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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Can't imagine what Shaym told her which led to her taking such a big step.

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

This was so painful to read...

Looks like Shyam manipulated Khushi and she f**ked up royally...And she realized her mistake after 2 years ..

Brilliantly written!

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roseycheek

@roseycheek

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

What a treat! Two updates in one day! Yay!loved how u wrote khushi's emotional turmoil...and everything else!

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nee

@march2011

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Barbie my heart cries for her...a mistake has shaken a foundation her relationship with her dear ones...I seriously feel like crying as I understand that loneliness when people try to evade u or make u feel invisible...

so i was right shyam did have a hand in this

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snehashetty34

@snehashetty34

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

loved the update:) thanks for the pm..
i hope she comes out of the shell soon..

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

It was heartbreaking to read Khushi POV, but she has accepted the lies she was told and appears to have returned stronger and wiser...The first chapter indicates a rift between Arnav and Shyam, along with Anjali refusing to even entertain the thought. This chapter provides some proof that Shyam is the crux of what happened, but the why is still to be revealed. I hope you continue to portray Khushi as a strong character not afraid to speak the truth to Arnav. Who I hope in return, if their love meant anything, will allow her to say what she has to..

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Brilliant update, loved reading from khushi's point of view, reading the update it gave a clear insight to how khushi is feeling. So Shyam was the reason that khushi left, I can't believe that vile man he actually provided her with some proof, but at least khushi realised that it was all a lie even though it was two years later. I love the last part, where she would rather live in her dream world than in reality as its to confusing. Continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#208

I feel sorry for khushi. She fell for someones trap and now paying a very big price for it. She is right about being alone. It was sad when she was remembering the scene with Arnav. So it was shyam who played with their lifes? Does Arnav about that? Cant waig to read more and thanks for the pm