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shantanu.swayam

@shantanu.swayam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Firstly, thank you so much for the double update Mihika!
Updates were chhota, but nice.
The story progressed quite a bit, with Swayam and Sharon coming to know each other, and Sharon and Kria becoming friends.
We also got to know a bit about Sharon, and her relationship with her father.
I really liked the father-daughter conversation, very real and totally heartfelt.
Loved the way he reassured her.
The unhappiness that Sharon feels when she sees Swayam around Aashi, indicates that she's already quite attracted to him!
Really looking forward to some sort of realisation for both Swayam and Sharon.
Hoping to see them getting a little intimate in the coming updates.
Update the next part soon, and thank you for the PM. :)

P.S- I loved how you described Swayam's smile in the first update.
Best smile award should totally go to Swayam(Shantanu)! :D

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Firstly thanks for the double update.
It was awesome! !!
It was very emotional but fantastic! !
Do update soon nd ty for the pm.

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

omg!!! 😲

double update...

im so so so so happy..

itna late update kiya toh double updat banta hain 😉😉

now coming to the update

bilkul amazing tha..

loved it..

bohot emotinal bhi tha...

really well written 👏👏

fantastic job!!

please update soon

and do pm me

THANK YOU FOR THE PM 😊😊

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

That was a bit emotional one. But I guess thats how the story goes. Sharon has hidden her real self from everyone else. She needs to open up at least with her dad so that she can overcome all those bad incidents. I know a person is not in a state to decide what to do what not to. And thus they tend to hide their emotions.

I really like the way you express the entire slot. Just so beautiful. Keep the good work, Mihika.

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

mihika ---

thanks for this double treat.

itni der kyu laga dii?

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prakriti mondal

@prakriti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

i just read the whole thing... 😲
firstly the concept then first chapter and second chapter!!!
and all was completly WOW...
I loved it ❤️
Beautifully written 👏
I know I am late.. 😆
thanks for the PM dear 🤗

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

awesome... 😊 plz cont soon... 😊

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vrushan11swaron

@vrushan11swaron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

wow...this is some gr8 stuff...hope u pm me when u continue...

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priyanka/pari

@ProngsPadsMoony

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

nice update

thanx for the pm

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Mihika

@Legilimens.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#90

NOTE:

Okay people, here's an important note about this story. And maybe the last one too.. Because I have decided to discontinue this story. No specific reason as such. At this point of time, I feel I should give studies more priority than anything else.

Also, the number of likes and comments is not something that I should be proud of.

Thanks to all those who regularly liked this story and commented. I know I updated late this time. Sorry for that. I was very very busy.

The bottom line is that I am discontinuing this SS.

But not writing. You can expect many one shots from me in future. 😳

P.S I'm still writing ishq wala love and chalk and cheese (with Neeti)!

-Mihika.