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glitter5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

yayy i got d second place

superb update

from d update i am guessing shyam is d reason 4 her to go away

i am used to shyam being as vilian

Edited by glitter5 - 12 years ago

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sslmay11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Thanks for ur pm. Eagerly waiting for khushi's happy dream...

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-memorable-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

got goosebumps while reading so much agony

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thesis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

I cant tell u how glad i am signed in am glad i could read all the chaos in kushis head and shyam enters the picture i cant begin to tell u how much this story is occupyin my mind i am glad u came up with this concept and i appreciate rhe effort u put into regular updates a huge thanku

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-Shalu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Oh man! Shyam is the villain here too? Arrghh, what seeds of doubt did he plant on Khushi's head? It's sad that not just herself but also people she love had to face the consequences of her one big error.

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#196

Here on kalyani's suggession.. shall read n then let u know my thoughts.

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Priya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Awesome.khushi's pain and her regret,loneliness all were there.and silence is not the way to mend her mistake..as much as difficult it is,she need to take a step and talk it out with her family and arnav.

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aysh05

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Kalyani sent me to you. She said you have penned a beautiful story... I have no words of my own to praise your talent. Simply I just would like to thank you for another tale of what ifs.

Edited by aysh05 - 12 years ago

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shr1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#199

Hello,

What a wonderful writer you are! Such a nice FF it is, I read all the nine parts at a go. It was a good experience to read through Khushi's point of view. It is full of anguish but I'm totally glued to the story and eagerly waiting to read ahead :)

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_disha_

@_disha_

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#200

"I had royally f**ked up. And I had to, had to at any cost fix it.

For the first time in seven years, I dream a happy dream."

These lines for some reason give me hope for the future !!

Acknowledgement of her feelings is already a step taken in the right direction,, goes to see how you present what others feel towards this endorsement.

Khushi may have been grossly wrong but then she is a human!

PS:Reversal of roles here i guess between Khushi and Arnav !!

Edited by _disha_ - 12 years ago