love life and lust (rtmc ff)

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Riya

@soniaparte90794

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

main in thino ki condition se relate kar sakti hoon
my result is also due

saare branches ka aa gaya but humari n doosri branch ka kab aayega pata nahi. roz mumbai university ki site open karke dekhti rehti hoon. result ka toh pata nahi but site down ho jati hai toh lagta hai ke result upload ho raha hai .but than again no notification

enuf of my rants n rona dhona

chalo inn boys ko dekhte hai , prithvi kya bas devil devil kehta

then i guess mugdha ko dekhne ke baad "devilishly beautiful " kahega

boys hai bade frustated

chalo doosra din aa gaya result day

prithvi ko bada ghussa aata hai ramesh pe, chalo everyone pass

wow mugs ko entry ho gayi
mit to prithvi= mu bandh kar else makhi ghus jayegi😆😛
thanks di for lovely comment.
i enjoy very much di👏
love u di😊

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Riya

@soniaparte90794

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

res

lovely part sonia

hmmm result ka darrr by god bahut bura hota h😃

bt at last sab pass ho gye thats good

oh prithvi bhi pass ho gya wah wah

n ye kya next moment me movie ka plan ban gya

priyank ke sath pihu h na😡

prithvi ke saath chahiye yr

but waiting for next part

ud soon

love u

thanks di
i like ur comment and ha bahut jaldi prithvi sath me hoge
bas di thoda sa wait
luv u di😊

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Riya

@soniaparte90794

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Well a nice one
so all went for a picnic...n mit n pathu is trying to help priyank ah ha but it seems like they didn't need to
cuz priyank n pihu are already together, walking hands in hands, ah pathu apne hi per pe kuladi chala raha h paglu
but i want to ask one thing, why r u showing pathu so dumb?
Update soon
luv u :-)
sorry di i know all thigs going wrong direction
but di bas thoda sa wait kariye sab jald he accha ho jayega
kyoki koi chah kar bhi prithvi pihu ke sath bura nahi kar sakta
and pathu not dumb di bas age age padiye aapko sab pata chal jayega
thanks di for ur lovely comment
luv u 😊

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Riya

@soniaparte90794

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

I know sabko bahut gussa a raha hoga 😡
but ab story aise hi jayegi main kya karu or aage to sab mujhe kaccha hi chaba jayege😡😡 so i decided ki main jaldi se yhe flashback jaldi se end karke apni real story par aajau😊
so thoda sa sab wait kariyega plz😊

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Riya

@soniaparte90794

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

PART 4

'You monkey, what u thought we plan this picnic for the sake of my b'day only or just to pass time on this hills and talking on pollution and traffic problem of city- prithvi brust on him.
then what will i do i cant dare more then this yaar.-priyank out brust his feeling with little frustration.
'be a man! she loves u and she is waiting for proposal from ur side. be bold yaar - prithvi now become aggressive to tought his philosophy.
ok what if she rejected me what will happend with our frndship? - priyank was still confused.
'look priyank this hesitation is ok but dont u think that u cheating her by hiding ur imotions by her.- prithvi say very politely.
now priyank agree and prithvi say - when u will proposed her or if she accept or not u just give us call or msg ok.
priyank nodded and goes toward pihu with two coffee cup.it about 45 minute or no msg or call from priyank side so prithvi get more ager to know the situation. now his mobile phone beeped it was priyank msg amd prithvi shouted excitedly.
' read it then yaar fast-mit say with more excitedly.but this excitment go vanished and now they both are serious after reading msg. msg is -'come soon! big crisis'.
oh no prithvi react with frustration and they running toward them. lets go prithvi we have to solve this? - mit
when they r reach there. they both are in shocked becoz they both looking seriously and pihu covered her face with palms. she seemed to be crying. they r try to calm her, but now pihu start loughing vigorously. and they both are shocked. yes ... she accepted priyank propasal. they all r very happy for pihu and priyank.
in evening they all r celebrate prithvi b'day and after coming back from hill station they r moves toward college katta.
and prithvi goes to dropped pihu to her hostel.after reach there destination.
okey prithvi happy b'day to u again and oh i forget to give u ur b'day gift.
' oh to kis bat ka wait kar rahi ho madam.jaldi do. prithvi with excitment
she took one wrapped gift from her bag. and prithvi open it.
it is one expencive and lovely wrist watch.
prithvi r u like it- pihu
oh not only like, i love this gift and i will keepit with me always thanks pihu.- prithvi with smile.
so bye prithvi and thanks for dropped me.- pihu
its my pleasure rajkumari sanyogita.- prithvi
gn...oh maaf kariyega shubh ratri rajkumar prithviraj.- pihu say and they both r brust in loughter.now she went toward hostel and prithvi shouted from back-hey i m not ur prithviraj. she ignore and goes from there.
now prithvi give sweet smile then he also go from there.

after some month they all become best buddies. and now pihu arrange all there meetings. and they all r enjoying very much there life goes very excitedly and pihu or priyank also spend much time with eachother.
prithvi also enjoy his affairs with girls.and she got one of the room near prithvis room. they are mostly doing partys on prithvis tarrace.

now after one year, in their college conduct annual function and pihu also participated. pihu doing dance in annual function.

