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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited by chinudolly - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey sry dear i was bsy...so cudnt earlier bt i read both d update 2gedr...cumin 2 d stry...gr8 concept...n m happy u tuk a happy approach on dis topic...it was juz perfect...each n every character justified...well whom m i kiddin...aftr all its u...so it has 2 b fab!!!

Please update soon :D
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Wow chech! Kalakki!! Enna update aarnu..Awesome..nd why was your mood off..aapko sadothri expression bilkul suit nahi karta..so hamesha haste hi rehena!! k ? nd bTW loved d way Rey manaofied Taani..It was cute..nd Taani was way too cute chechi..I loved d way she said "Nahi" When Rey asked her to forgive him!! Aapki tarah iss SS bhi bohot cute he diii...love ya!! Sooo sorry for d late reply..class tests aarnu!!πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
too gud indu
i really enjod reading it...
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update ASAP.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hiii … [hiding myselfπŸ˜‰] sorry ya people for being late…shall I ask one thing now???πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ How many of you remember this story??πŸ˜† Sachi baat batana okkkβ€¦πŸ˜†πŸ˜†.but if that had happened meri galati hai I made it too late …but I will try my level best to not repeat that… so here u go with a short recap before the chapter😊

Recap: the story began with the VP announcing the need of a leader for the college dramatics dep and proceeded with taani realizing her passion lay in acting as she remembers her school days where she used to excel in dramatics.. she decides to take up the responsibility and tells the authorities about it .. after some meetings with dep members and authorities she was declared as the leader… the story proceeded with rey missing taani as she got busy with her rehearsals, the same way she did when he was busy…. His irritation results in an outburst where he shouts at her … later he realizes his mistake that was followed by a tr scene[to read that u may go to 2nd chapter]…that was where we stopped…. So here I continue the story with the 3dr and the last part….

Chapter-3

A week passed … taani was busy with her team practicing for the drama fest as the competition was near by and rey and the rest of the gang were busy in their dance practices but rey always made it a point to find time for taani after the last incident … he knew her inner stress , she was in a total messed up situation .. the duties of a GS of the fest hosting college and also as the leader of the drama department… she was a perfectionist always and wanted everything to be perfect … she cared a lot for the reputation of the college she didn't want any faults in the arrangements of the fest and also she wanted her group to give their best performances… she had a lot of tension and stress and he knew it … he did what all he could do as an AGS to lighten up her stress … he had taken the responsibility of arrangements so that she could concentrate more on her performance .. it was a big opportunity for her ,she was doing something for herself for the 1st time and he wanted her to achieve the best…

The day before the fest – after the college had dispersed , the drama team had stayed back for extra practises

After finishing a set of rehearsals for the next day taani sneaked out to see the arrangements while the rest of the drama department was still practicing. She quickly took her file and went through " hey Krishna ji pata nahi mein eh sab ache se kar paongi ya nahi.. aap mera saat dena" she started walking reading the files twirling her curls with her fingers " lighting , food … food ha caterers se meine keh diya tha toh [she cut it off from the list] … mmm.. ha seating arrangements … green rooms for arriving colleges!!.." she was marking them in the file as she walked through the corridor … rey was standing at the other end watching her walking towards him…. " hayee kitni cute dikh rahi ha itne tension mein bhi!!" he sighed seeing her walking like that talking to her self twirling her curls , marking the files reading from them… she was approaching him … he made himself ready to have a talk with her and leaned towards her … she was so immersed in her work that she just walked past " taani… taaani!!" he called with his eyes popping out as she walked past not even noticing him , still engrossed in the files reading them n talking to herself…" re eh ladki bi na .. paagal.. taani " he called her as her sprinted towards her … finally he caught hold of her upper arm , panting , he stopped her .. " huhh!!!" he released a sigh " tum kai koi marathon k liye to nahi ja rahi ho na.."

She rolled her eyes with his weird question " rey!!!... aap shayad bhool rahe hai ki kal fest hai aur mujhe [he too joined her dialogue saying along with her] bohot kaam hai … aur appke masak sune k liye time nahi hai!!" he smiled as he stooped repeating her dialogue along with her …. She looked at him " to apko pata hai .. phir??" he smiled as he held her upper arm protectively and continued as he made her walk slowly along with him" taani sare kaam ho gaye hai .. meine sab dekh liya … so tume tension n lene ki koi zaroorat nahi !!"

