New Arhi FF: Next stop? Part 2 pg30, note-72

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fffan123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Interesting concept. Lovely start. Please continue.

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Jahnvi Mehra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

lol arnav singh raizada in train compartment with a certain munching-khushi...

loved the update...

awesome...

thanks for pm :)

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1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Had a lovely ten minutes reading the update and laughing like crazy. Love the concept. Anjali czlling and telling him where to get downwas hilarious. Khushi talking to her nephew was too funny. Khushi eating like there's no tomorrow was funny. You cheered me up with your update. Waiting for more.

Hope you update your other ff too soon.

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Fairylights26

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Wow you are finnally back with an update

1. jumps around like an insane person

2.Finishes reading the update while grinning through out the process

Arnav and Khushi together in train with some saucechips humour added to it I am definitely gonna love this...Even I love Atif aslam songs...please update PU as well ( I know you have ur reasons but couldn't resist asking)

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Disha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

m glad u posted something atleast hope everything is fine nw in ur life it seems like years tht u posted something nice start wanna knw the fate of khushi kumari gupta for not listening to asr

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Firebolt

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

PAGE 8?

OH GOD I CAN'T EVEN

😭

PAGE 8.

MY HEART IS BREAKING INTO 8 PIECES NOW.

YOU HATE ME

I KNOW IT

😭

PS-err res (I will res at page 8 if i damn well want to) SOMEONE didn't let me do it at page 1.

-edit take 2-

*keeps heartbreak aside*

Woman I can't believe you denied me the wit and charm of your writing for so long! The spark, the humour, the sarcasm and subtle eye-sex (oh sush, you must be used to it by now, wait that came out wrong 😆) welcome back!

What's not there to like about a snarky!Khushi and uptight!Arnav?

They make me swoon and blush and giggle taking me back to the wonderful times of IPK!

And Khuhsi is well... Khushi. She gobbled up everything like a woman starved 😆 But then who doesn't? Everyone is extra hungry on train rides what with all those long hours of sitting idle.

Except for one Mister Raizada of course.

Thinks everything is below his lofty standards 😆

Where-o-where are you going with this Sabi?

Ahem trains have so much potential, don't you think? (if you know what i mean 😃)

~Shriya

PS- Our current relationship status of OBFF's is under rocky terrain until such a time that I don't have repeated flashbacks of this 8th page rejection 😭

Edited by Firebolt - 12 years ago