Dreamgirl!! KR // SS (OS) Part 1 updated

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

aiggaa..

kinnna cute hai..

so sweet and cute...

ekdum serial types kahani... rey lost ...

awww...

awesome job...

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Pinkpearly

@Pinkpearly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

wow superb awsum start
Luv d update

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Pinkpearly

@Pinkpearly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

wow superb awsum start
Luv d update
Eagerly waiting for next part

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

awesomee start👏

loved ittt😃

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Oh woww
another treat from u deetha
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Awesome start..

Loved it...loving that its filmy

haha "Moti"..that was seriously amazing...

Gosh...rey toh gaya...total fida on first day itself...

Beautifully written

Cont soon

Thanks for the pm

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

****UNRES****
vesey mujey abhi unres nahi karna tha
lekin os read karney k baad i was like kar he doo
or apney dhamki b to di thi na to mujey marna nahi tha to comment doing
jab apney filmy bola main tabhi samaz gyi thi ki app kuj jhol jhaal krogi
maney dono he read kar liye
side by side baat kroo dono ki
nahi rehney do
but maney wo moti wali line read
i thought starting mey he pregnant 😲to dream girl ka kya fanda hey hahah 🤣
ok then i realise ki wo LP kar rhey hey kriya/sharon ki
then wo chain walal hahneha k bina viky nahi viky bina nil and so on matlab sab ek doosrey sey chipky huye hye hey
then ragging hahaha
that was fun
do girl flower deni ayi
lekin wo hey hi itna hand some to koi kya krey
after that bengals
dupatta full to filmy ilove this
hww dupatta hi kheench liye
very bad
or badley mey attitude hahah
rey / swayyam to gya kaam sey
ok ho gya chotu sa part tha
itney mey itna hi milega
next part soon
luv u di
AROMA_RUBHARU😉

Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago

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Nishtha

@Jade_Precious

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

second love n tu ashiqi hai toh update krna nhi hota tne
u want ur to give badhe wale comments :-/
main es story par comment nhi karungi :-P

i want to read second love :-(

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Pia

@-Pia-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

super se upar os

hawa tight wali os

loved it

mujhe ne salwar selection bade achi lagi,good choice

kriyansh

rey toh already fida ,my god

swayum sharon-cute

continue soon

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Akanksha

@Effacious

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

aawww...

this was such a cute cute wala update... 😳

ekdum... ishq wala love types...

btw.. Swaron r a couple in this kya..??? .. i guess yes...

and..der final year... dey raggin all the juniors...

and then suddenly... tadaaa...

here comes The Kria Ghai... 😃

and Rey as usual back to his dreamy dreamy avatar... 😆

and in d end whn Swayam said.. "Beta tu toh gaya" ... i ws like... 😆

loved it..

lovely...!!!

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magical_mania

@magical_mania

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

I like it Deethu
Its new n filmy 😉 just like u 😆
I liked that dress peice
Kria's entry was really good
N Rey ek din mein lattoo hoing
awww... such a sweet start
Update soon
Me waiting 😃