Dreamgirl!! KR // SS (OS) Part 1 updated

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pallavi.14

@pallavi.14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

nice start... aisa laga ki koi bollywood romantic flick dekh rahi hun..

mast ek dum... and loved rey's expressions on seeing kriya...

looouuuvvv at first sight ahaan...

continue soon..
thanks fr pm...

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ArYa/Ash

@Arya.100

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

waiting deeths di updatooo ab... too

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Yogini

@yogini64

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Awww... lovely 😃

hehehe... swayam bhi kitne maze leta h sharon ke..😆

kriya in indian... cute lagti h na 😊

aate hi rey k hosh udda diye

ab to gf bana hi lega khud hi...😛

team ko force bhi nhi karna padega ...😆

n her cute angry pout...☺️

she looks so adorable ... 😉

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Sunil

@Suni1986

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Hey i read both version nd they r awesome
but i specially like swaron version which unlike d3
sharon in dupatta was amazing yaar nd swayam ragging others
lovely

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raina

@--RAINA--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

awsome
lykd 1st part
update soon nxt 1

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Puja

@puja_arsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Mast OS hai...
Luvd d concept...

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

first of all i really want to ask that it is os... and the ans is yes then pls shift it to ss/ff... pls deetha...

personally i really love part 1... its sweet, cute and lovely story... i want to read more and more of it... how can u end it so soon.. i know u have many stories to deal with... but pls dnt end this story so soon... i know u will update part 2 of this os... but i want more parts of this story...

pls if u can then dnt end it soon...

awesome and lovely os and i love both the version... kriyaansh and as well as swaron too...

pls update soon.. and i hope u will think about continuing it more...*baby face*

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Soha

@-Soha-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

OH MY GOD!😲😊

Deetha you are amazing.😊😉

Kriya giving attitude but Rey founding it cute.😊

Sooo nic!👏

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Cute.. Nah.. Super cute??? Naahh.. Super duper cute 😳

I loved it.. Such a cute n innocent update jus lik Kriyaansh ❤️

hmm.. Reyaansh.. I hope.. U now wht Dreamingg isss 😛 😛

Ahhh.. I cud visualise it all.. Reyaansh following kriya.. Her dupatta in hs hands.. She makin an "O" face.. Reyaansh starin at ht dreamingly.. Kriya's angry pout.. Thn rubbing her nose n walkin away.. N Swayam sayin tu toh gya 😆 😆 Awwieee.. M jumping.. 😃 😳 😆

Thankgod u mentioned dat d characters aint same as d3.. I ws thinkin Kriya toh gyi.. Wearin a salwaar.. Sharon wud neva leave hr ! Nothing such happnd.. Hahaha :)

Update soon !
Waiting eagerly !!

N plz update,Second Love too.. N baatcutter b.. Dying to read dem