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khushiiXOXO

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Posted: 12 years ago

#321

Krani,not fair! d other FF has had 2 updates while dis one has none!!!...waiting

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Sisbamboo1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#322

Really new concept and I'm loving it! There are so many mysteries in this story...Khushi's past, the importance of the drug dealers, the man with the turban, the commissioners role...everything is so subtly revealed...inch by inch. It makes me impatient but that is a normal reaction when reading a suspense story.

The last scene made this chapter memorable. The way you made Khushi just say "Babuji" again and again while allowing herself to grieve with each plea for her babuji. The longing and the anguish came out so well!

I know you're busy with Arranged Marriage but hopefully you will update this as well?

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siamesecat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#323

Nice story from a wonderful storyteller.

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suadvani

@suadvani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#324

I love the way this story is sooo mysterious..every chapter either has be desperately wanting to.read more..I've literally just read more than half of arranged marriage all of room420 andthe last 5 Chptrs of this.. its almost 3 am and I need to sleep...but ur writing is seriously addictive!!!

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Sweety

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Posted: 12 years ago

#325

Wow... simply amazing.. 👏👏👏👏the pain of Khushi on losing his father.. the helpnessess of arnav on seeing her in pain and the zeal to protect her from any harm.. all emotions potrayed beautifully... I dont know how u manage to do it.. but u have bound me to ur stories from the day i came across it... Please keep on writing... Loving each of it.. and eagerly waiting for the next update...

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khushiiXOXO

@khushiiXOXO

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Posted: 12 years ago

#326

have u abandoned dis ff?..no notes,no updates..whereas d other one is showered wid much attention n updates..😭

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noreen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#327

plz ud this great ff soon !!!!!

thnks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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cherry227

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Posted: 12 years ago

#328

Shashi is not dead. Is he?

Loved the way u have written down Khushi n arnavs emotions :)))

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SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#329

Krani , you're brilliant. About the dream- is that God's way of telling Khushi that Shyam killed her babuji?I mean the whole dream is basically what really happened- there's something ugly connected to her past, her present is a mess as she's being coveted by two dangerous men, her future is uncertain, Shyam knows that ugly truth about her past and he killed Shashi so he would be out of his way. That scene from the village Shashi went to , and his vague conversation regarding Khushi still intrigues me. I like the pace of your stories- you go slowly and gently, and then suddenly, something huge happens.