Smitar's OS 2:Finding Khushi#2Part13(1)Pg132(23/3) - Page 39

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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh MY God!!! I just fell in love with Arnav and Khushi all over regain...

Smita you write so well the I can actually see all the scenes in front of my eyes.. The imagination takes over with your words ...

Thank you Rashmi for the PMs... they are always on time and make my day...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ofcourse she doesn't want to be free of you my pal!! But, GO KHUSHI!! GO GIRL!! YOU ROCK!! Well said! Give him more!!

But tsk tsk, Arnav Singh Raizada
's touch seems mush stronger than her words! The atta scene was awesome! :D

AWESOME UPDATE! AGAIN!! Loved it! :D
waiting!!!! :D eagerly :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Things are getting serious, Khushi finally said what she needed to and it all got too serious but thanks for Master Atta it's okay!

The family are so gonna get the hint
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update as always!!!!!!!!😃😃

waiting for the next update!!!!!
what is kushi's answer to Arnav's question????
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: karankarankaran

Hi Smita, I am not able to see the update. I don't have the blog link also. Please send me😭



Here is the link to the update. Part 11 Section1


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Posted: 12 years ago
ayeee hayeee what a last line, combined with his husky voice. i can only imagine the affect it will be having on khushi. but the question remains that would she be effected enough to speak the truth?
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Posted: 12 years ago
At last, I have found the time to read this new OS, Smita and Rulama.

And as ever, it is so good. I love the spirted and dignified Khushi.

Well, one can't help feeling sorry for ASR, despite his being a donkey.

Actually, I am annoyed with his behaviour and I was hoping he would get something other than atta on him, and that too not on his head, just on his clothes.

I so, so wish it were a big belan, this is what he deserves if not for his bad behaviour with Khushi 😡, but for not even realising how nasty he's been and to make things worse, his cockiness about the attraction they have for each other.

Well, he has a belan aimed at his head in the form of a dignified Khushi. Serves him right!😆
Edited by Japonica - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the part. Loved the storeroom scene. They both cannot deny their feelings for each other. Waiting to see how you take this story forward.
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was TOO good. Fantastic. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
an amazing update... khushi making arnav aware of a few home truths, using the very same cutting words he had used to hurt her, had me dancing a jig! "I am not your girl friend or your wife that I have to take your permission before I talk to another man or laugh at his jokes. Or worry that you might be hurt by my actions. I am free of you." 👏 the very best dig at him, by far! arnav didn't like khushi speaking of her or him being free, one iota! kudos to her to standing up to him and acting indifferent when, in actual fact, she desires him too... she doesn't want to give him the power to hurt her again!
their kiss was touching... there was an underlying sense of yearning, even... loved this beautiful turn of phrase: A small bin with atta had overturned and blessed both of them. They stood looking at each other, atta rising around them like a halo, the dim light giving the scene a dream-like appearance... rabba ve, the ever-present breeze, moonlight, etc. have given way to the magic of an atta cloud 😆! interesting to note how ordinary objects of everyday use, like water and atta, become catalysts to their romancing... khushi and arnav removing traces of atta from each other was cute yet moving, too... trust arnav to grab even the smallest opportunity to touch khushi, knowing full well the effect it has on her... "Do you really want to be free of me, Khushi?", he asked softly. a very pertinent question, mr. raizada... wonder what ms. gupta's reply will be!
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