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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: amina877

that was brillant shirley!! 😃 👏
gr8 going!! 👏

And very nice siggy!! 👏
p.s Happy Holidays and Merry Christmas 2 u!! 😃 🤗

awww...thanx amina....😃😳

ok...thanx 4 the comment about da siggy...😳

Happy Holidays and Merry Christmas to you 2🤗🤗

P.S. And a very Happy New Year (in advance)😉😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 31

(mihir and anu decide to announce something to the families during breakfast)

mihir: erm...main aur anu kuch kehna chahti hai..
tulsi: aise kaunse baat hai?
prerna: zaroori hai?
anu: haan prerna..
kavya: whats the matter..dad?
mihir: nashta ki baad hum sab..outing ke liye jaa rahe hai...
gauri: haan...aliens hongaye...
sia: kya?
amal: arre haan...gauri is working for torchwood...
sohan: torchwood? the alien lot...
gauri: yep...(smiles): and its brilliant...
anu: but...let's get ready...
rose: ok...chalo..u lot...lets get packing...
karan: ok..(2 diya): u..come wid me...
diya: right...

(gauri packing her stuff)

gauri: torchwood books...torchwood equipment...alien detector...alien analyser...
amina: why are you taking all this alien stuff?
gauri: u neva know what we might see there...
amina: gauri...luk...there arent going to be any aliens
gauri: u neva know...

kashish(zipping her bag): mama...i'm done..
kavya(coming in): here..let me help you with that...
kashish: no..its ok...i can manage...
kavya: hey kashish..come on...let me..
kashish: ok..since you are insisting...ok...
kavya: good...
(carries the suitcase into the car)

karan(holding diya's hand): alright?
diya: yeah...why wouldnt i be?
karan: dont worry...there wont be any werewolves or anything...
diya: very funny...karan...
karan: but i will always be there for you...
diya: always?
karan: yep...i wont leave you..never ever...

(both about to kiss each other...when mihir presses the horn)

mihir: KARAN! HURRY!
karan: ok..romance later...lets go...

(both of the families are in the cars)

pammi: so...erm..daniel...how was america?
daniel: it was good..but it wasnt like london...i missed london..
pammi: what did you miss?
daniel: when i got bored of miss's food, i remembered mum's cooking...
tulsi: acha?
daniel: when my senior teacher would praise my work...i remembered dad..
mihir: really?
daniel: when i got bored of playing games...and all that...i remembered those troublesome brothers..kavya..angad...sohan...arjun...adi...karan..sujal. ..vikram...
angad: oii! troublesome..are we?
rose: what else?
daniel: oh...when i couldnt get any sleep..i remembered baa...and her stories..
baa: aww...
daniel: wheneva my colleague irritated me...i got reminded of indu..
indu: hey!
pammi: what else?
daniel: thats it...
rose: what...is that it?
daniel: yep
rose: what...what about me?
daniel: hmm...nah...i didnt remeber you...much..
rose(upset): right..

(ansh grins)

ansh(thinking): he didnt even miss her..thats a new start for me..
ansh: dont worry..rose..i'm there for you..
daniel: oh..one time..was it?
rose: when?
daniel: i did remember you once...
rose: when?
daniel(whispers): wheneva my heart took a beat...
rose(smiles): really? i remembered you too...

(ansh gets angry seeing this)

ansh(thinking): itna acha plan socha tha...sab kharab hogaya...uff...kuch aur sochna..parega...

(the families reach the place...its a forest..wid a lake nearby...and a nice garden in the background)

amina: its beautiful..
sujal(luking at amina): very...
amina(luking at sujal): sujal..
sujal: oh...i got something for you..
amina: what?
sujal: hold on...
(gets a ring out)
amina(concerned): sujal...what?
sujal: dont worry..i'm not going to propose...
amina: oh..i..
sujal: its a christmas present..for you...(putting it on her finger): keep it always with you...
amina(holding her hand): i will...

prerna: come on...kids...

pammi: ansh...
ansh: what?
pammi: something...is wrong...i..
ansh: what is it?
pammi: when daniel was saying who he remembered and missed..he mentioned everyone...even rose...but not me...
ansh: pammi...thats why...you have to get close to him...
pammi: but rose..
ansh: leave rose to me...i will take care of her...you get closer to daniel...i want rose...u want daniel...u'll get him...

(nigh falls...everyone is sitting around the fire...sujal and amina are pretending to study in the tent..but are enjoying a good time togeher)

amina: now..this is what i always wanted...
sujal: what?
amina: a moment like this...you..me...and the night..
sujal(arms around her): me too...i love you..
amina: i love you too...

