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Deetha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello people!! I think this OS will be one of the OS'closest to my heart!! Because it is totally filmy the way I like!! Hope you people are not bored ..

and I am very happy because this is the first work I am writing on swaron myself without any request!!

I think people will like it *fingers crossed*

For KR fans!!! Oye my palton !! I think this OS brings a big smile on your faces!!! lambe comments dena warna tum logon ki khair nahi!!!

PS: naam ki hissab se handle karoongi sabko sochlena 😆

For my new "Swaron wala friends" 🤣 hope you people will like my work!! and would love to read your views about it!!

For all.. criticism or praises all are welcomed.. except rotten eggs please.. it smells too bad 😛

INDEX:

KriYaansh

Part 1 ---> Scroll down---> 1st post

Swaron

Part 1---> Scrolldown---> 2nd post

Edited by deetha - 12 years ago

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

P a r t -- 1

My Dreamgirl !

* Rey's POV*

"Rey tum hi bolo mai moti hogayi hun kya??"sharon bugged me again!!!

I gave a I-am-gonna-kill-you look to swayam!! All because of him she was bugging me from the last 30 minutes

"No Angel u r soo pretty and perfect " I said finally holding her shoulders and looking at her with a genuine smile.. she smiled wide

I smiled at her cuteness... I can never understand why swayam always teases her... and yeah I did the same!!

As usual I signalled him to come aside and asked

"Tu hamesha use tang kyun karta hai??? "I asked

"arey she looks too cute when she is irritated isiliye"swayam said dreamily

"what??"was my instant reaction...

"weird"he gave an awkward smile as I gave him a u-are-mad look

"hmm aur kitna time wait karna padega "I asked irritated... where the hell is Neha!!??? we should get going to class...but without Neha Vicky won't move... and without vicky nil won't move... and this chain continues ...

"yaar finaly year ki pehla din hai aur mai late nahi hona chahta"I said irritated...

"hum bhi nahi hona chahte .. neha aati hi hogi"vicky said ..I can't say anything now!!!

but to our extreme luck we got to know that our first class was cancelled... time for some fun *wink*

"guys!! hum free hai toh kyun na use utilise kare??"I asked my best buddies and as expected all winked and we went to our usual spot ... standing at a corner of the stairs we are waiting for some serious fun!!

and what else can we expect ... nil vicky bharat and amar were already ragging two boys along with the girls !! I was having the time of my life laughing and enjoying .. ..

"Reyaansh!!"I heard someone calling...my whole team stopped and looked at me.. these people are heights ... ladki dikhi nahi meri gf banane ki koshish shuru ...I sighed and looked back!!

and as expected they were two of my juniors standing before me with that dreamy look on their face and holding a red rose each!!

God where should I hide myself!! ??? with no option I smiled at them but it was my biggest mistake

they went into dreamy mode..seriously I really wonder why and how do people dream about someone... and get lost in them... I sighed.. I just took the roses and smiled...they left soo excited as if they got their favourite toy!!

"ummm!!!!" my whole gang started teasing me...fir se nautanki shuru!!!

"guys can we resume??" I said eyeing at the poor juniors waiting there feared

and once again we got into our work but something caught my attention... wait !!! whats it??? I closed my eyes to concentrate more.!!!

some faint sound... ahh!!! bangles??? wo bhi college mei?? I am literally shocked to core and turned back to see who it was!! F**k !! did I just see a girl in salwar???

A/N: no character in this OS is same as in the show!!! so don't be surprised!!

but yeah she looked angelic..i went on my toes to see her face and guess what?? I am caught..but I couldn't just ignore ... I have to see her... she has a beautiful curly bouncy light brown hair a bit longer than the shoulder length!!she was clutching her friends hand tight and walking away!! aahh!! now I got it.. she must be fearing of getting ragged!!Isn't that a awesome Idea to see her?? yeah!! so why to wait??

"Hey you!!"I called her ... her friend looked back as she stopped..but didn't look back...

"Me??"her friend asked

"No !! your friend"I said indicating with my finger

"umm...Reyaansh Singhania khud ek ladki ko bula raha hai!!! wah beta!!"swayam whispered in my ears and in response everyone giggled as if knowing what swayam had said!!!

but right now my total mind is struck on her don't know why!!

"Hey you!! come here!! aur apna Introduction do!!"I said to her... but she started walking after a small pause...I frowned!! no girl ... infact none disrespected my words... they always followed and this girl??

"Oh hello!! sunayi nahi deta ??"I said ...but she started climbing the stairs fast!! and without knowing myself I went behind her... and by mistake caught her dupatta which was flowing in the air...and as she was running it came totally into my hand...and next what?? her sudden halt!!!

I gulped slightly!! I never made anyone feel embarassed and now ...what have I done..I was about to apologize when I saw her turn... as she turn her hair bounced from one side to another...and finally she turned towards me!!! making a "O "shaped mouth!!

But soon it turned into a childish angry pout!! Gosh she is too cute!! angelic!!! I blinked my eyes dreamily!! dreamily??? is this called dreaming??? then yeah its freaking awesome feeling!! on seeing her pout I smiled !!!FOOL!! I scolded myself but this stupid smile failed to fade!!! seeing me smile she frowned...looked narrowly at me!! and stepped down!! close to me...finally she came to the step I am standing and the glared at me..but dnt know why I found that very cute too!!!

She pulled her dupatta from my hands swiftly glaring at me continuously and rubbed her nose once out giving attitude to me and went away!! leaving me.. shocked??? nah...pleased...!! I am suprised for this reason now!!!she gave attitude to me but I found her cute??

"gaya beta tu toh!!!"swayam whispered silently from back...

