Taarey: A one man army (Season 2 OUT) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Amazing concept, just caught up with it, im guessing taani was kidnapped or something, brilliant part, please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dear your stry is awesome

plz update soon

n plz pm me

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys, a very Good Morning to you all.😊 I thought of making your morning happy and exciting, hope my efforts don't go in vain.😔 So, Part 2 is here. I know it's too long but couldn't help it had to add the flashback in it. Hope it didn't get boring. Heads up guys there is a flashback in this part as well and might have in upcoming parts too. So let me know if it's irritating to cope up with past and present. Or any suggestions to improve my post like changing the color of the flashback text or font size anything guys. I am open for suggestions and just know that I want you guys to enjoy and nothing else.

Hope you guys enjoys it 😃

Part 2:

Tears fell from his eyes once again. He had felt pain when he first read this note but this time the pain was killing him from inside out. "Taaannniii…….," He screamed her name out so that the entire world can hear him including her, if it was possible.

The scream was loud enough for the servant and people standing outside the door could hear it properly. Soon after he screamed the servant came running out from the kitchen and at the same time the door bell rung TING TONG, not only once but several times.

The servant opened the door and a trembling and concerned voice came from the other side of the door, "where is she? Did I hear it right? Where is Rey?," a handsome and muscular male came in almost running without even waiting for the reply. He was shocked to see the view in front of him. He saw the entire living room upside down. His eyes noticed each and everything: A broken lamp. A scratched sofa handle as if someone tried to hold it for support with great force leaving the scratch marks on the handle. Few pieces of broken bangles scattered close to the main door. A side table with blood on one of its corners and few drops of the blood on the floor nearby. His heartbeat almost stopped just by seeing the blood. He could visualize somebody getting hurt by hitting hard on the corner of the table while hoping that it's not her baby sister. Then, his eyes stopped at Rey who was still holding the note and crying like a small baby.

After seeing Rey in that condition, he lost his grip. He fell on the ground right beside the drops of blood and touched them while feeling the pain she had gone through. Many questions rang in his mind: where is she? How is she? Who took her and why? How he is gonna get her back, her baby sis?

He stood up and went to Rey hold him from his collar and asked him about his sister. Rey looked at him with tears in his eyes and the next second he hugged him tight. His best friend, his only support and his wife's brother, Swayam. Swayam who was angry and only concerned for his sister, felt the pain of his best friend and hugged him back. Both stayed like that for a while and cried silently. Slowly, Sawyam broke the hug and asked Rey, "what is he gonna do know? How he is gonna find her and bring her back?"

Rey had no words; he looked at Swayam with tons of emotions like helplessness, love, pain, shock, hatred towards himself, and concern for Taani, his life and his entire world. Sawyam soon realized that he is not going to get any answers as Rey is totally broken so he got a grip on himself and then thought of a way to bring his old fighter Rey back as he knew he will not get Taani, his baby sis, back without Rey's help.

He started the conversation after breaking the never ending silence. "You know what Rey why I was against your and Taani's marriage at first place?" hoping he can gain Rey's attention and motivate him and boost some courage in him. Rey looked at him with a 'Why' look, but didn't uttered a word. With a disappointed look Swayam continued, "Because I had two fears in my mind that I never told anybody but I think it's time to tell you. First, your career puts your life, my best friend's life at stake every day. Second, letting you both married I was putting Taani's life at stake as well. But ..." before he could add to it Rey interrupted him saying, "Sawyam why didn't you tell me that before? I would have backed off myself. I wouldn't have put Taani's life at stake at the first place. Damn it! Why I didn't think that before? Why? Why Sawyam you said yes? Why? What I did was wrong that's why Sharon didn't come with you today. She thinks I did was wrong too, right? Oh God!" he held his hairs tight showing the frustration he was feeling at that moment.