(sujal kisses amina...bringing her closer..unil amina moves away)

sujal: what happened?
amina: nothing..its just that...what if someone sees us like this?
sujal: dont worry...no-one will see us...they think we are working...
amina: sujal..i was wondering...that...
sujal: what?
amina: i want to be with me..
sujal: you are with me...
amina; for life...together..in a legal bond...
sujal: meaning?
amina: should we get married?
sujal: erm...thats a decision we have to take from our parents...
amina: so?
sujal: fine...we will tell them tonight..
amina: right
sujal: then...its you..me...forever..
amina(smiles): ok...

pammi: so..daniel...tell us more..
daniel: oh..one time...i forgot to collect rose..from school..and she came home drenched from the rain...she looked...cute...when shes wet...
pammi: rose? yur friend...thats why?
daniel: not my friend...my best friend...
pammi: right...
daniel: oh...she was so fussy about those cinderella games we used to play...
pammi: right...
daniel: shes still the same...rose...now look at her..all smart and...
pammi(thinking): rose this..rose that..its always her...why? why wont you talk about me?

ansh: so..rose..nice to be here..isnt it?
rose: oh..i remember one time..comign here with daniel..and he used to be princ charming...and me..cinderella..and we used to play those games all the time...(laughs)
ansh: cool..(bored)
rose: hes such a good frind..daniel..now look..from a geeky..freak...boffin boy..to a squadron leader...
ansh: yeah...
rose: one minute...
(ansh grabs her hand)
rose: what?
ansh: why do you always talk about him?
rose: who? daniel? he's my friend...
ansh: arnet i yur friend?
rose: yeah..but..we known each other for a long...long time..
ansh: going closer): and me?
rose: get away from me..
(runs away...goes to the tent..daniel notices this)

(kashish and mamta are playing tag...near the lake...mamta accidently pushes kashish into the lake..kashish falls in..)

prerna: KASHISH!! MERE BACHI...ANU..KUCH KARO....
anu: KASHISH...
gauri: kashish...its all right...you going to be all right...
kashish: help...help!!!! koi hai??!!!
ansh(whispers to swayam): this is yur chance...o...
swayam: aunty..its ok..main jaata hoo...i'm coming kashish..
kavya: kashish...just...wait..i'm coming...
(before swayam can..kavya jumps in...to save kashish...he holds kashish i his arms...kashish who is unconscious now..kavya brings her out)

diya: OMG...kashish...wake up..
kavya: move..everyone...she's unconscious...(performs the CPR..: come on...kashish..breathe..1...(presses): 2...

(kashish's fingers move)

tuhina: look...
(kashish gasps..for breath...she starts choking..extra water coming out...)

kavya(hugging her): its ok...its ok...u r alright now...
(swayam feels jealous)

Precap: Sohan & Tuhina become more closer than ever, Tulsi & Mihir are considering Karan's marriage, and Shravan feels different about his feelings for Amina, meanwhile a new twist comes for Daniel~Rose.

Howz dat, ppl?
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Posted: 18 years ago
shirley nice part 👏 👏 !uff ansh and pammi! why are they making lifee a hell foor daniel and rose..... 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sia_lovely

shirley nice part 👏 👏 !uff ansh and pammi! why are they making lifee a hell foor daniel and rose..... 😡

thanx sia...awww...its alright...me and dan..will get through til da end...lets see how u and vikram get along...😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

awww..thanx!😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
brilliant part shirley!! 😃
👏 👏 👏
ooo new twists in ff!gr8! 😃 👏 👏

Happy New year to you too Shirley!! 😃 🤗
May this year bring lots of hapiness and success in your life!Always keep smiling!
love u:)
Amina
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: amina877

brilliant part shirley!! 😃
👏 👏 👏
ooo new twists in ff!gr8! 😃 👏 👏

Happy New year to you too Shirley!! 😃 🤗
May this year bring lots of hapiness and success in your life!Always keep smiling!
love u:)
Amina

awww...thanx amina jaan!

And a Happy (Late) New Year 2 you too!!😃🤗

may you meet a lot of successa dn happiness in this year! keep on posting those smileys!😃

tc...lub ya...Shirls😳😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
ok ppl - updating episode 32 😃 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 32

(tulsi and mihir are in the living room with the other grown-ups)

dadaji: tho..kaunse kahabar thi...mihir..jo sabko yahan bulaya tumne?
mihir: dadaji...maine aur tulsi karan ki shaadi ki baari mein soch rahe hai...
(sohan hears mhiir's lines)
sohan(thinking): karan ki shaadi? kisi?
savita: arre..koi larki dekhe ya nahin?
mihir: anu ki beti hai..
sohan(thinking): diya...bhabhi..(smiles): gotta tell karan this..(leaves)
gayatri: kaunse mihir? sinha ghar mein kitne betia hai..
tulsi: humne mohini ki baari mein socha hai..
indu: arre wow...mohini aur karan ki jodi buhut ache lagigi...haina dadi?
savita: haan...hum sab aaj anu aur prerna ki ghar jayega...shagun lekhar...
tulsi: haan....shukar hai...karan ki baari aa gaye hai..phir..angad...phir sohan..phir...kavya...phir..adi..phir..sujal..phir....arjun. ..phir..daniel..
indu: phir..mere baari kab aayege?
baa: tere baari aayege..
indu: uff...kab aayega voh?