"what?? aisa kuch nahi hai "I said... mujhe kya hua??? huh!!!

🥱thats it for today!! really sleepy !! so divided the OS into two parts!!
do leave your comments!! will be glad to read it!!!

enjoy!! have a nice day!!
-deetha😳

Edited by deetha - 12 years ago

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

P a r t -- 1

My Dreamgirl !

* Swayam's POV*

"Swayam tum hi bolo mai moti hogayi hun kya??" kriya bugged me again!!!

i gave a I-am-gonna-kill-you look to Rey !! All because of him she was bugging me from the last 30 minutes

"No Angel u r soo pretty and perfect "I said finally holding her shoulders and looking at her with a genuine smile.. she smiled wide

I smiled at her cuteness... I can never understand why Rey always teases her... and yeah I did the same!!

As usual I signalled him to come aside and asked

"Tu hamesha use tang kyun karta hai??? "I asked

"arey she looks too cute when she is irritated isiliye" Rey said dreamily

"what??"was my instant reaction...

"weird"he gave an awkward smile as I gave him a u-are-mad look

"hmm aur kitna time wait karna padega "I asked irritated... where the hell is neha!!??? we should get going to class...but without neha vicky won't move... and without vicky nil won't move... and this chain continues ...

"yaar finaly year ki pehla din hai aur mai late nahi hona chahta"I said irritated...

"hum bhi nahi hona chahte .. neha aati hi hogi"vicky said ..I can't say anything now!!!

but to our extreme luck we got to know that our first class was cancelled... time for some fun *wink*

"guys!! hum free hai toh kyun na use utilise kare??"I asked my best buddies and as expected all winked and we went to our usual spot ... standing at a corner of the stairs we are waiting for some serious fun!!

and what else can we expect ... nil vicky bharat and amar were already ragging two boys along with the girls !! I was having the time of my life laughing and enjoying .. ..

"Swayam!!"I heard someone calling...my whole team stopped and looked at me.. these people are heights ... ladki dikhi nahi meri gf banane ki koshish shuru ...I sighed and looked back!!

and as expected they were two of my juniors standing before me with that dreamy look on their face and holding a red rose each!!

God where should I hide myself!! ??? with no option I smiled at them but it was my biggest mistake

they went into dreamy mode..seriously I really wonder why and how do people dream about someone... and get lost in them... I sighed..I just took the roses and smiled...they left soo excited as if they got their favourite toy!!

"ummm!!!!" my whole gang started teasing me...fir se nautanki shuru!!!

"guys can we resume??" I said eyeing at the poor juniors waiting there feared

and once again we got into our work but something caught my attention... wait !!! whats it??? I closed my eyes to concentrate more.!!!

some faint sound... ahh!!! bangles??? wo bhi college mei?? I am literally shocked to core and turned back to see who it was!! F**k !! did I just see a girl in salwar???

A/N: no character in this OS is same as in the show!!! so don't be surprised!!

but yeah she looked angelic..I went on my toes to see her face and guess what?? I am caught..but I couldn't just ignore ... I have to see her... she has a beautiful curly bouncy light brown hair a bit longer than the shoulder length!!she was clutching her friends hand tight and walking away!! aahh!! now I got it.. she must be fearing of getting ragged!!Isn't that a awesome Idea to see her?? yeah!! so why to wait??

"Hey you!!"I called her ... her friend looked back as she stopped..but didn't look back...

"Me??"her friend asked

"No !! your friend"I said indicating with my finger

"umm...Swayam Shekhawat khud ek ladki ko bula raha hai!!! wah beta!!" Rey whispered in my ears and in response everyone giggled as if knowing what Rey had said!!!

but right now my total mind is struck on her don't know why!!

"Hey you!! come here!! aur apna Introduction do!!"I said to her... but she started walking after a small pause...I frowned!! no girl ... infact none disrespected my words... they always followed and this girl??

"Oh hello!! sunayi nahi deta ??"I said ...but she started climbing the stairs fast!! and without knowing myself I went behind her... and by mistake caught her dupatta which was flowing in the air...and as she was running it came totally into my hand...and next what?? her sudden halt!!!

I gulped slightly!! I never made anyone feel embarassed and now ...what have I done..I was about to apologize when I saw her turn... as she turned her hair bounced from one side to another...and finally she turned towards me!!! making a "O "shaped mouth!!

But soon it turned into a childish angry pout!! Gosh she is too cute!! Angelic!!! I blinked my eyes dreamily!! dreamily??? is this called dreaming??? then yeah its freaking awesome feeling!! on seeing her pout I smiled !!!FOOL!! i scolded myself but this stupid smile failed to fade!!! seeing me smile she frowned...looked narrowly at me!! and stepped down!! close to me...finally she came to the step I am standing and the glared at me..but don't know why I found that very cute too!!!

She pulled her dupatta from my hands swiftly glaring at me continuously and rubbed her nose once out giving attitude to me and went away!! leaving me.. shocked??? nah...pleased...!! I am suprised for this reason now!!!she gave attitude to me but I found her cute??

"gaya beta tu toh!!!"Rey whispered silently from back...

"what?? aisa kuch nahi hai "I said... mujhe kya hua??? huh!!!

🥱thats it for today!! really sleepy !! so divided the OS into two parts!!
do leave your comments!! will be glad to read it!!!

enjoy!! have a nice day!!
-deetha😳

Edited by deetha - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

Its a treat..
Its a treat..
Wow awsm start..
Swayam in dream mode of a new girl..
Now it is nt hard to imagine sharon in salwar suit as we have already seen her in show... So it is more intrestng to imagine sharon
Waiting for nxt part..