ArHi FF! Gravity - Thread 2 - [Completed] - Page 74

finally got to read the whole FF... lovely ending... 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

Originally posted by: Kalyaani

RB,

Thank you so much for this story, I have to apologize for saying this was not on the same level as your other story "We the People".

-K

Kalyaani - Though I don't want to agree but a part of me agrees with you completely. But I find writing gravity is complex when their emotions have to be slowly layered in and have to be unfurled synchronously. Also, their characterization has to be consistent throughout and balance between their strengths and flaws.

Having said that, Gravity is an exploration of characters while WTP is exploration of an idea. Writing WTP is most difficult - hands down and I need to get out of my personal bias and keep an objective and open state of mind which I assure you is very difficult. But sometimes Gravity simply drained me down while WTP didn't. I ended up arguing with Khushi in my head and the outtake I posted - Lavanya's annoyance with Khushi is an extension of what I felt about the character at one point. WTPs characters don't really do that to me. WTP is an elaborate puzzle...while Gravity is a disorganized chaos of thousands of variables.

Okay, that question helped me sort out my own entanglement :=)

Originally posted by: RockBarbie

Kalyaani - Though I don't want to agree but a part of me agrees with you completely. But I find writing gravity is complex when their emotions have to be slowly layered in and have to be unfurled synchronously. Also, their characterization has to be consistent throughout and balance between their strengths and flaws.

Having said that, Gravity is an exploration of characters while WTP is exploration of an idea. Writing WTP is most difficult - hands down and I need to get out of my personal bias and keep an objective and open state of mind which I assure you is very difficult. But sometimes Gravity simply drained me down while WTP didn't. I ended up arguing with Khushi in my head and the outtake I posted - Lavanya's annoyance with Khushi is an extension of what I felt about the character at one point. WTPs characters don't really do that to me. WTP is an elaborate puzzle...while Gravity is a disorganized chaos of thousands of variables.

Okay, that question helped me sort out my own entanglement :=)

Honestly, I can never expect a simple answer from you. Then again, your answers force me to think further. The story may be over but I may ask you more questions.

the update was just awesome and simple but still had all the beauty and glory of a superb love story! really loved the ending!

amazing chapter will really miss this FF ... beautiful ending thank u so much for this awesome story 😊 keep writing ll definitely check ur next story 😊 thank u

I am just smiling by the end...Thanks for such a beautiful story...Feeling bad that it ended...Thanks for the PM

Perfect ending to a beautiful story.It has been a really nice journey.

ended it on a good note...where the possibilities are both positive and endless...thanks for writing this story

Loved the story.