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LooneyLuna

@LooneyLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1101

What does one say after reading this story..?
A Brilliant, thorough and goosebump-erupting tale, perhaps.
I still can't get over all the theories, that you justified in this story..I will probably sit for days dissecting and over analysing them.
But above all I like that you let fate intervene when required! The subtly mentioned yet overpowering love?
I do not usually read this genre, yet I was hooked, except when I stopped reading late into night thinking about shadows.
Hitashi
Ps. Thanks for recommending. And writing and sharing!

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1102

So gripping..Just couldnt stop the pace at which I was reading.

Mindblowing piece of writing and shocking theory used in the plot.Brilliant.You rock just like your ID.👏

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neha

@neag

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1103

Wonderful... I always loved the story full of secrets to solve and passion in the lead...thanx for the wonderful story...loved it

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socrazy

@socrazy

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#1104

An amazingly intricate story with a gripping storyline. Throughly enjoyed all the chapters, the actors and the quick pace you have set the story.

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-devil-

@-devil-

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#1105

Bookmarked. Will read after exams ;)

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1106

That was very nice! It almost felt like I was reading a Robin Cook novel 😊 .

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khushiiXOXO

@khushiiXOXO

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#1107

oh crap! watever i had written got deleted! uufff

who wud have thot it wud be Akash?!😊 ...an m glad I waited till it was completed to read it otherwise I wud have died of curiosity...\

Besides the story wat i liked was dat it didnt drag on and neither did it dilly-dally on unwanted things just to fill up d chapters...it was just right...

call me romantic but I loved d ending where they start afresh in some obscure place ...i was so scared dat Arnav wud die..(hey this is a thriller so it cud swing anyway ..u ask then who wud catch d bad guy?..the girl,here Khushi,of course! 😊 )

btw,I tried to figure out the place they settled in..(.ya ya workings of an over zealous mind ...) ..initially I had thot Shimla but then itz too near the capital so crossed it out ...punjab?well ,near capital n m sure d airports are nearer than 200 miles... then gujarat...hmmm!! however I just ended wid somewhere in North-east as airports are difficult to get to and from Mysore it wud take 2 trains and 3 buses 😉

Edited by khushiiXOXO - 12 years ago

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GirlOfFire

@GirlOfFire

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#1108

Girl! You should start writing seriously - I mean publish these. Seriously. You have awesome imagination! This one had a distinctly Dean Koontz-ian flavour to it - along with a dash of Jeffrey Deaver.

The whole Army experimentation on human beings thing is something very much a part of North American culture, haven't read anything like that in the Indian context.

Awesome story. I didn't really care that WHO was coming in as the killer (figured that it might be Shyam initially - but I was wrong, of course). But the whole mind-meld a la Star Trek was a pretty kewl. I also thought it might be Khushi's twin or the blood transfusion she'd received had been that of a the killer (wasn't there a horror film with the hand transplant thing - with the hand of a murderer?) But that turned out to be a red-herring too! You definitely know how to keep your readers squirming on the line.

Just a superb read on a Sunday afternoon. Am seriously phangurling now!!

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perfectsmile

@perfectsmile

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#1109

Oh! That was one hell of a story! so damn good one I happened to read after a long long time in mystery genre. I fell in love with your writing style too, all that explanation about the experiments and the fellings/expressions of the characters. Oh I love it. Now I am stalking your posts for your other works.😳

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#1110

Hello,

I am back :)

I read this probably three to four weeks back, apologies for commenting this late 😳

You, you are an amazing author. This is the third work of your which I am reading and who gave you the right to be this versatile? You wrote angst so well. You gave us a chick flick and now a thriller?

I am actually very fond of this genre and when I read this one on ArHi toh phir toh sone pe suhaaga :D

This story is so unique! I mean I have never read or even heard any story which is close to this one. How do you come up with these ideas?

This story was gripping from start to the end and I love you more for venturing in to the not so explored genres on ArHi and doing an awesome job at that too :)

P.S. I know this comment is a little pheeka. But kya karu? I am leaving for my vacations in less that 12 hours. Sorry :(

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