(upstairs...sohan tells karan)

sohan: karan?
karan: haan?
sohan: sunn..
karan: haan..kya hai?
sohan: mum aur dad tere shaadi karvana chahti hai
karan: kya? sach? kisi?
sohan: sinha khandan ki ek larki ki saath...mujhe lagta hai..ki Anu Sinha..
karan: seriously...lekhen mujhe kuch pata hai nahin..
sohan: duffer...surprise hai...
karan: acha...finally..main aur diya...zindagi phar saath rehenge...

(over at sinha house...tuhina is cooking...sohan steps in)

sohan: hi
tuhina: oh hi...how r you?
sohan: i'm fine...what about you?
tuhina: yeah..i'm all right..just got to cut these vegetables...and cook all this lot...
sohan: do you need any help?
tuhina: no...its all right..i appreciate it...but..erm...guys dont cook..
sohan: i'm a zabardast cook..seriously..and erm...dont tell anyone about that...varna mum is going to get me to cook rotis in the morning...
tuhina(laughs): hey...not bad...yur style..
sohan: told you...
tuhina: ok..better cut this all...

(tuhina is cutting the cauliflower...and accidently cuts her finger and starts bleeding..)

tuhina: ouch!!!!!
sohan: what happened? (sees the finger): its all right...(sucks all the blood for her)

(tuhina and sohan both gaze upon each other)

tuhina: sohan...you didnt have to suck all the blood for me...
sohan: i cant see you in pain..(closer to her): one cant see his best friend in pain like this can he?
tuhina: erm...
sohan: you..wait her...i'll go and get a plaster...

(goes and gets a plaster..and puts it around her finger)

tuhina: thanx..
sohan: no worries...
(both give each other a tight cuddle)

(the family has dinner...later the grown-ups are talking...ansh decides to talk to rose)

ansh: hi..rose
rose: hi..
ansh: fine?
rose(angry a little): not with you around..
ansh: look..i'm sorry...for the other day...i couldnt control my feelings...
rose: luk..please..quiet! what..what did you say?
ansh: i cant control my feelings...wheneva i see you..i feel...(going more closer)
rose: ansh..stop it...you are freaking me out...
ansh: you will only spend the rest of yur life with me...(grabs her hand)
rose: stop it!!! ansh..i said stop it!!!

(daniel...sees all this...runs to save rose)

daniel: let go of her...ansh!!!!
ansh: where did you come from?
daniel: from here...to save my friend...what do you think you are doing?
ansh(pushes him): who do you think you are?
daniel(pushes him harder): thats my question...
(rose runs out in the garden...in the dark night...daniel runs after her...ansh decides 2 talk to pammi about this)

daniel: rose..are you ok?
rose: no...he first starts off like that..and dnaiel..you aren't making it any better...why did you push him like that?
daniel: because he was troubling you...i wanted to protect you..
rose: i can protect myself...
daniel: but i cant beat him doing that to you..
rose: why not?
daniel: i just cant...ok?
rose: tell me..why not?
daniel(shouts): BECAUSE I LOVE YOU!
(rose is surprised)
daniel: i do...its ever since i went america...i felt incomplete...because you werent with me..and after meeting you..again...after 2 years..i felt complete...because we here together..
rose: you...erm...i...
daniel: i what?
rose: i love you too...i felt bad..when you didnt mention me...but when you did..it felt...nice...

(both embrace each other tightly...all the maple elaves fly in the air around them)

daniel: we better go inside...(smiles)
rose: yeah...and..erm....what are you doing tomrorow?
daniel: tomrorow..is my first day as a pilot...squadron leader...
rose: really?
daniel: yeah..i'll try and call you..i'll be in touch..ok?
rose: ok...

Precap: Karan~Diya are shocked about the marriage proposal, a new twist comes up for Anjali, and Marriyam chooses a new life partner for herself, meanwhile Sohan and Tuhina find love in each other.

Howz dat, ppl?
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sia_lovely

nice update....... 👏

thanx😃😳

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