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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: soniaparte90794


di abhi entrance exam h uske bad pakka...pakka...wala promise...


o yes yes, entrnce exam do ..ache se dena..

mei bhi de rhi hu..
all d best to u, n me bhi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 6

kuch dino bad sab log market jaate h...
vaha par prithvi, priyank and mit pihu ka wait kar rhe hote h...
priyank-yaar ye ladkiya bhi na kitna wait karati h...
prithvi- are ye to hamara aaj ka problem h but bechare priyank ko to life time karna padega...
then mit and prithvi start loughing.
now priyank looking both of them with angry expresion.
now prithvi control his lough and say-sorry priyank main to mazak kar rha tha...ab jiski gf itni acchi ho to vo aaj kya pure life time wait kar sakta h. kyu mit sahi kha na maine ofter all we r best frnds yaar,,just chill yr.
priyank-ha yr she is so sweet,luvly, cute...
prithvi say in between priyank- ha yr pta h hame tujhe batane ki jarurat nhi h...
priyank- ya i know.
mit- hey guys dekho pihu a rhi h...but uske sath kon h...
prithvi mit ke sir par marte huye khta h- duffar jo bhi ho a to yhi rhi h na dekh lena.
mit stare very kindly and suddenly become excited and say...hey guys she is kriya...i know her...
prithvi and priyank shock by his sudden reaction.
prithvi- ha agar vo kriya h to tu kyu ucchal rha h bandro ki tarha...ha bata..bata...bol na
now both priyank and prithvi start teasing mit.
bata na mit tu hum se chupayga...hum se...
mit- stoppid guys ya i know her...
prithvi- kab se beta...hmmm...
now mit become shy. like girl and prithvi notice this.
mit start saying about all things but pihu and kriya reach there and
pihu say- hey guys...
now all three reply hiii...with sudden reaction.
pihu- kya hua?
priyank- kuch nhi vo tumhe itna late kyu ho gya...
pihu- are vo kriya bhi sath a rhi thi to use me thoda time lag gya.
kriya- ya sorry guys...meri vajah se late ho gya.
mit- koi baat nhi kriya...
now prithvi and priyank looking mit with teasing.
mit pretaned by this and say kyu shi kha na guys.
prithvi and priyank- tu kab galat hota h...hmmm.
pihu- ok guys mit her she is kriya my class mate and kriya (looking toward priyank) he is priyank.
kriya- hiii...priyank nice to meet u i know u very well. many times pihu talking about u.
pihu shy and say- kriya...
priyank giving cute smile to pihu.
pihu-(looking toward prithvi) he is prit...but kriya intrupt and say very excitedly ya i know he is prithvi. prithvi ko kon nhi janta.hiii... prithvi...i m kriya.
now all other three looking carefully to both prithvi and kriya...
prithvi minutely shock her sudden reaction- hiii...kriya nice to meet u.
kriya- ohhh...prithvi i m so lucky becouse mere pass chance h tumhare sath ghumne ka...jiske liye college ki sari ladkiya taras jati h...thank u pihu...thank u very much...
mit now shock(background music-dil ke arma asuo me bah gye
and one more song-dost dost na rha pyar pyar na rha...)
prithvi deere se mit ke kan me kahta h...oye itna santy mat ho main hu na jald hi kuch din bad ye teri gf hogi...
mit- but kaise yaar vo to tujhe like karti h...tune bhi mujhe bataya nhi...thoda mere baare me socha hota.
prithvi- tu dimag mat kha main ise nhi janta yr. agar tu use like karta tha to bataya kyu nhi.
dono apni baat kar rhe hote h tabhi priyank bich me bolta h...
hey guys kya hua...
mit- kuch nhi...with sad tone.
pihu- thik h is se milo ye h mit...
kriya- hiii...mit.say with cute smile.
mit- hiii...kriya.he also response with smile.
prithvi- okkk...guys vaise bhi hum late ho gye h so chale jise jo lena h jo karna h karo lets enjoy guys...
all say together- ya lets go...hahahahahaha...
now pihu and priyank move together with hand in hand. and unke piche mit prithvi and kriya chalte h...prithvi note karta h ki pihu and priyank bhul gye h ki vo log bhi unke sath h to vo kriya or mit se excuse lekar vha se chala jata h...taki unhe bhi thoda time mil sake jis se kriya mit ke karib a jaye...
sab apne apne me lage rahte h idhar prithvi ghumta rahta h tabhi uski nazar jwellary shop me rakhe bangles par padti h vo unhe dekh ke smile karta h or unhe buy kar leta h...
prithvi vo bangles lakar pihu ke pass jata rahta h tabhi...




