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amaypranay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#771

Looking forward to reading this...RB...

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sammymas

@sammymas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#772

Thanks for sharing this beautiful story with so many morals.

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Sarita Kaur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#773

This story is beyond wonderful
Some chapters made me cry that's how much i felt it because of the way you wrote it
Your writing has a different finess to it which just makes me want to read on and on

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Cherylann

@tvpal007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#774

I was supposed to be reading the cult..somehow read this one again.

And remembered why I loved it some much👍🏼

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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#775

I was up till 7 in the morning reading this
Thankfully no work tomorrow
This was spell binding
You managed to convey the despair, the grief, the pain and lastly the contentment and happiness so well and flawlessly
Well done
You made me cry a lot too by the way
Loved it
Awesome...!!!!

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vaish912

@vaish912

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Posted: 12 years ago

#776

That was mind blowing ff ..loved it ..the best thing which came through this ff is the positivity of each n every character n their strong will to survive .. It was depressing yet at the same time very positive n full of life ... What I did not like though was there was very less space given to both Arnav n Khushi both of them together .. Not in negative way I wish u could have extended this ff ,some hw given us red ears some more chance to see them together more before closing it .. But I guess this demand to see them together is never ending ... It was marvellous n beautiful n poignant journey ... I came across this ff yesterday n since them was hooked to it ..

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msmarple

@msmarple

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Posted: 12 years ago

#777

I had lost sight of this story for some time now and rediscovered it today. Read it all in one go.

After al the turbulence and upheaval it ended at a very calm and peaceful note.

Loved it!

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#778

Angst isn't a genre that i lok forward to reading yet this one didn't make me give up on it just because it had a genre that I don't lean towards. Once I started reading it I was pulled into it.

The whole story was very well etched with each character holding their ground and remaining in my mind. The past being the major hurdle with sub plots concernign Anjali and all other character also was extremely interesting and had me riveted to the story right till the end.

There were some places where I felt that Arnav didn't deserve all the heartbreak and that it would be better for him to go away from everything that surrounded him permanently. But then the realisation that Khushi was indeed a vital part of him was a pivotal point bringing the story to a perfect closing.

Loved reading this one

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riha5002

@riha5002

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#779

Loved your FF, read the whole thing in a couple of sittings !! Very intense ,brooding and realistic FF I would say but well written.

I felt Arnav's letter was the best part of the FF. You articulated all the feelings so well that I had copy a chunk and post it again !

It is stupid to believe that pain makes one stronger. No, it breaks a person down more and more and they get disintegrated with passing time. And then one would arrive at a point where there is nothing else to lose, nothing else to believe in and there is definitely no one to trust. What would one do then? Does one escape from everything familiar till they try to reinvent themselves in a distant land? Or they would prefer solace in some other world?

Only someone in the depths would know this..so hope you have an active imagination and this did not come from personal experience.

Anyway keep writing and kudos on a great job writing this FF.

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madmaxine

@madmaxine

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#780

Read it in one go- many thanks to Twiggy for the recommendation.

Very nice read. Enjoyed your characters- all human and with an infinite capacity for humanity. Forgiveness comes, it must. We all have an intrinsic need to love and be loved. And that is amply demonstrated by this story. You can run, hide, despair, self-flagellate, burn, hurt, weep, and withdraw- but - dil hai ke maanta nahin! Love wins. Thank you for making it win and for writing this. I could tell it was heartfelt. Some chapters were absolutely brilliant. The one that resonated the most with me was when Arnav is sitting at Man Sarovar looking at the mountains. I have to say- when I look upon a spectacular visage like that and I sit there for a few hours just drinking it all in- I have contemplated giving it all up for a life of nothing and everything. But then again- dil hai ki maanta nahin. 😊

One comment- have you considered (or do you already have) a beta reader? You might think about getting one. You write too well for typos and minor grammar bugs to mess with the reading pleasure of the people who enjoy your work. Just a friendly suggestion.

All in all, I really enjoyed it and I will be seeking out more of your work to read.

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