Sawyam was caught off guard he never thought Rey would react like that. It was first time he saw Rey like that. Rey never regretted his decisions as he always made right decisions. He composed himself again and kept his one hand on Rey's shoulder and replied him with full assurance "Firstly, Sharon wasn't feeling good since morning, so I didn't told her anything about Taani and made an excuse that Taani's maid didn't show up so she is busy cleaning the house. You know why because two of the three most important people in my life are already in trouble. I will not be able to bare the third one also getting in any kind of trouble. So I lied to her. I am sure if Sharon knew she would have been your support as she and I both know your marriage was never a mistake."

He paused for a second analyzing Rey's face which had only disgust for himself which was apparent enough for Sawyam to see it. He sighed and continued, "Secondly, my no for this marriage was turn into yes the day Taani insisted for ice cream late at that night do you remember that night Rey?" he looked at him and saw Rey struggling with his thoughts and trying to refer to the night Sawyam was talking about. He narrated the night that forced his decision to change.

Flashback

"Bhai…" Taani rushed out from her bedroom and Rey followed her to the living room where Swaron were busy in their eye lock. After hearing Taani, they both came out of their trance a bit embarrassed but as soon they saw Taani's worried face their expression change into the concern one.

"What happened" they both asked together

Taani with an angry and stubborn face stood in front of them with her hand crossed on her chest and said after a huge pause "I want an ice cream and that too know, but Rey is not taking me out to get my favorite Kulfi" she pouted like a five year old girl. Seeing this all three of them starts laughing which made a tear came out of Taani's eyes.

As soon as Rey saw Taani's tears, he decided to take Taani out at 12:10 in the night because he couldn't see Taani cry. He even didn't care if Sawyam would say yes or no. The tear in Taani's eye had change the entire scenario. He can do anything to make Taani smile even if that means taking her out at this time of the night.

Taarey and Swaron all went in the quest to find the Kulfi stall at midnight. As soon as they found one, they saw Taani rushing out of the car and grab a kulfi and started eating it without even waiting for the others. Sharon didn't like Kulfi so she requested to take her to the ice cream parlor where she can choose her favorite flavor. Sawyam decided to take Sharon to the nearby ice cream parlor leaving Taarey at the stall as he had observed Taani would take a lot of time eating her Kulfis. Soon they left, Taani was busy eating and Rey was admiring her. He was interrupted and brought out from his trance when he saw some boys going near Taani who was busy eating her Kulfi and didn't notice anything.

There were three guys looking at Taani with lustful eyes. Guy 1: "yummy, this Kulfi must taste great yaar"
Guy 2: "Kulfi always taste great. What are you talking about?" while the third one was listening to the conversation and staring at Taani like he has started his dirty work through his eyes.
Guy 1 with a smirk: "This one is different as it has touched the rose petals directly. I wish I could touch these rose petals. Hmmm…"
It was then when Taani noticed and tried to look for the car but was scared to death when she didn't find one. Taani was unaware that Swaron had left and that Rey is standing a few steps away fuming in anger. He was shaking like a hungry tiger ready to attack his prey. He headed to the one who commented on Taani first. He holds him from his neck and hit his head hard on the stall which made the stall to move as well. Taani was relieved to see Rey, but at the time was scared to see this part of Rey.

Rey roared "Do you wanna touch her now? Kiss her?" as Rey said and turned to face the other two guys, Taani shivered at those words. In a split second Rey had the third guy who was shocked to see what just happened. Rey punched him on his right eye and the left one leaving the big and dark black circles making sure he never sees Taani from his filthy eyes again. Second guy, who was in attempt to run away, felt a strong grip on his shoulder which made him come to the abrupt stop. He felt him being trashed even before Rey had vented his anger, he was shaking with fear he had no courage or guts to face that furious tiger. He turned quickly and held Rey's leg begging for some mercy. But it was Taani, he was talking about. Rey grab him from his collars and said with full confidence and anger at the same time, "Taani is mine and no one; I mean no one can harm her. I will rip of his head who tries to come near my Taani. You creep." He hit his head with that guy's head making him fell down unconscious.

