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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: tejjo

Loved the ud
bt thoda chota tha
sry dear bt rtmc ke ud padhte padhte man nhi bharta
lovely ud tha
gumne ja rhe h sb hmmm accha or prithvi mit n kriya ki setting karne me laga h
gd gd boy h prithvi
oh he brought bangles 4 pihu
so cute na
bt prithvi galat baat kisi or ki gf par line nhi maarte beta
bad manners
bt yahan chalega kyunki hum sb v yhi chahte h

lekin end me hua kya
ud soon
luv u


thank u di
for ur cmnt
i like it
luv u tooo...di😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
aww prithvi bought bangles for pihu ...so sweet
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
as usual lovely update dear😃😃...
but yaar...ab pihu & prithvi ko kareeb lao na😉😉...
pihu ko priyank ke saath dekh dekh kar😭😭😭
chalo...net update main...pihu prithvi ka acha sa secene dena ok...
& update bhi longgg chahiye😛...
thanks sweety for this lovely ff...😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
hi sonia😉
nice upd nd sorry for late comment😊
prithvi kitna acha frnd hai or prit apne frnd ka kitna khyal rakhta hai bt ye kriya kon hai 😒or bechara mit nd yes wo background music wo music dekhkr hme kafi hasi aa gayi.or jwellary shop se jo prit ne bengel kharide hai wo pihu ke liye hi khride hai m i right or not?
whatever jo bi ho hmari sonia aagey ki story me sb kuch sahi kr degi m i right sonia🤔
thanx for nice upd sonia nd take care
i mss u a lot😒😒
Edited by priyankamishra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Asyalover

aww prithvi bought bangles for pihu ...so sweet


thank u di
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: priyankamishra

hi sonia😉

nice upd nd sorry for late comment😊
prithvi kitna acha frnd hai or prit apne frnd ka kitna khyal rakhta hai bt ye kriya kon hai 😒or bechara mit nd yes wo background music wo music dekhkr hme kafi hasi aa gayi.or jwellary shop se jo prit ne bengel kharide hai wo pihu ke liye hi khride hai m i right or not?
whatever jo bi ho hmari sonia aagey ki story me sb kuch sahi kr degi m i right sonia🤔
thanx for nice upd sonia nd take care
i mss u a lot😒😒


thanksss priyanka yaar
i love ur cmnt 😆
but abhi sab itne jaldi thik thodi o sakta abhi to or twist baaki h yaar
tumhe or wait karna hoga
but keep reading dear...
tum kab story bhejh rhi ho jaldi bhejho yaar...😊
luv u tooo
and i also miss u😭
Edited by soniaparte90794 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: shona_muratfan

as usual lovely update dear😃😃...

but yaar...ab pihu & prithvi ko kareeb lao na😉😉...
pihu ko priyank ke saath dekh dekh kar😭😭😭
chalo...net update main...pihu prithvi ka acha sa secene dena ok...
& update bhi longgg chahiye😛...
thanks sweety for this lovely ff...😳😳


thank u di for ur luvly cmnt
keep reading di
luv u 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
PART - 7


