...buhut jald ghar aaoge...
anjali: rpiya..docts ni kuch tests kiye thi..
priya: kaise tests?
anjali: lungs ki..aur...mujhe...kuch pata chala hai...
priya: abs voh..routine check up ki tests thi...kaise koi baat nahin hai..
anjali: tum pehle baito...
(priya sits down beside her on the bed)

priya: tell me...whats wrong?
anjali: i did the tests..and i got...i..(tears come out of her eyes)
priya: dont cry..what happened?
anjali: i got cancer!

(priya is shocked)

priya: what!!!
anjali: yes...i have got lung cancer...and i...dont have much time...
priya: no...this cant be...you...no...but...how did this...
anjali: i have getting these coughing problems since school started...
priya: and you never told anyone...OMG....does angad know?
anjali: only you and i know..
priya: oh..anjali..
anjali: i only have 2 months to live..

(the words echo around priya's mind...tears start flowing out of priya's eyes)

priya: no...its a joke..a horrible..bad..joke..it cant be..
anjali: its true...and...priya..i wont be ehre..i wont be able to spend the rest of my life with angad...
priya: but..
anjali: priya..
(picks a chain from the table beside her...a chain that angad have to anjali...with their photos in it..anjali opens it..priya is shocked..as it includes now angad wid priya..instead of anjali)

priya: what do you mean? i dont udnerstand...
anjali(placing it in her hand): this treasure called angad i have...i gvie it to..you..to look after forever..
priya: what? no...(throws it on the floor): me and angad? no...! how can you think of something like that? me and him are jsut friends...thats it..i can neevr have that kind of relationship wid him..
anjali: but for me....please...for friendship's sake...i'm yur friend..and angad's yur friend...think of him...all alone for life..

(priya thinks - what will she decide guys)?

Precap: Priya finds herself in a dilemma, meanwhile Anjali decides to tell everyone the truth and to give her place to Priya, meanwhile Kashish and Kavya share a memorable moment, meanwhile the wedding preparations are in swing.

Howz dat?
amina877 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part shirley!! 😃 👏 👏

Love uu!!!! 🤗 🤗 🤗
Shirley thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: amina877

gr8 part shirley!! 😃 👏 👏

Love uu!!!! 🤗 🤗 🤗

hey thanks amina...😳

🤗

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".