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Posted: 12 years ago
Read your story in one go. I was reading kalyani's ff she recommended this. It was an emotional journey through all characters . Loved how you portraited each character and the turmoil and conflict of emotions each went. It was a nice story all conflicts of emotions was written well and we could feel the emotions . The title was apt gravity the force between arnav and khushi.Thank you
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gravity is one of the best FF till now I have read in IF...nice sketch of human characters..top of all mother nature is present with her children in every crucial turn of this story..Be it in rough Africa or calming Kailash...Hats off to you for this brilliant piece of work..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Beautifully written FF!

The characterisations,protrayal,everything was So brilliantly done.I think this is one of most complex yet superb piece of writing I read.
You stayed true to title.👏

I am happy each character found their happiness at the end.:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
This has GOT to be one one of the best FFs on Arhi that I have read. While I enjoy they standard "He gave her his ASR look while she irritated him...he hates her because he loves her" FF/SS/OS, your FF truly explored Arhi in a way that I would have never imagined-each of the characters have so much depth to them, their coping mechanisms reflecting their personalities. Their raw pain just there to be seen by all-you truly have AMAZING talent-not only was the piece well written, but thoroughly moving. The exploration of characters, their reactions, their life, their desires, their fears and hopes was needless to say, fulfilling. I know that I'm going to keep coming back to this FF time and time and again, because, in the same way that you helped Arnav and Khushi find each other, you've helped me find a part of myself. Thank you for penning such an amazing piece of writing. I can truly say that in the hour and a half that I was reading this, I felt as though I was standing alongside them and feeling their every emotion-it takes talent to do that!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Started reading Gravity today after Kalyani's recco. Must say, she was so right! The angst genre is unique, depressing, but extremely complex emotionally. Arnav's pov is particularly layere. The last chapter was too precipitate & simplistic given all the complexities hinted at befor, but still enjoyed the overall experience of Readin!
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Posted: 12 years ago
So I read this story from beginning to end this morning. I have to prepare a presentation for clients tomorrow and I haven't even started it yet 😲

Let me tell you what I loved about this story. IPKKND was all about the decisions Arnav made and how they impacted everybody. Your story has Arnav twisting and turning on the wind of decisions Khushi makes for them. It's a complete turnaround.

Secondly I love the ebb and flow of the pace. It's smooth, very smooth and I think i've mentioned this before as well.

Thirdly, the characterisations were all beautiful. I've always disliked the character of Anjali in IPKKND ( sorry if I hurt people's feelings for saying so, but I never liked her.) and in this story I also get a hint of that same feeling of a clinging person, who refuses to let go.

The only thing that I didn't get was khushi's dislike towards Shyam. Was it an extension of what she felt for Anjali? Or was there something more there?

This story is heavily based on characterizations and it's difficult to set a pace for such stories and not get mired down by analysis and non-action. Yet you manage to beautifully retain the grip on the story thru and thru.

Bottom line. A very beautiful read.
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Posted: 12 years ago
This fic is sooo beautiful! You're a beautiful writer and twiddling with words is so your forte. I suddenly have this calm feeling now after reading it whole...like a feeling that one gets when you achieve something. <33

-V
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful work dude. No words. Simply no words.

It was a bit disturbing, it was a bit lagging at times, but one thing I give you credit for is, you were talking truth through the story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Started reading this story as it was recommended...and loved it
The characters were so close to real life...it was full of emotions and loved your style of writing the few chapters from the perpective and flashbacks of the characters...
will read your other works too...soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love this story especially the characters. Do you know why? Because nobody is perfect in this
And one day you can become another Agatha Christie

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