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SS88

@SS88

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Oh my God, how beautifully written. I really love how all the siblings in your story are so in tune with each other, esp the Gupta-Jhas. Khushi's pain broke my heart, but then you are Zehra, the girl who wrote destroyed. I guess Anjali has a lot of answers to give, huh?

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AbdulloveIPKKND

@AbdulloveIPKKND

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#222

OMG This was such a sad update.

I love how everything was going perfect but Khuhsi should be a little mad.

I am hoping that in the next update Khushi ask him why did he said waht he said?

I want to make Khushi get at him a little bit and than make him apologize for her.

I think that would be great.

Ending was marvellous.

I jumped with the joy and I was happy.

I still can't believe he was here.

I am so happy.

I just hope that what I wish would be true 😃

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storytellerm

@storytellerm

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

wow

now payal in action

so has she come to know that arnav was dating her chutki

did anjali came to shyam and was arnav really their

i mean wow r they really together now

eager to read next

what next

wow too excited to read more

update soon

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Divya Bharathi S

@divyaarnavsr

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

I am shedding tears n tears god. . .tat wnt help water scarcity hei na *Sobs*
Shyam indeed a very gud bro . . u knw... tat pain was quite natural. . .
payal.. thanks honey . .
Whoah. . . He s real . . nd duffer hurting her ts much n nw ths. . . Love u muahhh lastly smiling with tears ( a rare moment which actualy hapens wit me frequently ) 😛
waiting fo d nxt update

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anarshi

@anarshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#225

What is Love Without Separation*

*Title Credit: Lalit Mohan (04/02/2012) Usko bhi toh thank kareka padhi 😆

indeed credit goes toLM but you wrote wonderfull part with this titale, He is there and he is real, so nicely written...loved it..

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ArSh23

@ArSh23

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

omg that was awesome! The beginning was so sad and my heart seriously went out to Khushi! I'm so mad at Arnav for doing this to her, but looks like he really did come to London for her! I'm excited to see her reaction in the next chapter! It seemed like I was imagining Arnav around the same way Khushi was. So unexpected to see actually see him there! I seriously love Shyam in your story too. He is such a caring and protective brother. Khushi is very lucky to have him in her life! I hope his situation with Anjali is cleared soon! Can't wait to read the next part!

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#227

That was beautiful and I felt really bad for khushi, arnav needs a wack! Big time!. Thanks for the email.

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Snoowfall

@Snoowfall

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#228

it was so beautiful, such a nice brother, giving her the needed space and providing her the shoulder when she needed it. Good he called Payal.

I am glad it was not a long separation

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#229

great part
liked it very much

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#230

My goodness. I swear I was at he verge of crying when I realized the first time that khushi was imagining him. Thank goodness he was real in the end. I'm curious about how he will apologize, if he does that is.

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sonia