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musicfan5

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#741

Fabulous Chapter...Loved it...Fitting ending to an Awesome story...

They went away to find themselves and now have found each other too in a new light...

Both finding solace in each other...

Looking forward to reading more of your stories...

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#742

Beautifully written story.. Loved it.. When you asked what you didn't like most and what you like most.. Despair in everyone's life was not jolly thing for me.. But I wouldn't say it wasn't written good.. It was excellent that is why I felt the despair.. The I like the most is nani's entry and Lavanya's character

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jojo21

@jojo21

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#743

Sigh. What a perfect ending, it wasn't this romantic insane gesture it was a a coming together of two people who found themselves and each other.

That's all I have. While I'm saddened to see this end, I'm so happy that I went on this journey with these characters.

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-Reader-

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Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#744

I can't believe this story has ended rather began'.

Arnav Khushi are destined to be together, they are born to be together. They are tested time and again only to be brought together ~ GRAVITY.

It's amazing that they never ceased to love each other; they never misunderstood each other. Even when they were away from each other physically yet were connected by heart and soul. Their love is so cosmic that even after the devastating decision Khushi took, they never lost the comfort level they had between them; they never lost the effect they had on each other.

I just loved the underlying message in the previous and this chapter; embrace your emotions and fight your insecurities and demons; you can be a monk amongst worldly.👍🏼

I am avid reader but not good with words so will not be able to do justice to describe how captivating your writing is. It's really hypnotizing!! I have felt every emotion of every character in this story'' I just love how beautifully you give words and titles to complex human emotions and relationships.

I read this chapter yesterday, after watching the movie ' "Zero Dark Thirty" by Kathryn Bigelow and I absolutely was blown away by her "Hurt Locker". These two movies got me involved right from the second they started and completely absorbed me. These movies are an EXPERIENCE and SO IS YOUR WRITING!! 👏.

PS: I am looking forward new experience with "ESCAPE VELOCITY". 👍🏼

Edited by Prakal - 12 years ago

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Onlooker

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Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#745

That was a heartwarming end to a tumultuous and angst relation - very apt with its serene domesticity and the contentment they felt was reflected in the chapter.

There are more than one favorite scenes for me - but the best was when Arnav hugged Kushi in the rain when he came back and greeted her with "Hello love", and then the scene where he helped her cross the road; the scene when he simply says about his inability to take out the ring from his finger brought tears to my eyes and also Kushi's conviction that they will at last come together - after their metamorphosis from miserable beings to contend souls.

I would not say my least favorite scene but definitely the most depressing scene for me was the suicide of Arnav's mother, little Arnav in embrace of his dead mother. When you mentioned about the stench hitting Anjali, I had this nauseating feeling of throwing up.

And I should specially mention the effort you took in characterization – they were ever evolving with circumstances and their own decisions.You description of each and every scene made it easy for me to picture it vividly. Your narrating style had a deep impact in conveying the highly charged emotions.

Everyone of them found contentment at the end in their own way, be it Arnav, Kushi, Payal, Lavanya or Anjali. But what was Akash's life after Arnav left him?!

Thank you for the pms, even when i was unable to respond to each and every update. I appreciate it. Life is pretty hectic at the moment, and i promise you to read and comment without fail whenever life permits..Thank you once again..

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FeistyDewdrop

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Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#746

i really love these lines... as far as i remember.. so quoting them as it is...

RB!! it was such a pleasure readin gravity... i wud once again come back n read it for a better understanding n also to have a better perspective ... :)

1.A warm hand clasped her sweaty clammy ones and squeezed it gently. The scream that started from her lower abdomen filled with fear stuck in her throat when she saw Arnav standing next to her and inspecting traffic. He pulled her and she let him. He weaved them through onslaught of vehicles, smoke and yelling people making her run in the process to keep up with his long and quick strides. The world around her had dissolved into blurry figures, greying colours, obscure noises and his warm hand in hers. Her feet obeyed his silent orders as if they were attuned to his mind rather than hers. Her veil fluttered behind her as she jogged behind him and a thriller ran into her spine when she successfully made to the other side.

"I saw you waiting for quite some time," he said, amusement easily flowed in his voice. "Scared?" He asked kindly when she wiped her throat and tried to physically loosen its constriction. Arnav's presence left her with a heady feeling of being drugged with psychedelics and adrenaline at the same time. Not trusting her voice, she simply nodded.

2. Friend and lover ' eternal conflict and a f**king cosmic joke played on me by ridiculous fate. Inevitability is constant because irrespective of what one wants or wishes or pines or desires, the inevitable outcome always prevails."

"Don't sympathize with me Khushi. It's my decision to be the way I am. I know I was just riding the lighting but now'it's a fact I live with. Emotional handicap, if you will." Lavanya replied tonelessly.

The damage of gentle psyche was so vast and so deep that it was horribly scarred and mutated around it'Khushi wondered if Lavanya was still the girl she once knew or had she adapted and evolved so much that she couldn't recognize her anymore.

Time would probably explain her one day.

3. There is a time when you have to be wise enough to overrule someone's decision so that truth is uniform between the two of you. After everything that has happened, you still are at an advantage or disadvantage in knowing the truth whereas Arnav would fall into the same situation as before. If you let this streak of ambiguity continue Arnav would be broken to the point beyond repair. The two of you would be together in a relationship ' soulless."

4.The waves gently hit the shore and in softest of the whisper he heard her say. 'Son, the life of an ascetic is difficult and the life of an everyday man is equally difficult. Both fight against vices, inner demons, insecurities and the sense of attachment. If you want to win over complexities of life, then make them simple not escape away from it.'

5.He walked towards her and she held her breath and waited with aching breath for him to come near. He did come near, invaded her personal space, grabbed her waist and held her close to his chest. She smelled his perfume diluted in rain and recognized the tautness of his arms. A rash of goose bumps rose on her arm when his warm breath hit her naked shoulder. Her arms automatically circled around his neck and found the familiar spot between his neck and shoulder. When she pressed her forehead on the crook of his neck, his arms tightened around her and he hoarsely whispered in her ears ' "Hello love."

n the entire last chapter GRAVITY!!!!!!!!!!

RB!!!!!! take a bow!!!!!!!!!! n 👏

Edited by dewdrop6 - 12 years ago