" sare kaam matlab … nahi rey .. see [she opened her files ].. morning before going for rehearsals .. I could just arrange food .. now there is lighting…."

" that's done … sare lights aa gaye hai .. meine arrange kiya tha n they are now arranging the lights in the auditorium.." he said with a smile … while she stood open mouthed for a second …he curved his brows in a ' what ?' expression.. she closed her mouth and arranged her curls behind her ear and again looked into the file " ha toh ab mujhe seating arrangements dekhni hai , judges , guest…" before she could complete he continued

" that's also done madam .. judges k liye separate chairs with marking pads and desks and then guest k liye separate arrangements , audience k liye chairs and others and then participants k liye separate …" he said in one go while she just could stare with her hazel eyeballs poping out…. He curved his brows seeing her cute expression in a ' aur kuch??' manner… she immediately looked to the sides and then again playing with her curls looked back in the file .."then…" before she could tell he took the file from her hand and held her upper arm protectively " taani.. meine kaha na .. mere hote hue tume itne tension lene ki koi zarrorat nahi.. jo bhi tension hai vo hum donom share kar lenge [she couldn't help but smile]… haye hayeee …eh smile k liye to mein apne app ko bhi dene k liye tayaar hu mein saab…" he said widening his arms in a fully filmy style .. she hit his head giggling …he dragged her close to him in a side hug and said " you just relax and concentrate on your performance .. backi sara kam mein dekh lunga…kal jab best actress ka announcement hoga tab mujhe tume dekhna hai , receiving your crown .. and trust me taani you deserve it … you deserve the best …coz you are the best!!" she lifted her head from his chest and looked into his eyes " thank you rey , mere saat dene k liye.."

"ohh so tumne mujhe paraya kar diya … thank you .. huhh chal chod .." he faked anger to her and walked out smiling in his mind as he clearly knew she will ran to him the next instant .. he started countdown in his mind as he made each step "..1 madam is bitting her nails…. 2 madam is looking at me …3 madam has started running towards me… and kiss" she gave him a peck on his right cheek as she ran upto him…….

"now that's like my girlfriend " he smiled and she too

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Next day- morning tayaam house

Taani sprinted downstairs in hurry talking through the phone " ha laya mein bas nikal rahi hu, tum log tension mat lo … mein bas 10 min mein pohonch javungi.." holding her bag she ran towards the dining table .. she kept her bag on the chair in a hurry and was about to pour milk to a glass when she saw a glass full of milk extended towards her … she looked towards swayam with a smile and took it from him…she was sipping it in a hurry when swayam extended a plate with a piece of bread " nahi bahi[she said sipping the milk] time nahi hai…"

"taani .. chup chap kha lo… ajj pura din tum busy hogi aur mujhe apni pyaari behen ki nature pata hai.. tum paani bhi nahi piyegi ajj .. bas tension lete yahan vahan [he was busy in his speech looking here and there and when he ultimately looked up to her she was not there ….]re …[he looked upto the door ]

" sorry bahi… bohot late ho chuki hai aur vo log mera intezar kar raha hoga.. bye bhai… "she yelled as she closed the door behind her

"eh ladki bi na puri tarah se pagal hai!!" swayam smiled to himself

In the college

Rey was busy making sure that every arrangement was intact and today the rest of the gang also helped him in arranging the stage and all others .. taani and her friends were busy with their final rehersals and make ups and all

Evening

The program just started … delegates got seated in their VIP area and the judges near to the stage . they were really impressed with the arrangements the college had made for the event… soon the first performance was announced …. " the first performance by the host college … st Louis "

Back stage

Rey held her hand " mujhe pura vishwas hai ki you will be the best … so now no tension … just do it .. ok" he held her cheeks and she nodded " mujhe ek doubt hai [he held her upper arms and looked her from top to bottom , she frowned ]tum eh purani roman clothes mein bhi itni pretty kasie dikhti ho yar" he winked with that characteristic naughty smirk of his and she could just blush as usual … he held her palm and said " now stop blushing and "he held his thumbs up .. she noded her head as she held her long gown and walked towards the stage

The drama started …there was pin drop silence from the audience only their face reflected what they saw on the stage they smiled seeing the age old but still evergreen love of romeo and Juliet…

Vicky and neil looked at rey with weird expressions "reyy.. tu jal rahe honge na …taani ko vo samrat ko kiss karte hue dekh " Vicky said as neil chuckled …

