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Dhrashtee

@dhrashtee

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#211

Just read your FF since Kalyaani had suggested it. So far I m waiting to find out Khushi's part of the story… for now, all I can say is that she has not earned any sympathy from me yet!

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Frida

@Frida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

I came across this FF today morning & read all the updates in 1 go.. I must say - it's a beautiful story & your way of story telling is amazing too. Loved each & every chapter & can't wait to read more.

Pld do PM me when you update next.

Thanks

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frenzyy

@frenzyy

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#213

so much agony! great update!

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#214

Didn't it know that I was a lonely, lonely person being its only friend?

You had me right in that line. Khushi's fears and loneliness was clearly depicted in those words.

So I was correct, Shyam had a hand in separating Khushi and Arnav. I wonder what made him take that step, he is getting funded by Arnav anyways.

It was sad Khushi remembering the happy days, the time when she was a part of the family, when she felt like she was a part of the family. She was now an outsider in the family... it's really sad to see her holding onto the last of shards of her happy days. She is happy and content reminiscing the old days. But the sad thing is, she has no one to share it with. Who could she smile at? or laugh about it?... I wonder if Payal can tolerate her for long.

I cannot wait for her side of the story to reveal. What could possibly have happened?

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#215

Shyam manipulated Khushi in this one. Really sad how so many lives were affected because of one person. Shyam has a lot to answer for. Hope they all get together and teach him a lesson.

This story is so gripping. I am a person who doesn't read sad stories or watch sad films, especially after my illness. But this story is one of those rare ones I just have to read. I wait for your updates.

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733619

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#216

Oh she seems so sad. Why can't they see that.

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citi

@citi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#217

Chapter 8 and 9...so much felt, so much left unsaid, emotions ignored and dignity maintained. Hoping that the widening chasms between Khushi and the rest are bridged with time, especially between the sisters,

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#218

that's awesome piece i ever read

thanks to kalyani...u leave the link of that FF on her updates

love the story

You make me cry in every update especially 9 the chapter

Old memories and today's harsh reality

Seriously I want to know why Khushi run away on her wedding day

what change

Because of this many lives suffer

Still I can't see Khushi pain

seriously it too much for me to handle

iqra

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Mariam Khan

@Mxk3444

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#219

I'm so happy kalyaani recommended this to everyone. This story is absolutely wonderful thank you for writing this :) can't wait to read the next update

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#220

Oh wow! Khushi has alot of making up to do! I wonder Shyam convinced her off... Incriminating evidence against Arnav for sure!!! Maybe that's where the hostility on Arnav's part comes from!!

I hope khushi can make amends with Payal... She needs her sister!