ArHi SS! Love, Inc. [Completed]

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blackdice1001

@blackdice1001

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#661

Everything happens before they can even get each other's phone numbers 😆

This was a delight to read, I enjoyed the family bickering of the Raizada's and the Kushi-Payal-La's chaos just as much as I did Arnav and Khushi's story together. And they both love books, how do I not love these two? :') Maybe I should pick a leaf from Khushi's book and start hanging around bookstores knocking down book stacks, my soulmate's prolly been hanging around there since forever and here I am curled up at home on IF

Thanks for the awesome read! 😃

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IamSwapnali

@IamSwapnali

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#662

I owe you an apology since I kind of posted twice before this and said I will come back to read the story and I took sooo long. But I am glad I did actually come back.

It has turned out beautifully.

I loved how you have penned Khushi's emotions aptly.. be it when she was thinking about her ex'es or when she was alone in the office, or when being happy about having spent the evening with Arnav.. one can make a connection with her instantly

And you have put rest of the story also so well, all the characters seem like people we know from real life..

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surrazdan

@surrazdan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#663

this is so amazing story... i literally laughed reading la and payal bickering for khushi...the way khushi is on cleaning mission...

seriously khushi is a certified lunatic... and trust me there were certain things which she did i felt like o shit i used to do it...

does that mean i am also luntaic...

anyways the story is amazing... brought so much smile on my face...

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#664

RB read this again today and fell in love with the story and your writing all over again!

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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#665

Beautiful SS... It felt like i was watching a 90's romantic chick flick...

Very well written ... It give a very pleasant feeling while reading it

Fell in love with it...Great job

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Nikita

@zoobie-doobie

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#666

Shit! That was such an adorable little story. Loved every bit of it! And i absolutely loved your style of writing. You do comedy really well... I was literally laughing my ass of at times. The story was 'Fraking' hilarious! Loved every bit of it.
Kudos dude!

Nikita

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ayu_tripathi

@ayu_tripathi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#667

awww this was such a awesome story..truly loved it!!!😊😊😊😊

Simple, sweet and FABLOUS!!

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#668

Loved the SS

It was awesome

Fracking hahahahahah

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@addicted25

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#669

OK FIRST CHAPTER..." For three months she slept little and played whenever she wasn't working. Payal had boxed her ears when she found out that Khushi had been taking her laptop to the loo " 🤣 hit a note there sounds like me since I found Arshi FFs

Back to the point. First chapter and im hooked, but had to say the above, considering its 5am in the morning... brb

LAST CHAPTER... AAAHHH... HOW CUTE. loved the chapters and the two of them getting together eventually, oooh I would have loved to read how La and Payal met Mr Bournville eyes. La would have been so miffed. I was slightly upset how after all her cooking sbe just felll asleep and missed him in her house eating the food she made. Mind you wouldn't tnat have been REALLY embarassing for them both!

LOVED THE WHOLE STORY. THSNK YOU 👏 👏 👏

Edited by addicted25 - 11 years ago