when prithvi reach there he find that priyank and pihu are looking each other...and priyank put on bangles in pihu wrist.
prithvi watch all this thing. but pihu and priyank not note that prithvi is stand there. so without saying anything he move from there.
when prithvi come outside and set in his car.
phir prithvi bangles nikalta h then unhe dekhta h.
he felt very bed he start his car engine and move a head from there
he driving his car with full speed and that seen moving in his mind..
and ofter some time he reach annas bar...
he enter the bar...
prithvi sat in one corner of bar...
and give order of drink...
he drink many drinks. and that time gulab also enter there he found prithvi drinking and now he is outoff control.
gulab- prithvi tum yha kya kar rhe ho? or kitni jyada pee li h tumne.
pihu ne mana kiya tha na phir bhi...
prithvi- shhh...chillao mat pihu sun legi.
gulab- yha pihu nhi h.
prithvi- are ha pihu to priyank ke sath h na. hmmm...maine dekha tha vo priyank pihu ko bangles pahna raha tha and dono...
gulab- or dono kya prithvi...
prithvi- gulab pihu luvs priyank na.
gulab- ha yaar vo to sab ko pta h.
prithvi- and priyank also luvs pihu
gulab- ha yaar ab tujhe kya hua h tu kyu ye sab bol rha h. and dono bahut khush h ek dusre ke sath.
now prithvi is crying...
prithvi- yaar gulab main bahut bura frnd hu bahut bura...
gulab first time see tears in prithvis eye..
gulab- tu ro kyu rha h or aisa kyo bol rha h..tu bura nhi h yaar sab jante h tere jaisa frnd to kismat wale ko milta h.
prithvi- nhi jhut...sab jhut i m bad...how i m looking pihu in that intention. kaise main apne hi frnd ki gf ko...no main pihu se luv nhi karta nhi...bilkul nhi.
gulab r totaly shock- kya?????? ye tu kya bol rha h tu pihu se luv karta h.
prithvi r silent...
gulab prithvi ki collar pakad ke kahta h- prithvi tu sach bol rha h bol...bol prithvi bol
prithvi now shout ha karta hu main pihu se luv bahut luv karta hu khud se bhi jyada but i want her happiness. and she is happy with priyank and priyank bhi mera sabse accha dost h or uske or pihu ke liye main kuch bhi karuga kuch bhi.
gulab- but prithvi
prithvi- i know main apni feelings control nhi kar sakta isliye main chala jauga yha se un dono se or sab se dur...
gulab- but prithvi ye thik nhi h..
prithvi- i know but main chala jauga gulab chala jauga and prithvi faint there.
gulab jaldi wha se prithvi ko uthata h or phir use room me lekar ata h...



and other side-
priyank- yaar ye prithvi kha rah gya.
mit- lagta h vo chala gya.
priyank- hmmm...ab hame bhi chalna chahiye bahut raat ho gyi h ek kam karo mit tum kriya ko drop kar do main pihu ko kar duga.
mit- thik h chale kriya.
kriya- ha thik h.
then kriya and mit both r move from there.
priyank- chale pihu.
pihu- ha lets go.
after reach pihu room pihu bike se utarti h and jane lagti h to priyank uska hath pakad leta h...
priyank- bas...
pihu- ha gn and bye...
priyank- na aise nhi ek kiss to banta h...
pihu- know his intention. then she moves close to priyank ohhh...to hamare janab ko kis chahiye.
priyank - hmmm
pihu bend and kissed on his cheek.
and move from there...but jaise hi vo room ka dor lagane ko hoti h priyank use rok leta h or room me enter ho jata h. then priyank close the dor and come close to pihu. he hold her from waist and come more close some cm distance between them...
pihu- lagta h aaj aap bahut nougty mood me h
priyank- hmmm
then he more close and there lips r met.
now priyank break the kiss then vo pihu ko utha kar bed par le jata or lights off kar deta h.



other side gulab put on bed and cover him by blanket...
now prithvi in deep sleep.
gulab dekta h prithvi ke hath me bangles h...vo samjh jata h ki ye jarur prithvi ne pihu ke liye liye hoge.
or prithvi ke hath se bangles nikal kar cupbord me rakh deta h.


next morning...
pihu priyank ke chest par apna head rakh kar soyi rahti h...
priyank- pihu its my best night...thank u main jaldi he mom se hamari saadi ke bare me baat karuga.
pihu-  mujhe pta h priyank and i trust u.
ab main tum se ek pal bhi dur nhi rah sakti.
priyank- kiss on her forhead and say- main bhi pihu and both r hugging each othere.
priyank dekhta h 6 baj gye h...thik h pihu ab mujhe chalna chahiye tumhari anty ne dekh liya to problem ho gayegi,
pihu- okkk...bye
priyank come kiss on her lips and say bye swthrt.
priyank bahar jata h but anty use dekh leti h.


other side prithvi in his deep sleep mit come and wake up him prithvi utho kitna so-oge.
prithvi- kya h yaar or mera to sir dard se phata ja rha h.
mit- ab itna piyega to yhi hoga na.
prithvi- tujhe kaise pta
mit gulab ne bataya le ab nimbu pani peele. tujhe mana kiya tha na and tune promise bhi kiya tha pihu se phir.
prithvi- ohhh...sorry yaar but plz pihu ko mat batana vo gussa karegi.
mit- thik h nhi batauga but tu nimbu pani pee. or ab fresh ho ja thodi der me priyank bhi ane wala h.
prithvi- ok yaar.