"why should he feel jealous and meri behen kisi samrat ko kiss nahi kiya ok… she is just acting as Juliet and it was Juliet who kissed romeo" swayam made his point

" abe taani vo ju..[bharat scratched his head not getting the name]

" ale uliet"amar said correcting him

" ha vahi.. uski acting kar rahi hai to usko kiss karna hoga vo samrat ko kyun ki vahi vo ro.. ro"he again scratched his head confused

" romeo…but the point you guys are missing is she is just acting and agar tum logon ko vo original lag rahi hai then claps for her she is the best actress" rey said with crossed arms as he continued his concentration on the drama going on in the stage… Vicky neil , bharat and amar lifted their brows hearing the way rey praised taani and the n they continued their concentration on the drama …

The drama proceeded through the intense story…

"taani kya kar rahi hai…"rinni said

" apne aap ko kill karne jaa rahe hai" neha said as she moved towards the edge of the seat seeing Juliet was about to kill herself

"stop it guys and watch the scene" Sharon rolled her eyes

And Juliet killed herselves in the love of romeo and in the grief of loosing him and the girls in the audience had tears in their eyes seeing the tragic end of the love story

"taani.." rey said all off a sudden seeing Juliet dead in the stage

" taani nahi Juliet"Vicky said

"tune hi kuch der pehle bola tha" bharat joined …

The drama went on like that and when they finished they got a standing ovation by the entire college and the judges … the auditorium echoed with claps from everyone….

The competition moved on with the guest college 's having their performance…

Finally the competition was over and it was time for the results .. the anchor transferred the mike to the judges

Main judge " all the performance where good but the first one by the st Louis was perfect in all sense .. excellent script, excellent dialogue delivery , excellent background score and excellent acting.. so all three of us [he looked at the other judges who nodded to show their consent] had jointly decided to declare st Louis as the winner "

That was followed by huge clap echoing the auditorium …taani and her team went to collect the trophy… the audience cheered them up….

Anchor : " now its time to announce the best actor "

The judges announced but it was someone else from some other college… the louians were a bit depressed ..

Anchor : " and now the best actress … so the best actress for the evening is…. Sir please" she looked upto the main judge .. he nodded and held the mike " that is Miss Taani Shekhawat of the St Louis" the entire gang almost jumped from the audience and clapped .. taani couldn't believe … she looked upto the cheering audience from the stage … her eyes were searching for someone… and her eyes found those chocolate brown eyes who stood at a distance looking at her … she smiled in between her tears looking at him … rey smiled back and lifted his thumbs up … the crowd applauded heavily as she made way towards the guest who crowned her ….. heroine……… the anchor handed her the mike and she spoke through it "at this moment I just want to say one thing to all my friends gathered here … [the entire audience maintained silence to hear from her]… friends …God has made each and every one of us unique…each and every one of us have a different interest sometimes dance , sometimes music, art, acting,ya kisi subjects , the only thing we need to do is that we need to realize our passion and should have the determination to achieve it .. remember everyone of us is special in the eyes of God none is lesser than the other… friends I know many of you here have a fear of how it would be if you put yourselves forward , and so you stay back, you ignore your passion with a thought of how others will receive your work , whether they will mock at you and all… I have only one thing to tell, just ignore all those fears , coz every one of you are special … be determined .. be confident … put your best to achieve your passion and then the same persons who once mocked at you will applaud for you…" she concluded as the crowd applauded for her

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How was it my dear's ?? that was a small idea an I tried to put it up in my way as good as I could … I am sorry if it was not upto your expectations… tell me your opinions about it and the way it would have been better in your sense … that will help me to deliver better next time… love you all and see you with another story…..

Edited by disismeenu4u - 12 years ago
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Res
unres!!

Sachhi batau.. I still remembrd this ss.. Coz i was waiting for it eagerly and so checkd the post everyday..
It was superb!! Reyam and the gang being so supportive.. Wow..
And the mindblowing speech of taani.. Hatsoff to u..

Keep on giving such creations.. I m fond of them.. πŸ€—
Edited by toshi_ta - 12 years ago
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That was awesome Indu. Right now I was frustrated or rather confused about my task. So thought of browsing to lighten my mind. Thank God i did that!
You were right. we just need to follow our passion, no matter what others say.
Love you!
All the best. Keep rocking😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow nice luvly
perfect ending thanks for stry
n all PM n do write more stry
n do send me PM

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