Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 2)

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First to comment...

Congrats on the new thread...

That was a needed update to detail the fragile relationship between father and son...
Arnav had gone through so much... cheated by his own mother and his father abandoning him with his mother when his father knew how manipulative she is...
Poor guy has to listen to his father words which were spoken in his anger as soon as he returned to his home...'Like Mother Like Son'
Arnav did not know that he used the exact words used by his mother years back...words which hunted Sumer even today...
Arnav's words had drastic effect on Sumer and Sumer's retort had even more drastic effect on Arnav...
Coming to Arnav's hatres towards Khushi, it is understandable... he came to know about her on the day his father abandoned him... But he always thought of her as his replacement... meaning he only thought in the angle of she receiving the love and care of his father... never did he once think about her love towards his family...the moment he realizes this everything changes...
There must be a reason why Sumer brought Khushi to his home and raised her like his own... waiting for insight of Khushi's and Sumer's relationship...

Edited by sruthiif.1710 - 12 years ago
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Congrats,Miss! :)
reswa! Will read and comment by afternoon.. Dont mind! :D

edited- you are such a charm that you have given an awesome chapter which could have turned only bland conversations if not handled intelligently.. Too good!

Sujata had been a cunning,sharp,selfish woman who did quite a destruction. But the good thing is now the filmy father and angry young man are together.

Arnav s' 'that girl'! :D
Edited by Anupama. - 12 years ago
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ohh waoow...on the first page...yaayy..that feels nyc...!!!
superb update...got to know so many things about arnav and his dad relationship and also arnav's momhistory...she is a wicked woman...!!! finally arnav is not leaving...!!! one thing is not clear that why shyam leaves the wedding...that's still a mystery..!!!
cant wait to read the first ever arnav khushi face to face talk...!!! their very first encounter...!!! how it will be...!!!

superb update nd i donn think i have to tell u on your every update that u are such an awesome writer...!!!
keep writing...!!!
continue soon...!!!!
waiting eagerly now...!!!!
Edited by avantisharma - 12 years ago
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Ahm ahm first page
Beautifully described emotions and arnav's past and his father's love 4 him
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About to log off
Will read and update very soon
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Firstly congrats on new thread.
Need I say every time that the update is awesome and great?
That's a wonderful sneak peak into arnav's past and why his equation with Sumar is ruined. No wonder, with mother like sujatha, arnav as a kid has to suffer a lot and was deprived of love and affection
Glad that arnav had agreed to stay back.
Can't wait to read more and ofcourse first ever meeting, talks of our beloved couple.
Thanks for the PM dear!!!!
Edited by cool_zephyr - 12 years ago
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i just took a break and look what i found!thats a great update and nice sneak peak into what arnav and samar are and by the end the heartache was it khushi's influence:)
so the son is back for good and promised to stay on waiting to read more about how they will pair up whats with shyam whats khushi's background and all...
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Firstly congrats on the new thread. Awww poor Arnav, he has suffered so much as a child. But I loved the Dad and Son conversation, how they opened up what they have stored in their heart for years. One step forward for a positive relationship. Regarding Khusi and Arnav I m not sure if Arnav actually hates her, I think he is kind of annoyed as Khusi has been on spotlight and had his fathers love, might be wrong. But loved the update. Pls do PM me next time, I just read it as I was stalking the forum.
Adding u as buddy.

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Superb update. So know Arnav's past is all cleared up. gosh, feel bad for the poor guy, I mean your mother is supposed to be most important person in your life. Now I am just waiting for Khushi's past to be revealed.This chapter was wonderfully written, a great job done.Arnav's father's character is lovely ,too. Continue soon:)




OH and congratulations on your new thread!!!!!
Edited by aaaziiz - 12 years ago

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