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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
PART- 5



now they all reach there they seem pihu standing there college campus all alone and then they move there bike toward pihu. pihu stand there with full of anger.
mit start talking to her hey pihu we all seen your dance it just fantastic i must say ur fabulous dancer.
now pihu glare on them and say oh realy mit u got time for seeing my dance in between ur fight and prithvi why r u standing silently? tum nahi kahoge mere dance ke bare me.
they all stand there with head down they know they all r doing fight in between pihu dance.
vo.. pihu vo...sab...i mean its just...- prithvi got nervous.
ha bolo main sune rahi hu prithvi and how much u r drinking beer. now they all feel same on themeself.
guys i call u here for taking promise that they didn't drink in future. pihu say with forwarding her hand toward them.
now prithvi said - this not fair u cant do this with us. alcohol to hamari best friend hi u know dukh or sukh ki sathi. prithvi said with making childish face.
thik hi u all enjoy with ur frnd and dont try to talk with me understand - pihu say with more angrily.
priyank come toward her and say tum mujhse bhi bat nahi karogi.
kyo tum special ho kya jo tumhe nahi kahugi she just brust on priyank.
priyank got nervous and prithvi and mit started loughing on priyank.
shut up u guys and just forget me kabhi sochana mat ki tum log kisi pihu se mile they. good bye- pihu say and move from there.
but before she go from there prithvi just come in front of her and block her way and say colly yaar i mso sorry ab maaf karde hum promise karte hai na hi aaj ke bad hum drink karege or na hi smoking karenge ab khush. now pihu looked him he is looking so handsome and she got samething different in his dark brown eyes but she didn't know what si this.
and prithvi say ur r more important for me then other things. now they got eye lock but only for same second and he come on reality from world of her magical eyes.
and both got distureb by priyank and mit voice - ya pihu hum promise karte hi.
now pihu is happy and they all moves toward there respective places...


thank u next part cooming after half an hour😊

Edited by soniaparte90794 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: soniaparte90794


oh no dear everything is not going in wrong direction...agar story main twist nahi hoga toh story main maza kaise ayega...and about pathu well let's see what you have kept for them...😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
both the parts were too good...
pihu's dance was going on and all were busy in fighting with agni,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,oh ho so budhu saare k saare...and pathu is manaying pihu and she is getting attracted towards him...''ae dill bata ye tujhe kya hua kiu h tu bekarar itna, kahi pyar na ho jaye''...
update soon...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: ridzzi


thanks di mujhe laga aap logo ko accha nani laga but ab main
is story ko acche se likhane ka try karugi thanks di
love u😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: ridzzi

both the parts were too good...

pihu's dance was going on and all were busy in fighting with agni,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,oh ho so budhu saare k saare...and pathu is manaying pihu and she is getting attracted towards him...''ae dill bata ye tujhe kya hua kiu h tu bekarar itna, kahi pyar na ho jaye''...
update soon...
luv u...😊


thank u di thanks for lovely reply😊
love u😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
prt 5...
uff! super duper speed se update aa rahe h...
ab tho muje bhi apni speed supernatural krni padi h...

hoye oye!!...
kinna shona kaam kiya h pihu ne...drinking chuda di...
bachi ko iss baat per mri taraf se shabashi...
chaa gyi tussi pihu...

dialogue of prt ws- kyu priyank, tum koi special ho????hihihhihihiihih...
yaani vo special nhi h pihu k liye...
coz special tho prithvi h na...


n prithvi k liye special is pihu- isaliye he firgot all drinking fr pihu...
wow...eyelock- her lovstry ka 1st step...


track is getting romantic...

shyd next update per cmnt abhi nhi de paungi...
kal paakka...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
saare cmnt poore ho gye h... phewww...
bhot speedy nikali sona tho...ek k baad ek update...


but muje bhot maza aa raha h...
yipiieee
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
yeh part five tha ya part five ka promo
i mean itna chotu sa
itne se mera kya hoga😡
just kidding😉 yr

nice part
chalo pihu ne un sab ki smoking n drinking toh chudwa di but yeh bich me kya tha...eye lock between pihu n prithvi???is that possible when we love someone then there is chance to love someone else or attracted towards them at the same time...😕but yaha jo ho rha i think accha ho rha h kyunki mein bhi yahi chahti hun from the starting to rtmc ke case me accha h...
loved the part...next part kaha h half an hour bolke kaha gyi sonia next part jaldi do na

im waiting here
update soon
love u
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
sorry di but i not feeling well so just becoz of dis main upd nahi kar pai. Or one think di i love ur comment pad kar acha laga. Ha di apne kaha ki kya ek hi time par pihu kisi or ki taraf attract ho sakati hi lekin di usne prithvi ki aakho me kuch alag dekha or vo soch me pad gayi lekin vo prithvi se abhi luv nahi karti vo to priyank se hi bahut luv karti hi or prithvi to uska best buddy hi. To aisa hi di. Ha chote se part ke bad main kuch dino bad jaldi update dugi. Sorry di. And luv u..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

prt 5...

uff! super duper speed se update aa rahe h...
ab tho muje bhi apni speed supernatural krni padi h...

hoye oye!!...
kinna shona kaam kiya h pihu ne...drinking chuda di...
bachi ko iss baat per mri taraf se shabashi...
chaa gyi tussi pihu...

dialogue of prt ws- kyu priyank, tum koi special ho????hihihhihihiihih...
yaani vo special nhi h pihu k liye...
coz special tho prithvi h na...


n prithvi k liye special is pihu- isaliye he firgot all drinking fr pihu...
wow...eyelock- her lovstry ka 1st step...


track is getting romantic...

shyd next update per cmnt abhi nhi de paungi...
kal paakka...


thank u di. Thanks for sweet and luvly cmnt. Main kuch din bad hi upd de paugi so sorry di. Luv u...
Edited by soniaparte90794 - 12 years ago

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