ArHi SS! Escape Velocity [Completed]

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jojo21

@jojo21

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#211

3 Chapters!!! How did I miss them. So freaking good and yes dark. I applaud your ability to write this, as it's like reading a thriller/suspense novel. I really am looking forward to what you have for us next, and quite curious about the epileptic/psychic episodes Khushi is having.

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Sarah

@ifsaal044

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#212

There is so much going on here. Each character with their own weakness. This is a very mature story and needed a mature writer to execute it.

You are not allowed to abandon this or question if you should. This story needs special attention.

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#213

Khushi has visions of the crime that would take place and she is still unaware of it.. Ofcourse she won't be wanting to tell that she 'hallucinates'. Wonder what would let her know that the visions are from real life.
So the latest act took place where Arnav had been posted..

Apparently,she had seen Arnav before,as her memory says..

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SHALINI

@valeyrie

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#214

after reading this update I am genuinely more and more intrigued with the happenings in the story... kudos to you for pulling such a different story👏

for me i have the following possibilities - is Khushi hallucinating by chance OR is she getting visions from the killers mind OR does she get visions and she herself makes these visions come true; I am not sure what is the case 😕

but I am ready for the drive 😊... though the violence in the first half of the update made me cringe a lot... a fair warning to sensitive readers like me can be helpful😆

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#215

So she does have preminitions in the form of seizures! Interesting! I like the pace of the story... This is great way to display Arnav and khushi!

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kshubhangi

@kshubhangi

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#216

this ff is different n interesting

loved the bit about massage

khushi sounds freaky

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mayabhi

@mayabhi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#217

Oh my God! I know u warned us, bt I was prepared enough. Been busy with Easter celebs and got time only nw to read all the chapters. It's very thrilling. I must admit a li'l scary too. Bt I'm still gonna stick with it til the end.

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#218

I know you are going to share the details of her visions and the actually happenings along with the way they are connected, but I am wondering how can it be this close.

I like the true to life touches to add to this story...MSS's voice...prasada form the temple...discussion on topics like God/Faith/Science

The dots are showing up...connecting them will take time...waiting rather eagerly...

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#219

Hey That was an awesomely gruesome update
So Looks like khushi has Some kind of Link or connection with either the victims or the killer more than likely killer .
Would be fantastic if she was the One to help the police bring him down
God wouldn't it be freaky if the reason for the connection is the killer is
khusis Long lost twin bro , shyam would be perfect for this LOL
God there goes my crazy mind trying to analyze B4 story has barely started sorry gonna shut up now n let the story come to me
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin
N plz continue soon gotta say this story has managed to grip my interest fae the get go

Edited by YaSha0512 - 12 years ago