ArHi FF! Gravity - Thread 2 - [Completed]

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ravalisharma06

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Posted: 11 years ago

#791

wow...dat was super awesome ff

beautifully written!!

loved it

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#792

read this in one go...the level of writing in this ff is like..out of this world...omg...the references..the language..makes the words ahve tenfold impact..loved this work..

this is one of the most unique and layered works on Arshi...u are a brilliant writer..loved the story...

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Arshi1195

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Posted: 11 years ago

#793

This is such a beautiful story!

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Sarita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#794

I stumbled across this FF and really could not put it down.
After hours upon hours of reading... finally I have come to the end.
It was amazing!!!

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@addicted25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#795

RB, WOW read it from start to finish, what a lovely story.

Its funny cos I had a thought a few months ago that Arnav and Khushi could have been related or met somehow given that the both lived in Lucknow. I know lucknow is not exactly small but having met people from my past at a distant relations function made me think again...its a small world. Getting bsck to the story.

Totally original, Arnav normally a calm person... ? Khushi a civil engineer... Aman royal?. Loved La and was annoyed with Payal in the first few chapters as she blamed Khushi.. talking of best and worst bits the worst bit was when Payal saw Khushi the first time, my gut wrenched knowing that these two should never be like that. The relationship between Payal and Khushi is sacred...I hate a bad Payal avatar.. the best has to be the penultimate chapter "hello love"... ahh a sucker for a happy ending between these two. Cant help it, but then your last chapter had him on the kitchen floor with Khushi cooking, resembling to a point her own parents relationship... cant decide. ? Probably the former.

Anyway THANK YOU for you FAB story. Truely loved it.ps your last chapter had 289 likes, never feel as though we readers dont appreciate your writing. We do. Muuwh. 👏 👏 👏

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Reveur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#796

Wow. That was pretty . . . . dense. I once read an FF in which the suave businessman Arnav was questioned for his sanity regarding unchecked blaming of Khushi for the Khushi-Shyam matter. It was like, no one could guess what was going inside him and why.

I don't know why, but I seemed to be in similar dense mindset while traveling through the story you weaved so lyrically. This FF almost seems like a poetry rather than prose. I wouldn't judge the verity of the sequence, and I don't know if what followed what was exactly sane, but there is something called poetic land. Out above all the stories and concepts, I found you there. And that poetic land gives a lot of calm. Thank you for the gift.

And congratulations.

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sadhnasoumya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#797

Finally they got together
Very different from other stories

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mrignayani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#798

You write so well that I never wanted the story to end. Totally worth the four hours I spent in reading this. Hope to read more of your work soon!

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arpitasharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#799

By now you might have realized that I am digging out all your works and ravishing them to my satisfaction!

Gravity was different when compared to the rest of your work. There were characters with impulsive tendencies and probably that was an aspect that drove the story on the edge.

Lavanya turns out to be my most favourite character. She is driven, emotional, flawed, friendly, determined and has copious amounts of realism built in her as she matures over the years. I particularly loved 'Chapter 18: Little bit of Frost and a lone spark' that brings out so beautifully the part of her that rationalizes and then acts and yet feels those human emotions of hurt and unbeknownst feeling of betrayal.

I somehow did not find myself very adaptive to Anjali's behaviour. She is said to have trained in psychology. Pertaining to that fact, I felt confused at her mood swings whenever she got into conversation with Arnav. It was either unpalatable anger or unflattering inclination to cry at the end of it. I recognize the fact that she had been going through too much but for some reason, her control on her emotions amounted to very less than I would've expected. I don't know if that was intended or I missed out on something in my reading.

I absolutely loved the chapters towards the end where you bring across Arnav in a different light altogether. I somehow lost my patience with Khushi at some points in the story, but as far as the characterization goes, I believe those were necessities of the moment. The last chapter was sketched intrinsically with such simplicity, I had to read through it once again just to fill my heart with your writing.

I thoroughly relished and enjoyed every part of gravity and all thanks to you, we could get to read yet another angst-filled story.

Edited by arpitasharma - 10 years ago