As soon he fell down, his eyes captured Swaron standing with a weird look in their face a few steps away from him. He was about to say something while taking a step further and was stopped seeing Swaron taking a step backwards. He then realizes what he did with those guys and thought that Taani must be scared too just like they are. He turned and saw Taani shaking like it was -20 degree. He came close to her and saw Taani getting more scared. He lifted his hand showing that he had surrendered and said "You know Taani I am not gonna hurt you and will never let anyone else hurt you either." Taani felt each and every word he had said and came running in his arms feeling secure and safe for life in his arms. Rey also hugged her tight and protectively making sure he will never let her get hurt.

Seeing this Sawyam eyes got filled with tears and Swaron smiled at them. Sawyam had a proud smirk on his face as he was proud that his baby sister had got a good life partner in his best friend and vice versa. They all reached home at 2:00am and ShaRey stayed at Taayam's house for that night as it was too late.

Flashback over

Rey stood up remembering each and everything he said to those boys and then what he promised to Taani. This was it; Sawyam had succeeded in his plan. He knew Rey will get Taani back at any cost.

*Part 2 ends finally pheww*

Oops it was too long I know but just imagine guys if I had stopped just before the flashback. Would you have like it? Let me know guys if you have any problems or issues on such Looonnnggg parts. And yes, don't forget to comment and hit like button if you guys liked it and wanna know what happens next. I haven't started part 3 so it might take some time to post the next part but I will post the promo for the next part as soon as possible. So, keep up with the Index for that.

Remember: You guys can make my morning good as well through your comments and likes 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
So taani has been kidnapped and is not dead or gone away. I love the flashback. No wonder taani got scared of Rey. It's great that Rey finally got over his initial shock and despair and is now ready to fight. Now I get the meaning of ur FF title. And I certainly don't mind long updates😆😆😆

One suggestion could be that u could edit the topic and add the update and on which page u updated, so that others know a new chapter has been added.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Amazing concept... u r a fab writer... waiting for the next part and i. Donot mind long updates at all...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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heya..thanks for such a lovely post..Just finished reading it..Wen i read d first part i was actually thinking dat Taani was dead..but itz only now dat i released a sigh of relief..so taani is kidnapped..taarey in prt 1 was too cute..cant wait to know wat happens next..nd the title is awesome!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
aww that Kulfi thing was so sweet <3 please continue and PM me if you can <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
wow,d stry is way 2 d/f,lvd it.TR Flashbck rmantic moments in cha1 wr so adorable.Chap2,god,tani is bn kidnapd.Lvd hw swa is boosting up rey to gt bck tr tani.Nt to frgt,d ice-crm flshbck ws so cute & at d sm tm shwd hw posesive ws rey abt tani.Update sn.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: paruls

So taani has been kidnapped and is not dead or gone away. I love the flashback. No wonder taani got scared of Rey. It's great that Rey finally got over his initial shock and despair and is now ready to fight. Now I get the meaning of ur FF title. And I certainly don't mind long updates😆😆😆


One suggestion could be that u could edit the topic and add the update and on which page u updated, so that others know a new chapter has been added.😳

Thank you for liking my story and commenting on it and also for your suggestion. Well, i will try to do that too. But just to let you know there is an index in my introductory post which I am updating properly. So, keep an eye on that. If you want me to pm you then send me the friend's request if you haven't done so because i am PMing all the people in my buddy list for the updates. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30

Note:

Hey guys if you want me to PM you then please make sure you are in my buddy list as I am only sending PM to my buddy list people. Also, those who have no clue what page things are posted just to let you know guys there is an index on the introductory post that answers all your post updates and pages related concerns. And the promo will be posted in a while, but will try to do it as soon as possible, and I will let you guys know through PMs and index. 😃

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