SwaRon SS- Incomplete love|Chapter 7-Page 29|

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

jaldi jaldi updating...

loved the episode and ur writing.

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LittleBitOfAlexis

@LilBitOfAlexis

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

hey ID !!😊

nice update !!!

sharon not being selected as sixth dancer 😲 and sharon not liking rey ,that was really unexpected but i lliked the twist :)

kriya is such a sweetheart 😊 ,i was expecting swaron scene , it was very chotu but the last line was the best :D

looking foward for swaron and hope u update soon 😳

i liked the update <3

-CM

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Ria

@Ria_SwaRon

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Hey Mihika, 🤗

Firstly I apologize for not commenting on first chapter... So here I am with combined comment..😆😆

Firstly, I would say, title is awesome..Completely takes us to loveland..or I must say SwaRon land...😆😆

Chapter 1:

Phew...Thank God, Kriyam aren't a couple..Main toh darr hi gayi...

the start created a suspense..I must say...

Then, Sharon's entry...😆 Aate hi Thappad.. Whoah...!! I must say..😆 I had an impression that new college mein bechari ki ragging hogi.. But yaha toh...!!! Gosh..!!😆

Swayam's totally fida on her... Wow.. great job girl... Love at first sight...

For a second a Thought came that ye ladki Swayam ko thappad na maarle...cause she found him staring at her..😉

But Thank God aisa kuch nahi kia...😆

The way they see other is really cute.. and their each interaction makes me go awww...

And it was great to know that Sharon would give auditions for 6th dancer...

Sharon in rehearsal hall...dancing... Swayam again lost...

But Rey.. whats up with him... pata nahi kya chahta hai..!!

2nd Chapter...

I had so thought that Sharon would be selected...But, sadly Aashi was selected..

I was toh getting filmy drama thought of ReYam arguement on keeping Sharon in the dance...😆😆 LOL

But, nevertheless...It was great to see Kriya being so humble...and talking to Sharon...consoling her... I loved this part...

She even introduced her friends... Great...!!!

Soon, Sharon would be a part og the gang...

But last mein I was confused... Why is Swayam preoccupied..??😕😕

Is it because of Sharon... He didnt even shake hand...😭

And then she finds him cute... yippee... hehehe LOL..

Great story... and it keeps me glued to know what happens further...!!!

Please update soon...!!

PS: I am very well aware that while reading the comment u must be thinking that this girl has lost it.. 😆😆 She is gone mad..😆

- Ria

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bhavika

@BhaviJas

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

really a good update...will try to read more n ya whn u update 3rd part pls PM me...really impressed...

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Hey nice update again... You came up with update faster then your regular ones...so congratulations for that first of all...

Now update really knocked out my mind because I never expected that Sharon will get rejected eventually but she did get reject so it was shocker but I guess this turn makes the story different from other stories...Lets see how Aashi goes about things...

But then I liked the kriya Sharon conversation very much...everything was simple in that conversation but it was unto point and made sense in terms of where story was shown heading to...

Interesting thing here is Rey disagreed with his friends opinion and choose someone else that means there may be some differences are present between one of them and Rey so I will be looking forward as to how you explore that...

and finally Swayam seems to have left a good impact on Sharon because she is getting affected with his pressence...Swayam Sharon meet was also interesting because Swayam is lost somewhere didn't pay any attention to Sharon so one more cracking side is this that will be explored in future...

I am really hooked up to this story now...waiting for further updates...thank you for pm... liked the update very much...

Pratik...

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Rose

@--Rose--

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Awww I loved this update:-):-):-)
awesome:-):-):-)
plz cont soon... :-)

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Trouble_Magnet

@Trouble_Magnet

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Hey Mihika..

The update was great..u are doing a fab joB..😊
looking forward to the next update..:D

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

why aashi... !!!!! 😡

bt loved the krisha convo it was so refreshing... 👏👏👏

loved the way kriya n sharon talked to eachother

n sharon ka mood theek ho gaya... 😊😊😊

ohh swaron collision was super cute... 😳😳😳

p.s. hope to see sharon in the dance team soon..

p.p.s not liking rey... 🤢🤢 hope dono main jaldi se frndship ho jaye...

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Lubna

@8JSmileyFace8J

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

i wonder why Sharon din't get chosen...oh well i think kriya knows what she is saying becuz she woudln't have just said it like that...what a wierd meeting for Swaron..he was lost somewhere else and she was lost in him!!HOW CUTE!! this is leaving me curious continue soon!!!!!!!!