Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 2)

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jiji

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

congrats on new thread. love the update. thnx

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dazzlerabi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Congrats on new thread n awesome update

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bunnylovessunny

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Wow just wow!

Normally I groan when people have to make me read something that doesn't have both Arnav and Khushi in it. But you, you make me read whatever you write and with my up most interest!

I SIMPLY LOVED THIS BEAUTIFUL CHAPTER! It made my heart melt.

I want to make a small confession here. I've always had a fetish for a father-son relationship. I think it's beautiful, a relationship where not many words are used and actions speak much louder and actions express love, gratitude, responsibility, friendship and respect. My heart swells when I see a young father hold his baby boy for the very first time and my heart melts when a grown up son hugs his old father and takes him for a ride on his new bike or car. It fascinates me the relationship. I honestly, secretly would always want my child to be a boy just because I can see my husband and son together (Not that I am against girls or something, if it is a girl then I'll probably be the happiest person ever, but that's a different story!)

Now back to the story.. You made me cry, yeah cry!

Sumer and Arnav share a very delicate relationship and yet you managed to explain it with such ease and brilliance that I didn't stop to read even once! I don't wanna talk about the mother/wife, but I just want to say that Arnav and Sumer have managed to cross the level where they disliked or maybe even hated eachother and have begun afresh now. I mean the last few paragraphs speak volumes. From Arnav indirectly telling his father he loves him, to being able to talk to him without any inhibitions about how he feels, to thinking about Khushi and buaji being left alone when his father comes away with him, just because they mean a lot to his father. To worrying and panicking when his father held his heart. To being the stern, caring son to the son who gave his word without blinking an eye to make his father feel better. To him accepting his nautanki (All thanks to HIS Khushi) father! Sumer understanding his son's plight inspite of his current trauma.

How else can you describe this beautifully complicated relationship? You write magically that's all I can say.

Such chapters are a rarity and I thank you for giving me something so wonderful to read! :)

Again, BEAUTIFUL!

ps: Sorry for the super long comment! I hope it hasn't bothered you. Update fast :)

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ashw99

@ashw99

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Very emotional update...
Much needed father son conversation there was lot of to the past his mother was so cunning unbelievable, poor Arnav we can justify his behavior towards everything.
Sumer indeed is a good father though bit filmy, ofcourse he is Khushi's babuji also so impact has to be there. Arnav will realise as he has decided to stay i am happy he is not going.
You change their business to construction good for a change.
Thanks for pm, hoping Arshilicious update coming up.