thodi der me priyank bhi waha pahuch jata h and prithvi bhi fresh hokar taiyar rahta h..
prithvi- so guys kaisa rha kal ka din
mit- yaar mat puch raste bhar kriya sirf tere hi bare me puchti rhi..
prithvi and priyank lough loudly.
mit- mat haso yaar dost ho ki dushman apne frnd ka mazak uda rhe ho.
prithvi- sorry yaar but koi baat nhi sab thik ho jayega..or priyank tera?
priyank- tu hum se kya puch rha h kaha tha kal kaha gayab ho gya tha at least bata ke to jata.
mit- ha prithvi to kalll...
but prithvi bich me hi bol deta h. kuch nhi yaar vo gulab ne urgent bula liya tha isliye bina bataye a gya...tu chod na meri apni bata.
now priyank told them about previous night.
priyank- realy yaar i luv that night...prithvi- kya
prithvi- kya tune...?????aise kaise sab? tune protection to liya tha na.
priyank- what protection...we both r luv each othere and we got marrige soon yaar.
prithvi-phir bhi yaar tune thoda to sochna chahiye.
priyank- tu itna kyo bhadak raha h or vaise bhi ye mera problem h.
tune bhi to khi girls ke sath aisa kiya but hamne to kabhi kuch nhi kaha.
prithvi- shut up priyank mana maine aisa kiya but vo koi real luv nhi tha samjhe tum and luv ka meaning ye sab nhi hota samjhe.
priyank- rahne de tu mujhe samjha raha h luv...jisko kabhi luv hua hi nhi tujhe kya pta luv kya hota h...bada aya mujhe luv ke baare me bolne.
now mit also say- nhi priyank tu galat h prithvi sahi bol rha h.
priyank- tu bhi mit is prithvi ka side le rha h tujhe to pta h na sab iske baare me phir bhi.
mit- chodo na guys rahne de prithvi ye priyank ka mattar h or ab is me mat pad.
priyank- dekh liya tum logo ko or tumhari frndship ko yaar ja rha hu main...

priyank move from there and prithvi and mit stand there...


 
Edited by soniaparte90794 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79

kahan h ye ladki- sona
tumhe goli se udaa dungi-mei tho priyank n pihu ki kiss mei hi itna jall gyi thi- ek dum aag ka gola- ...
phirr vo night dene ki kyaa jurata thi yaar-...
haaye ye modern jamana-!!...

yahan prithvi ko pyaar just realise hoa n yahan pihu ne priyank se saath luv night bhi kerr li-
dil tutt gyaa- chuurr churr ho gya-...
prithvi ko kitna bura laga hoga...

i mean- kal hi tho usko happy realisation of lov hoa h- kiss kaafi tha-...but why the night-complete night wid no protection... 😭..

prithvi-dekha.😡..!!! tum bhi casually sex kerte the! kisi bhi ladki k saath- and yahan priyank ne bhi loot liya tumhara pyaar...😡
tum per bhot gussa aa rha h!...sab per gussa karungi- koi nhi chotega!..
pihu bhi nhi- uss dinn tho kah rhi thi priyank ko- ki tum koi special ho..and aaj itna special bana diya...😡

priyank- i will shot u dead- if u eva eva touch pihu agn- u fool!...ter! #@@ kiii...😡...

gulab tum ache frnd ho yaar-..nice banda h ye!..
aunty ne bhi dekh liyaa...oops!...
oops! kya, acha hoa dekh liyaa...ab tho uss priyank ki band bajegi...😡.

but ye prithvi bhi kuch jyada hi acha frnd h na- shyd bacha lega usse!.😡..uss priyank ko!!...


sona plzz jaldi se iss mess ko sambhalo...bring pihu n prithvi together...TOGETHER...
Edited by sweetsanyo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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goody goody one...
but wo kya tha...?????...baba re, priyank n pihu...ahem ahem...
sachi sachi batao, is priyank is a acha bacha or a bad one???????
n aunty ne bhi dekh liya...le pihu ka kya hoga
n finally prithvi realises...n decided to go away from everyone, well let's see he is able to or not
but then the convo b/w all three of them about true love was nice, but i glad to know prithvi's point of view...
update soon...
luv u... :)

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