Smitar's OS:Knowing Khushi Part 9 Page 123 (Mar 4)

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SmitaCletus

@SmitaCletus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

U've captured Khushi's character perfectly.

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Amrita

@Amti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

My Goodnesss... Why did you stop there?///// I want more...more more...

Awesome seriees an yeah...Smita is back...Loved it...and thank you rumala for the PM...It was badly needed... Love you for that

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Smitaa m so loving this !!!!

khushi's presentation of herself was so wow that asr could only sit stumped !!!

way to go smitaaa !!! 😳

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@Jhalak29

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Wow interesting start😃

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

It's damn interesting... I can't think of anything as in what Khusi had come to talk about with the 100rs note...
please continue /post the next one soon...

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Siya

@Siya6490

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Very interesting os... love to read more... continue soon

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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Wow, that was interesting and intriguing!
Lovely start, but I hope you are planning to continue this and it is not a one-shot like the title says... coz I really want to know what Khushi wants!!

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IPKlover

@IPKlover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Oh my God!!! This seems amazing...It seems as if I am seeing the real Arnav and real Khushi (if that makes sense)...❤️

Why is it just an OS??? Make it into a SS or better yet a FF 😃😃😃😃

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Yayayayay!! I love how you started writing again instantly!!

This one shot was just amazing! I love love loved it!

The way she came in a knock him outta breath! But he wasn't about to let that happen! Typical ASR!

I love the way she figured out his schedule! That makes me more interested about what she came to talk about!

And the little money scene! Amazing! I did not expect that when she dug through her bag it was to PAY him for his EXPENSIVE TIME! That was brilliant!

Waiting for next one shot :D