Arhi SS: Finding Love #2: COMPLETED - Page 91

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Posted: 12 years ago
oh two days to update!
will be waiting and i think those earrings are surprising gift for khushi or maybe Aakash and Payal have been having secret rendezvous' in Arnav's apartment, therefore they belong to Payal.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh thank you! Thank you for giving us this Arnav 😳

Arnav's behaviour is now completely understandable.

I love this Khushi. So strong. Fights for what she wants till the end. And liked the way she asked Arnav how he was backing from the relationship at the first signs of difficulty.

After Arnav's explanation, I loved the silent treatment...bas!!! 😆

As for the ear rings, if you are planning something romantic then let it be Arnav's surprise for Khushi if not then let it be Payal's. That would be fun 😉

Belated birthday wishes to your baby :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb chapter,I know ur next update will also be superb.Thanks.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wt ws dt?
he alrdy new abt Harvard part?

he was afraid 2 lose hr?

n K managed 2 cum n clear evrythin..:)

lovely.

sooo Khushi nw knows wt he's afraid of..wud she go or nt?

wndr who's ear ring was it..
he's sooo gone..it myt b of d maid.?his ex?nooo..loved d updte..:)thnx.:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
HI
after u send me the link to this wonderful ff,, i started reading it in one go and the title says it all...so i decided to send u this letter..
u r one de most talented writer i have come across in IF...honestly loved the way u wrote this beautiful story..i fell in love how u put it together...loved how arnav tried to woo khushi..loved the valentine date...loved how he swept her feet up OMG it's awesomely romantic ...it's every girls dream to have that kinda of man.. and u made it this love story so beautiful awesome and you have done justice with each characters and all the chapters were mind blowing...i fell in love this wonderful story from the start... It was amazing ride on the waves of emotions...and heartwarming
Thank you Nidhi for giving us such a unique and extraordinary story...
so well done...now eagerly waiting to read more...plz pm anytime u update..
and also happy birthday to yr beautiful baby daughter
many thx
A

Edited by Abyan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Nidsubh007

Author's Note:


OK, some of the writer's on this forum know that I love to make lists when I comment on there stories!

I just got so many comments on the mysterious set of earrings found in Arnav's sofa that I had to make a list. So here are my favorite top 5!

Why are there a pair of women's earrings in Arnav's sofa:

1. They are a surprise gift for Khushi 🤔

2. They belong to the cleaning lady 😆

3. They belong to Anjali 😳

4. They came with the sofa set when Arnav purchased it and he just never realized it. 🤣

5. Aakash and Payal have been having secret rendezvous' in Arnav's apartment, therefore they belong to Payal. 👍🏼

Let me know which one is your favorite!!

Next update: MARCH 18th





I vote for 4 and 2.
Now countdown starts. Just 1 day to go..
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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all, wish your daughter a very Happy B'Day🥳

Secondly, awesome update as usual👏

I really loved the fact that Arnav easily accepted the fact that Khushi was going to Harvard. Also the apartment looked really nice. But the last part where Khushi finding the earring is a little scary
I hope it's not Lavanya's😕

Eagerly waiting for the next update 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Author's Note:

Please take a minute to read this important post!





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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all I would like to apologize, I'm usually not this bad when it comes to commenting, but I'm blaming the after exam hangover for my current lack of articulate dialogue.

Prologue/chapter 1:

"Ankles adorned with her mother's Payal" Is Khushi adopted by the Gupta's?

Intriguing- Khushi and Arnav are already going out!?

Chapter 2:

*clutches hand to chest* THERE 12 years old! What the hell are they going to do with boys their own age? I'm not say that dating's wrong but, sweet lord at least wait until you've hit puberty!!

I like how you've captured Khushi's quirkiness so well…….her mind does tend to go off on random tangents.

I don't like the implication of Khushi having to choose between her dream school and her family and friends.

Arnav's setting the bar pretty high on a first date.

