ArHi FF! Gravity - Thread 2 - [Completed] - Page 76

All is well and happy in their land...

Hello RB,
You would not know me but I read your FF in one go yesterday.
I am saying this from the bottom of my heart. It is the best FF I have ever read on IF. Period.

The beautiful language, the characterization, the depth of emotions, the intensity, all of it is beyond words. I can very well fathom what it must have taken out of you to write something like this and that too you seem to have updated so regularly. 👏

I am not big on vocab or analogies. I can only tell you what I felt while reading it.

The character of Arnav is marvelous. I have often observed around me that when people have a troubled past, their troubles tend to get only exemplified over time. It is hard for such people to find peace in their lives and they struggle even to differentiate between rights and wrongs. The sensitivity of the man to have overcome his childhood and a sister like Anjali to shoulder someone who is a self-obsessed martyr like Khushi takes a lot. Not once did he think of his own life. Seven years is a long time to wait for anyone. It is the number of years when one can be declared legally dead I believe. Still he waited with hope in his heart. He did not think of ending his life or walking away from his responsibilities. Although every damned day must have been a torture. It is all portrayed so wonderfully. I cannot tell you how much I loved his characterization. Take a bow lady, you rock ! Pun completely intended. 😃. Although I never knew Barbies were into rock or any sort of metal. They are too plastic no?

For Arnav alone I read the entire story.

Of course Lavanya is a great character too. Her class and elegance. The way of handling things life had thrown her way without compromising on what her heart told her to do, despite not getting the guy in end and managing to walk away with a smile. Seriously awesome. She is inspirational.

The other characters for me were so so. I would have liked Arnav to end up with Lavanya.

What is the use of being in a relationship where the only thing is 'gravity'? Gravity also ends in a centrifugal force, isn't it? Arnav is the Sun, the star. Whereas Khushi is the cratered moon that only manages to revolve around him whilst rotating on her own axis. If she would come too near him she would be sucked into him.

Ok may be I am mixing up all the different concepts of bare smattering of physics that I know. Hope I have not defied some laws while doing so. 😃

A very long story short, loved this piece. The pearls of wisdom in it are priceless.

----- Sheesh

Finally the wait is over- both hurt souls goth their happy ending. Thanks for writing this beautiful ff.

😲 i am late ... you finished it already ...

Read all in a go!!

I was hesitant starting this story fearing it would be angsty and draining (emotionally for me). But finally I couldn't keep away and started since yesterday and finished it today.

I thoroughly enjoyed the experience. Just like😃 We the people, I found it intellectually stimulating!
At times I wished you would avoid the complex wordings and make it simpler for mere mortals like me!😃

My favorite character in this story was Nani! I just wish I had that kind of wisdom. I dont attribute it totally to her age. I have seen enough old people lacking that level of wisdom!

Thanks for sharing this story with us.

oh, that was a fabulous one

Hey RB! I started on this one this morning. And I've read till chapter 24. I don't know why, and this has never happened to me before, but I cannot seem to continue. At least not today. I think the gravity of the situation, of the story has finally hit me! :) I will continue it in a few hours.

I can't believe I hadn't read ur story. How can I missed it?

I didn't think they'd end up together. After all that has happened, and because of all the baggage, didn't expect them to find each other amid all that. But they did, and I guess that is love. :)