love life and lust (rtmc ff)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hay friends
its my first ff. iread all ff which is writen by all fobulous writer i know i m not good in story
writing but plz accept my this small ff.
i will tri to give nice story.
but please forgive me for any mistake.
luv u all rt mc fans...😊

intro...

PRITHVI MALHOTRA (rajat tokas) - He is true play boy and most handsome and cool guy with great sense of humor. he is lot of affairs with girls but not only one he soon got bored with one girl and he change girlfrnd in 2 or 3 days. prithvi is like a free birdthere was know one to control him but dispite of all the hilarious activities he love to do always he maintain a gud equilibrium between father expectation, study and ofcourse girls.
His philosophy of love was unbelievable he thought love was nothing but need of mind and moreover, a need of body.
he loves his father most and his friends mit and priyank.

PRATAP MALHOTRA
his father was a buisnessman from satara in maharastra, his father have good reputation and also good political connection in that area, And most important thing was that hi had abundant trust in his son.

MIT- Nice and pure heart guy. he is very close to prithvi.

PRIYANK- He is also have gud nature and he was from orthodox family, he was possessive about anything he had. he is belongs to middle class family. he is honest and great frnd. and priyank loves pihu.

PIHU(MUGDHA) - She was cool, modern girl and beautiful. gud behaviour and innocent girl.intelligent girl of college.she was really lovely friend. she also love priyank.

GAUTUM JOSHI- pihu's dad he is very carring and he loves her daugther more and give her all freedom because he have ful faith on his pihu.


prolong-

this is the story of 4 friends. they all are very close they know everything about each other.and their friendship like iron and zinc.
but one day there life get huge turn and all things destroy.

according to prithvi life is simple lust but prithvi not have lust for everything. he was enjoying life by his way, and it was his style of living.
according to priyank life was all about love, relations and sacrifices.
and mit he had no interest in this type of things. he always kept away from this affairs and didn't talk about any girls.

part 1

in ahmedabad
it was a cramming day and after office hours i going to catch my company bus i took my mobile from company security cabin where we deposit our mobile during office hours and i shocked to see 20 missed calls from prithvi. after that i caught the bus and called him.

his phone rang with the same caller tune- chikani chameli chup ke...'idiot sala nahi sudharega' mit muttered to himself.
prithvi pick up the phone- hey mit where were u for 8 hour, to hell with ur company yaar! why dont u keep the phone with u?

" arey yar jara saans to le, stop cursing my company buddy and tell me what happened? why r u calling me like a monster" mit reply to prithvi.
'yaar, who else should i call, listen devil i am getting married and u are the most required person there, come as soon as possible, because my bride will never marry me unless u r there'- prithvi.

hey buddy i cant believe u r going to marry, who is that foolish girl. and for god sake ask her once again if she is sure about it - mit with surprise and shock.

'yes she is damn sure dont worry about that and u know her very well'- prithvi continued his series of surprises.
'what! who is she?
she is pihu- prithvi said after little pause.
'are u joking? try something else, it wont work' mit was just shocking by listening her name how can he?...
'i m not at all in the mood of joking'- now prithvi voice become serious and firm.
now mit totaly shock how this possible.
'prithvi i will call u later when i reach my room ' mit spluttered hastily and hanged the phone.

when mit reach his room he start doing packing he wanted to go immediately to mumbai and suddenly his phone rang.
he picked up the phone.
"hey mit i know what r u thinking, i will tell u everything but first fall u should come mumbai and one more thing pihu want to say something to u.
he gives phone to pihu.
"hi mit" it was pihu voice 'mit come here we both need u'
'dont worry pihu i m coming there tomorrow morning'- mit was worried. he talking like her father.
"we are waiting for u come soon"- she said and disconnect the call.



after this mit will ready for going mumbai. now he set in bus and thinking about past- now story going to flashback...
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luv u all buddys. enjoy it..😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
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very very interesting part

wanna know more abt these characters n the situation they r in

is prithvi blackmailing pihu to get married?????

pata nahi aage kya hoga n past me kya hua tha


par lagta hai kuch power ,politics , ego , love , lust se bhari ye story hone wali hai😊