Chapter 8:

Wow! Just finished chapter 8(part d) and all I can say is you're amazing at portraying emotions!! I consider myself to be a very sensible and logical person but you had my emotions in a knot with the way that Arshi's date ended. I wanted to yank Lavanya by the hair and drag her out the dining hall but at the same time I wanted to give Arnav a piece of my mind for thinking that ending/taking a first date at a business dinner would be a good idea.

But then Arnav's words about wanting a future with Khushi in it kept entering my mind; and it feels as though all the insecurities and disappointment are baseless. uggg I sooo would not want to be Khushi right now! So congratulation you have completely confounded my feelings….and it wasn't even me that when on the date*pouts*

Chapter 9:

I don't hate Lavanya. You can't blame her for going after Arnav…she thinks that Khushi's just another flavor of the week. She has romantic history with him, whereas Khushi's has a deep seeded emotional and personal bond with not only Arnav but with his whole family (that and he's totally hot for her😉😃)

Sooo ……what do they want, for their daughter to attend Delhi Uni, get a degree and put it up on her bedroom wall like 'look I once had a life too!' she'll attend Uni and then the pressure for marriage will be on from all sides!!! Why is it that women ask how they can handle both a family and a career, you never hear a man asking that question.

Chapter 10:

I'm feeling the most intense loathing towards Garima right now, my parents stopped me from going to the Uni of my choice 4 years ago( it was 3 hours away from home!!!) and I've never forgiven them for it. This is a decision about her education! HER future!! And no one but Khushi has the right to make decisions based on it. Her mother is over emotional because of the wedding, and she's making a life changing decision for her daughter because she's scared of being alone. If Khushi was a boy I don't think it would have been an issue where she went to school. Her mother would have been strutting around like a proud peacock at the fact that her son had been accepted in to the most prestigious school in all of America, but since Khushi's a girl and will be getting married and settled down after her degree it's like the school she goes to matters! Grrr can you tell I'm majorly p*ssed off. Sexism may not be the issue but I still think that Garima has no right to stop her daughter from pursuing her dream school.

"not wanting to lose their identity as they started on the road to become one."

I love that line! I'm a firm believer that in order for a relationship to grown a couple must be able to grown individually.

chapter 13:

death by Arnav Singh Raizada hmmm that's something I'd gladly embrace

wow! Dhak dhak and acidity reached a whole new level with this chapter!

Chapter 14:

How in the world do you write like this!?!?!? I swear I've never been so emotional while reading a fic! I wana cuddle up with Khushi and cry.

My guess is that Arnav feels that their relationship may hinder Khushi when it comes to her academic goals; perhaps he's trying to make leaving easier on her..?

Chapter 15:

Atta go sweet! Way to keep mum in line!! Ps: nag her for the next chapter will you😉 you should get your daughter "The best of Girls to the Rescue" I remember reading the book when I was 8 and just fell in love with all the fearless female characters!

HA! I nailed it! So that one less battle that she had to fight, I'm glad Arnav's in her corner when it comes to Harvard vs. Garima [the people's court shall now commence…hehe]

Geez yaar what a buzz kill!!

Why is there a pair of women's earrings in Arnav's sofa?

1. They are a surprise gift for Khushi

2. They belong to the cleaning lady

3. They belong to Anjali

4. They came with the sofa set when Arnav purchased it and he just never realized it.

5. Aakash and Payal have been having secret rendezvous' in Arnav's apartment, therefore they belong to Payal.


Buahhahah omg! That just awesome!!! Errm the make out session was kind of spontaneous---as was Khushi showing up to his office, so that takes #1 out of the running. The cleaning lady wouldn't wear large earing to work(they would have to be for it to have poked Khushi from between the cushions) and Anjali ain't the type to lose an earring and not notice(her husband maybe…..err I'm referring to the show)

Hmmm I need to go to this store that hands out free earing with the purchase of every couch. 😆It would be hilarious to catch Payal and Aakash in the act so I'm kinda gunning for that to be the reason.😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
I go with option 1. They must be the same earrings that khushi liked in the jewellery shop but didnt buy them...

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