SwaRon SS- Incomplete love|Chapter 7-Page 29|

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Great start!! Blv me I thought dat d prsn u introduced frst ws swayam until u mentioned bout d black eyes..:p Mujhe shck lag gaya tha.. Sharon's intro ws rly nyc.. Nd wen she exclaimed My designer dress nd d slap.. Dat ws perfectly Sharonish... Swaron moment ws amzing.. Bth f dem wre cmpltly lst admiring each other...:P D dance prt ws gr8.. Lukin frwrd to d nxt prt.. Gr8 writin girl...:D

Edited by tannu_swayam - 12 years ago

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: tanha29

Well.. I cannot reveal anything now. It's up to you to read it. About tragic stories, I cannot write them, cuz even I'm very emotional.. But I cannot reveal anything as of now. 😆

Arre, PM pe tu you can tell no? Pl-heez!

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Sunil

@Suni1986

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

It was awesome update re

Starting with kriyaansh nd there love was amazing.
Diva mode sharon n she snapped at random guy was superb.

They bumped with each other swaron mesmerized by each others beauty.
Both of them looking at each other dreamingly nd don't want break the spell.
Sharon saw notice nd determined to give audition for dancer.
She rehearsing in rehearsal nd swayam watching her
He was mesmerized by her beauty nd lost himself.

Rey break their spell, sharon saw swayam n embarassed cuz she caught in act.
Lovely update

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

I didn't expect you to update so soon😆
Coming to update
I really liked the starting rey-kria part well I already thought that it was rey who said I love you to kria if it was swayam then I was all ready to kill you with my montex sharp pen..:p
Swaron first meet was adorable.The way they both looking at each other n then sharon's dance where swayam lost in the beauty of sharon was really sweet.Hope sharon will be 6th dancer of weakling team.
Looking forward to next part

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User123

@UserM123

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Awesum awesum chapter :D
Loved It...
Waiting for The Next update ...

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Trushna

@swaronland

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

beautiful update👏

swaron first meeting totally justified❤️ as swayam has gone in majnu mode already😆

sharon dancing & swayam admiring her aww

loved his reaction when rey was calling for him😆

thank god this sharon don't pretend to hate swayam unlike sharon of D3😆

hope 6th dancer will be sharon

thanks for pm & plz update soon next part after reading ur last note can't wait

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Anonymous--

@Anonymous--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

My comment for chapter 1 and the prologue

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/79923360

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rinku bathija

@rinkubathija12

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

prologue is superb..👏. i am still wondering who will be first one to realize and who will be late..???😕 and Sharon already had a boyfriend..😲 ... and about first chapter,, fantastic job done there..😃 swayam to pehli nazar mein hi fidda hogaya.. pehla nasha😆 and sharon is also impressed by stranger,, correction,, "good looking stranger"!! :P and thanks for pm.