after one month,
on annual function they all r waiting for pihu dance.
then agni comes there and start tounting them.( agni was one of the bad guy of college and he not like prithvi mit and priyank actually he jealous from them specialy prithvi.becoz he most handsome guy of college and all girls drool on him so he always compair himself with prithvi and he also like pihu.)
prithvi know this he always irreted him. and now prithvi was more angry when he say- kya baat hi priyank aaj kal tu or pihu kuch jyada hi sath rahte hi kyo prithvi ko reject kar diya kya jo pihu tere sath rahane lagi...and start loughing. (agni know ki koi girl prithvi ke charming look se use ignore nahi kar sakti but agnis alway irreted him more than he want.)
now prithvi got from chair for breaking his all bones but priyank and mit stop him and said jane de na yar tujhe to pata hi ki vo tujhse kitna jealous hota hi vo bas thujhe pareshan karta hi.
now prithvi said angrily lets go guys. mit- par kaha?.
prithvi - annas bar.
what r u gone mad, after half an hour pihu performance start - priyank
prithvi didn't care and start his bike and goes to annas bar. now mit and priyank also follow him.
after reach there they all r got fully talliii...
mit - hey guys only 45 minutes left for pihu dance.
then all are moves toward college and after reach there anchor annouced- so next performance is pihu joshi.
prithvi mit and priyank start clapping and goes too last sit and stood on table and enjoying her dance. song is..oh piya,oh piya le ke doli aa.
hey priyank she is calling u..oh piya oh piya. no no oh priyank oh priyank and started loughing.- agni said
now prithvi could not resist himself and goes to agni and started beating him so hardly. he give one pounch on his stomach and he fall down on one iron bench and bleeding start from his head. now all student gethered there and there teacher mr agrwal come there and stop prithvi.
' tumhe kya lagta hi hum sab yaha wwe dekhne aye hi. just behave ur self mr malhotra.and maintane descipline otherwise i will cll ur father.
but sir yeh sab pahle agni ne start kiya - prithvi
are u drunk, how discusting mr malhotra, dont repeat this type of things otherwise i will take strict action on u and u agni now u r restricated from this college and call ur father i want to talk with him.
now programme started again and they three goes to from there to college katta...
after sometime prithvi got msg - i want to meet u guys come our college.
(oh one thing pihu and prithvi are in same college they r doing BE and priyank doing computer science and mit doing farmacy.)...

Edited by soniaparte90794 - 12 years ago

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

mastt h ekdum mastt...

prithvi kya acting h bande ki...pihu k samne no monkey no evil...being a acha bacha...

aapne frnd k liye picnic bhi...

putting jugaad...

kashh koi idea hota isko ki vo aapni hi life chupatt kerr rha h...

bacha h , nadaan bacha...samjh jayega ki lov at first sight ho gya h usse...lost in her beauty ho gya tha...ohooo!!...

priyank being her advocate- haan, muje bhi psnd nhi vo scn,..

acha h prithvi ne jhadd laga di uski...

ab nxt update...

Edited by sweetsanyo - 12 years ago

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

update 4 tho ekdum super duper fastt tha...

ek dum tumhari update giving speed ki tarah...

ek k baad ek kaand...

ahweee... ushh! ushh!!!...😭...proposal accpect kerr liya...

hai...??? aisa kaise ho gya bhai???

galat galat ananay...ananay...we wnt justice..!~!!!..

rona aa raha h...

oye, prithvi the warrior...beating beating n defeating is his fav kaam...hobby...

yahan bhi ek agni h- haaye, iss naam se tho muje bhot problem h..by god ki kasam...

okey...pihu ko taunt kiya n prithvi ne agni ko dhoo diya... :P hhehehehihihi...

mastt update, gud...

ab ek aur update...

Edited by sweetsanyo - 12 years ago

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riya

@Riyaa16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

both parts were nice

bt our prithvi is not a tubelight yr😕he is smarter than anyone

loved both parts

so pihu ne proposal accept kar liya

agni ki bones bhi tut gyi

pihu ka dance bhi ho gya

n agni ko college se nikal bhi diya

wah ji wah kya baat h

ksh!prithvi ne pihu ko propose kiya hota to mein or khush hoti

now waiting for next part

lovely story

update soon

love u

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Riya

@soniaparte90794

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

both parts were nice

bt our prithvi is not a tubelight yr😕he is smarter than anyone

loved both parts

so pihu ne proposal accept kar liya

agni ki bones bhi tut gyi

pihu ka dance bhi ho gya

n agni ko college se nikal bhi diya

wah ji wah kya baat h

ksh!prithvi ne pihu ko propose kiya hota to mein or khush hoti

now waiting for next part

lovely story

update soon

love u

thanks di mujhe pata hi main story ko ekdum express ki tarha bhaga rahi hu
or main jaldi se yhe flashback complete karna chahti hu or ha di i know ki prithvi tubelight nahi hi
uske liye sorry and i like ur comment di
luv u😊

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Riya

@soniaparte90794

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Congrats Sonia for posting RTMC ff

Sorry for commenting late but I read all the parts and I must say It's a nice attempt to portray each character 😊

This story gonna have many colors I.e. friendships, politics, power, love and needs...

Continue the good work.

Thanks for PM
thank u so much di
i will try to give a nice story to u all
i lo ve your comment thank u ones again
and love u😊

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