Edited by pranita1202 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congratulations dear 4 new ff
story seems intresting
prologue n cs is vry nice
eagerly waiting 4 nxt part
cnt soon
luv u
Edited by tejjo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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well congo for new RM FF...story seems strong and intresting one too...
prithvi is getting married to pihu...waiting to know about their past...
update soon...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 2

prithvi, mit and priyank they are best buddys. there frndship start when they are class 11th.
it was the day before one final reasult of first year. mit wake up and his phone rang he picked up and it is prithvi- hey mit where a u? u devil.(devil was prithvis favarite word to use start or end of any conversation).
mit reply lessily- i m sleeping yaar.
"u bloody monster how can u sleep, tomorrow is our reasult day"- prithvi voice become frustrated.
"so what yaar? jo hoga dekha jayega .vaise bhi saal bar kuch nahi kiya ab sochne se kya fayda. now at least u let me sleep.
but prithvi is prithvi he never change in any cost.so prithvi goes mit room with his bike and start blowing sound of the horn.
now mit totaly disturb he wake up and going downstreght.
prithvi shouted on mit- u devil, look at me, my head is brust thinking of the reasult and u r enjoying day dreaming.
he know there is no use to say anything to prithvi so he go to take shower then both are went to priyank house after picked him they all are goes to "college katta". where they sit every evening and spend lots of time together.
"u know what is the time right now bloody fool its morning 10:30 and u called us to smoke with u on this ground r u gone mad? - priyank shouted on prithvi with cigarette one hand.
"what would do yar, i m scared for the reasult. - prithvi answered.
okey yaar , i m also worried for our reasult chalo jo hoga dekha jayega.- priyank said
"hey guys i have plan... now prithvi opening an idiot box of his mind once again.
lets go annas bar frnds and celebrate today itself, we dont know whats there for us in tomorrow ...prithvi eyes are looking like a kid who find something very interesting to play with.
they all r agree with prithvi and start there bikes and moveing towords annas bar.ofter landed there. party started and countdown of bottle also begain they started around 11 and now its 3:30. they all are fully talli and prithvi started his mouth factory.
"u know guys what brought us here...its our bloody education system which frustraled us in such a way that we were force to drink this bloody alcohol. we r like a cockroch no.no.no sorry cockroch have better life then us because for entire year we things of book, exam and score. and thats all , and what is our achivement? just one marksheet which use to get a job then earn money. thats it. is this life?. no guys no. now he stood on table now its time to take oath. prithvi fortunately handled his weight somehow after fluctuating twice.
they all take oath that they are change this system for next upcoming generation. after finished 6 bottle they enjoy lot all night.

next day they all three are in prithvi room and one other person also present there he is gulab prithvis room partner. it was 9 and today it was reasult day.
mit got up and waking up his both frnds prithvi and priyank.
prithvi room is totaly untidely his books cloths are meshup.prithvi is smoke every single minute and the bottles of beer he used to drink at every night at annas bar.

after they all are wake up they are ready and goes to canteen for breakfast which is situated near prithvis room.
after sitting on benches then ramesh coming towords them with smiley face.
prithvi in angry tone- come devil he know this dracula always smile at wrong time and this time his smile might be indication of something very dangerous.
"hey guys i have copy of reasult so u tell me ur roll no then i will tell u. u r passed or failed- ramesh say very innocent way.
"go way u fool, u never let us live with peace" prithvi shouted on him suddenly very angrily.
then mit interfere and said jane de na yaar dekh lete hai aj nahi to kal pata chalna hi hai.
now he give his roll no to ramesh. he check and said- u pass.
after that priyank give his no and hi also pass now prithvi become helpless and he handed his roll no to ramesh. he check the list and shout loudly - u r pass prithvi. they all r happy.
so they make plan of movie. in evening they all are goes for movie they are waiting for priyank.
now prithvi anger grows up he picked his phone and call priyank but he heared his bike sound.
"oh there comes the devil" prithvi said.
mit and prithvi lookes that direction but next moment both are stood shocked there was beautiful and decent girl with priyank she was fair in color and looking great in blue frock salwar suit. her curly hair were rolling over her cheeks. she was looking very confident.

the first thing mit did after watching her he shut the open mouth of prithvi, prithvi lookes her and get lost in her beauti...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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very very interesting part

wanna know more abt these characters n the situation they r in

is prithvi blackmailing pihu to get married?????

pata nahi aage kya hoga n past me kya hua tha


par lagta hai kuch power ,politics , ego , love , lust se bhari ye story hone wali hai😊

thanks di for ur lovely comment di .😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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congratulations dear 4 new ff
story seems intresting
prologue n cs is vry nice
eagerly waiting 4 nxt part
cnt soon
luv u
thanks di for ur comment
di i will send part 2
luv u di 😊 one more time thank u so much😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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well congo for new RM FF...story seems strong and intresting one too...
prithvi is getting married to pihu...waiting to know about their past...
update soon...
luv u...😊
thank u di for ur comment.
luv u di😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely part sonia

hmmm result ka darrr by god bahut bura hota h😃
bt at last sab pass ho gye thats good
oh prithvi bhi pass ho gya wah wah
n ye kya next moment me movie ka plan ban gya
priyank ke sath pihu h na😡
prithvi ke saath chahiye yr
but waiting for next part
ud soon
love u
Edited by tejjo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh very nice part...sweety...
poor guys were frustated because of their result...ah it's usual...but they got passed and at last that was mug's right????????...pathu is fully flat on her...😆
update soon...
luv u...😊

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