Edited by soniaparte90794 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
kitna pyaara sa likhti ho yaar tum..
update k saath saath tumhe bhi kala tikka lagane ka mann karta h..
specially the way u write about prithvi- uski saari naghty-panne ko baar baar read karne ka mann karta h...

kitna famous h humara hero! yeyey!..colg ki bandiyaa abhi se flat h prithvi per...

mit ka dil jab tutta na- specially wid thoes background music- mazaa hi aa gya , feel aa gyi ekdum..

n them the way prithvi n mit teasing priyank-...was funny prt.

pihu priyank ka haath padak k chall rhi thi...so sad!... agli baar kuch aisa matt likhna- mera bhi dil tutt jta h- wid background music- chann se jo tutte koi sapna...jug suna suna laage!..

hasna matt, mera dill tutt raha h n u laughing... :P😡..

prithvi s really bada dil wla ki dono love birds pairs ko akele akele chodd diya...

but he is bewakoof-..aapni pihu ko bhi uss priyank se saath chood diya.....


mei na prithvi ka character soch ker hi itna khush ho jati hu...kyaa bataoonn!...
VERY HAPPY-

MUJE AISE LADKE BHOT PASAND H JO AAPNE DOSTT KI HI GF KO CHURA K ISHQ LADATE H...- prithvi is gonna one of dem...first class choor h ye tho ...super thrilling.


isliye muje abhimanyu of student of year bhi psnd h...uska character bas..
verna i like varun more haan!...

Edited by sweetsanyo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

resed!..


madam do one thing..resent ur pms..coz tumne link nhi diya h!... do include link in ur pm always!..

thik h?

wil edit soon..


sorry di main vo jaldi jaldi me bhul gyi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: PariK

Very nice update Sonia. You updated after a long time but I m happy to see an update in my Inbox.

Dear, from next time please provide the link... Mujhe dhundna padta hai ise.

Keep up the good work.


thank u di and sorry main abhi sabko phir se bhejh deti hu...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
finally update toh aya...well part was good...
bechara mit...poor fellow...kriya ane se pehle hi nikal li...
n prithvi brought bangles for pihu...ufff iske liye toh ek hi cheez yaad ati h...
ye ladka haye allah
kaisa h diwana
kitna mushkil h tauba isko samjhana...
update soon...
luv u... :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
commnet edited...


next update jaldi dena haan!.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Loved the ud
bt thoda chota tha
sry dear bt rtmc ke ud padhte padhte man nhi bharta
lovely ud tha
gumne ja rhe h sb hmmm accha or prithvi mit n kriya ki setting karne me laga h
gd gd boy h prithvi
oh he brought bangles 4 pihu
so cute na
bt prithvi galat baat kisi or ki gf par line nhi maarte beta
bad manners
bt yahan chalega kyunki hum sb v yhi chahte h

lekin end me hua kya
ud soon
luv u
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

kitna pyaara sa likhti ho yaar tum..

update k saath saath tumhe bhi kala tikka lagane ka mann karta h..
specially the way u write about prithvi- uski saari naghty-panne ko baar baar read karne ka mann karta h...

kitna famous h humara hero! yeyey!..colg ki bandiyaa abhi se flat h prithvi per...

mit ka dil jab tutta na- specially wid thoes background music- mazaa hi aa gya , feel aa gyi ekdum..

n them the way prithvi n mit teasing priyank-...was funny prt.

pihu priyank ka haath padak k chall rhi thi...so sad!... agli baar kuch aisa matt likhna- mera bhi dil tutt jta h- wid background music- chann se jo tutte koi sapna...jug suna suna laage!..

hasna matt, mera dill tutt raha h n u laughing... :P😡..

prithvi s really bada dil wla ki dono love birds pairs ko akele akele chodd diya...

but he is bewakoof-..aapni pihu ko bhi uss priyank se saath chood diya.....


mei na prithvi ka character soch ker hi itna khush ho jati hu...kyaa bataoonn!...
VERY HAPPY-

MUJE AISE LADKE BHOT PASAND H JO AAPNE DOSTT KI HI GF KO CHURA K ISHQ LADATE H...- prithvi is gonna one of dem...first class choor h ye tho ...super thrilling.


isliye muje abhimanyu of student of year bhi psnd h...uska character bas..
verna i like varun more haan!...


thank u very very much di
ab mujhe bahut jyada accha lag rha h
apke cmnt se to mera dil baag baag ho gya
main next upd jaldi dugi
thank u
luv u😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ridzzi

finally update toh aya...well part was good...
bechara mit...poor fellow...kriya ane se pehle hi nikal li...
n prithvi brought bangles for pihu...ufff iske liye toh ek hi cheez yaad ati h...
ye ladka haye allah
kaisa h diwana
kitna mushkil h tauba isko samjhana...
update soon...
luv u... :-)


thank u di
i like u r cmnt
luv u tooo...
...😊

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