Arhi OS: When With You - Page 7

Originally posted by: rati123

Such a wonderful heartfelt OS !! Thankyou for it.

Also extremely happy to know that you will be completing the other FFs. Waiting desperately for the same.

Thanks.

Originally posted by: Psychedelic

How come all your works are either results of insomnia or freak outs or something that you never consider to be good enough and they all turn out to be such masterpiecies that I cannot help but gush about them even though I'm supposed to be all serious and working on some boring spreadsheets now!?/ HOW Nafi how?!This is pure nainsafi I tell you those notes that you leave at then end and beginning of each update and in the PMs! I mean have you taken a good look at the stuff you write?!

Well enough about your nainsafi with yourself.. If there was one line in this one shot that resonated with me, that I felt captured the essence of this OS, it was this..

" like love-letters hidden in a locked drawer, a wonderful secret that only she was privy to, only she privileged to know."

It was so beautiful.. The circumstances, the upheaval in both their hearts because of it, and the love that shines through it all and not to mention that blistering passion that defines Arnav and Khushi. It was adorable, it was domestic, it was sachirine sweet and it was perfect the way they are with each other and no one else.

I fall short of words again describing how much your writing moves me.. I felt like I was intruding into their bedroom and spying on Khushi trailing her fingers on him, over that stubbourn lock of hair and Arnav pinning her down and telling her his plans and that smile and those few words that say much more than their literal meaning.

Okay I think I've written a big enough essay.. And whenever you want to freak out please feel free to PM me.. We can do it together! :D Love you Nafi.. Muah! <3

Originally posted by: aquagal

This was beautiful..

And you say you don't know what you were writing. I wish you write without any thought & plot then😉 😆

The way each action, each emotion was expressed, it was so beautiful and poetic.

He makes her feel cherished and she makes him feel sheltered and safe.

Simply beautiful😊

Originally posted by: katunkka

Oh I'm so glad you decided to stay back! Would be so saddened to not be able to read your amazing writing. Whoever convinced you to stay, my gratitude are in order. I always say a few bad people lurk around a whole lot of good ones, so I'm thankful you acknowledged the good reader and decided to stay back!

Ok now this os is so cute shows arnav fear perfectly and khushi love for him.i love how he admit to the fear of losing her to another man! That's right shows hubby around the world how to treat their lady.

Originally posted by: sruthick

Awesm OS...Lovd it...
As always beautifully writtn... :)

Originally posted by: Maddy1270

well, must say if this is the way you write when freaked out, what heights of writing you must achieve when in a calm and collected frame of mind 😛! a heart-warming os... enjoyed reading of khushi exploring a 'sleeping' arnav's body, finding similarities between his stubborn cowlick and him and of her shyness and arnav's teasing when he catches her in the act...

I'm so happy - and overwhelmingly relieved - that you liked this piece! Lol, it seems I never manage to write when I'm calm and collected, or when I actually try to - so I suppose my tendency to freak out over the slightest things comes in some use, if you like the result :)

affording enough time only to comb back every last wayward strand clear from his forehead and then to the side with copious amounts of hair-gel... is this a comment on the look barun / arnav often sported in the show, especially toward its end?

Um...yup, you caught me :P I personally don't mind Arnav with longish hair - in fact this OS was partly inspired by a pic of him with messy, long hair. The unkempt look made him look adorable :) But at times in the show, esp later on - I didn't really like how - slick and almost oily his hair used to look. Too much product, if you get what I mean :P

especially loved the parts dealing with their vulnerabilities and hidden fears... sheer beauty exuded from the lines describing the smile breaking out on khushi's face at arnav's promise to spend the extended weekend with her, and the effect that smile had on arnav... the part delineating arnav's notion that he wasn't deserving of her and she might leave him some day was also moving!

Very happy and humbled you liked it! That's what I was trying to go for - one thing I love about this couple is how, no matter how invincible they try to appear to the rest of the world (in their different ways) they are still as vulnerable as they were when they were younger, still have the insecurities they had since losing their parents - and what makes their story beautiful is how they help each other overcome these weaknesses and complete each other. So the fact that you saw that and liked it makes me more confident that I wasn't entirely shooting in the dark :P Thank you again for always writing such honest, in-depth comments! They make my day every time :)

hope you'll have an enjoyable time of taking the first steps into the world of independence... hopefully the bouts of panic and going berserk will lessen as you gain the confidence and the self-assurance to face whatever life has in store for you... here's wishing you all the best!

Thank you for the advice :) I really hope that time will help me overcome my own fears and insecurities...it's very sweet of you to encourage me :)

Originally posted by: droopy-asleep

Your writings are hauntingly poignant and that's what makes them special😃😳

Amazingly written and felt so real😳

Thanks for the pm😊

Originally posted by: srat

Nice, I love how you wrote about how both of them truly appreciating each other,

Arnav appreciates each and every little thing she does for him..knows how angry he gets and how she bears the brunt of it.

Khushi loves his disehelleved look.. (who doesn't ;- } ) it was adorbale how unknowingly she was seducing him while she thought him to be asleep..

Good luck with your move