ArHi SS! Escape Velocity [Completed]

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#1111

M, only you can, I repeat only you can do this. Again and again. Mesmerize and glue us with your varied style of writing. How is it possible for you to keep on tenterhooks every time , whether chick flick(as you call it), sci-fiction, dark; every time we are just drawn and drowned in your gripping writings.

Coming to the story, the entire plot, twists, expressions were all so unexpected. In each update, I was left to think about what, why and where. It was little funny that you have make Akash villain here and not our ever loyal Shyam 😛. I know you have used ArHi names just for the sake of familiarity for your readers with the characters, but you have redefined their chemistry(their mystery, in fact).

PS: I am lucky to have known you.

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1112

I just loved this story...little dark...somewhat mysterious...and a lot awesome...its amazing dear...I have to thank Zehra for her recommendation...

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IamSwapnali

@IamSwapnali

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#1113

Bookmarking.. will come back to read.. since you already warned that the themese are dark I cannot promise if I might be able to read the complete SS, but I will give it a shot..

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#1114

am a great fan of police procedurals and murder mysteries, but sci-fi not so much... you managed to seamlessly blend these two disparate genres... you have a real knack for keeping the suspense going... was glued to this story till the very end! what grabbed my attention was the logic permeating this story, with all the scientific theories very plausible... some of the scenes reminded me of 'criminal minds' and another one about children with special powers being experimented upon [not 'heroes' though]... the whole nature vs nurture debate was unexpected as was the revelation that it was arnav akash targetted rather than khushi... ultimately what was lost in all this was the love and trust between friends and colleagues... it's heart-rending to note that not only was arnav's and khushi's childhood lost but that their future is also not free from fear of discovery and capture...sometimes humans cross every ethical and moral line in the name of science and the greater good!

a lovely thought-provoking piece! thank you for writing it and thank you, lazyleaves for recommending it!

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cvrocks

@cvrocks

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#1115

Great story n amazingly written, This is one of the best i'd read on IF. 👏

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#1116

Wow.. One of the best stories Ive ever read.. Was on the edge of my seat reading this one.. Thank you Zehra for suggesting it..

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snehal.sharma

@snehal.sharma

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1117

Amazing story

It was wonderful

Loved it

Enjoyed reading it😊

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bhagyathara

@bhagyathara

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#1118

find the story as story of the week and started to read .its really amazing

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Aanchal15

@Aanchal15

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#1119

Enthralled by the sheer brilliance of this narrative 👏...wonderfully penned, and, the intrigue quotient made it all the more alluring.. glad that I was fortunate enough to be able to read this story...Thank you!!! 😊

P.S: Thank you Zehra, for the recommendation..am indebted 🤗