New Arhi FF: Next stop? Part 2 pg30, note-72

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BSRaizada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Excellent as always saucy!! N pls update the PU TOO

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incarnadine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Sabi 🤗

Glad to see you back! 😊

Amazing concept with humour as always (what I love about your works)!

Poor Khushi travelling with grumbly Raizada..

Hum the mile, tum se na jaane kyun..

This was very apt 😆

Loved it! Looking forward to this SS!

p.s: Hume yeh hiatus manzoor nahi hai! 😛 Hope you'll update PU soon 😊

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nnhk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

afsoos hota hai, dil bhi yeh rota hai

tum gaye haitus pay kiyoun

na janay kiyoun...

been missing your stories... great update.. keep it coming. would love to read this journey

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faree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

different arnav, khushi n train hmmm interesting

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Jammy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

I'll take anything I can get!

This was a promising start. I am all for another ride. :D

You will keep updating this one, yes?

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angelkhushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

good start...
good to see you back... :-)
hope whatever the problem was is all fine now...

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saucechips

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: nnhk
afsoos hota hai, dil bhi yeh rota hai
tum gaye haitus pay kiyoun
na janay kiyoun...

been missing your stories... great update.. keep it coming. would love to read this journey

Kaise bataayen, kyun hum na aaye, yaara bata na paayen..

thank you dear!!

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saucechips

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: bhaktiii
Excellent as always saucy!! N pls update the PU TOO

Originally posted by: Ipkkndrokzz4eva
And I hope PU's update comes soon! 😆

PU. Yes PU. I rememberzz..😆

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Izza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

It gave me a feeling of 'jab we met' :D
Loved it :)
amazing work as always!

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Aanchal15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Sabi🤗...it is nice...to see you here, to treat us all to another fabulous story...hope you are doing good.. My goodness, I laughed so much..trust me when I say, I would love to travel with this epic girl...am sure it would be an enriching experience... for me. 😆

Did she carry only the appetizers???..was expecting something for dessert, as well...

Arnav is another unique character...did he allot marks to those boxes once he was done inspecting them??..Khushi's dialogues as well as her ,inner monologues were hilarious...

And,those last lines were beffitting...cannot wait for the next update...this sojourn is truly enchanting...and, thank you for the PM :))