SwaRon SS- Incomplete love|Chapter 7-Page 29|

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Incomplete love

Hey all. :D I'm back with a new SS. On SwaRon obviously.

The story revolves around these two basically. It's simple . Two people meet, fall in love with each other- One realizes this feeling too soon, while the other takes a bit more time to realize.
But sometimes, it is just too late to realize.
Now people, put on your thinking caps and answer me- Do all love stories have happy endings???
The characters, I think all of you know them better. Sharon and Swayam, two people with kind of similar ideologies who eventually fall in love.
Their notions are quite similar, both of them are interested in dance and complete each other, without even realizing it.
Realization has to happen at some point of time. Who will realize it first and who will realize it late?
Now people, I know I'm too agile when it comes to updating stories. But I'll try and update this one along with the other one soon, now that my classes will start.

Please leave your precious comments and don't forget to hit the like tab!





Index.

Chapter One

Chapter two

Chapter three and chapter four

Chapter five

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Prologue

"I'm breaking up with you Sharon." These words were still clear in her mind. How could she forget what had happened that day. Hesitantly, she dialed his number.
The past still lingered in some part of her heart.

"Happy Birthday Rahul." She said.

"Thanks Sharon. How are you?"

"I'm fine" She said suppressing her tears. "You say. What are your plans?"

"Nothing much. Ria is going to keep me busy whole day.

"Ria?"

"Oh I'm sorry. You don't know about her. Ria is my girlfriend."

"Cool" she tried not sounding too melancholy. "Have fun. Enjoy. Bye."

"Bye."

She hung him up.

"Be strong Sharon. Whatever happened was past. Forget it."She tried to act a bit normal.

" The terrible past. " she reminded herself. She tried calming herself down but tears eventually made their way out of those hazel orbs. She had to see him moving on. She had no other option. It had been six long years since that incident.

She was 18 and had just moved to a new town along with her dad. Her mom had died long ago. She only had her dad with her, who was a busy man. He kept travelling to different places for tours.

She was alone in the house, then.

"How I wish you were here mom. " She mused as a lone tear escaped her eyes.

She wiped her tears and got ready for college. It was her first day in St. Louis college. She quickly prepared a toast and ate it in a hurry, she took her keys and sped off with a hope to lead a comfortable personal and college life for the next three years.

I hope you all liked the prologue. I'll try and update chapter one soon! Do hit the like tab!😳
Edited by tanha29 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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REs m e DOne
This Is Awosm
hmm again pain starke on swaron 😭😭
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Edited by nature2 - 12 years ago
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Another SS from ur side ...,,:)
Loved the prologue ... It seems quiet interesting
Waiting for first chapter😊
Plz do try to update soon .:)
Edited by swaron_pk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*EDITED*

Ahhh I'm finally unreserving😎 This is for both the prologue and the first chapter 'coz I'm too lazy to make two long posts😛

Ok, so Sharon has had a terrible heartbreak in the past. That's interesting. I would like to see how you introduce that angle into the story in the future.

Chapter 1 was very well written. It seems Sharon and Swayam have fallen in love with each other at first sight😆Haha super cool👍🏼 I really liked the way you have penned down the chapter but it felt a bit rushed. Like u were trying to put to much into one chapter. Anways it was sweet. Looking forward to the next update!

Edited by Neeti96 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome prologue dear...loved it ❤️ ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb prologue...
Waiting for part 1...
Do continue soon!!!
Do Pm me...
Will be waiting for the update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ohk interesting concept..eager to read the first chapter..hope it wont have sad ending..thankx for the PM do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome prologue dear!!
thnx fr the PM.
Looking forward to this ss!!
But thoda confused:(
Is rahul her past or present.
Do update oon.
Love ur writing totally
Ur banner is cool!
Thanks for making it on tanha!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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New SS.Interesting update
But Can I expect fast updates as I think ur classes will start soon. :p
Waiting for next part

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