Smitar's OS:Knowing Khushi Part 9 Page 123 (Mar 4) - Page 42

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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic writing! So Arnav is contemplating Khushi's words about Shyam exposing her as the villain when she is not, that was refreshing since after the last update I was thinking he didn't even bother to spare a thought about it😃 Khushi is as adorable as you can get in this story, no wonder already Arnav has started feeling attracted towards her. The way she was talking hidden under the bed sheet so she won't get caught, and her lengthy answer for his question of talking to boyfriends that was so damn hilarious, Khushi at her best! Now comes the best part the great ASR was eagerly waiting until she calls him I know it was mixed with anticipation about other things as well,since he wanted to know about Shyam's new plans, but nevertheless that was such an aww moment and what followed afterwards was even more sweet,him asking her to come and meet him and almost disclosing that he wants to meet her but quickly covering it up by using planning as an excuse. Again great writing eagerly waiting for the next update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
well what else did ya expect them to do
with you laughing and that too this loudly mate
they are gonna be astonished right
man this khushi i tell ya
even in midst of all this tension she still manages to perk him up
what BFs dude yahan inhe saans lene ka mauka nahin milta hai aur aap inke BFs ke baare mein pooch rahe hain
wow he really was waiting for her call desperately right
okay maybe not desperately but he was anxious to talk to her
hmmm who would have thought that ASR would be waiting for a call from khushi this much
and his family know nothing of it yet
they may not know of it later too
cant wait for how they tackle creepy crawly

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Posted: 12 years ago
oh god...i laughed like hell with arnav in this part! its just awsm,superb,fantastic part!!!!!!
i am very much impressed with this Arnav u know! he trusted khushi,n now the way he's supporting is really nice. and our khushi she is like that,always smiling though she's facing n hiding enormous pain and makes people smile with her!!!
all n all again a fabulous part...i like each n every word u writes Smita! thank u!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is a fantastic storyline, as usual beautifully being written Smita.
Would love to see more of khushis bubbly side and would love see Arnav khushi bonding and getting married finally. Pls. do not end this one soon. Would love to see till their honeymoon atleast.😊
Just love this OS series very much. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing OS. continue soon plz😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update...
arnav saved her name as happy...
the fone convo was sweet...
with a single hello from arnav khusi knew he was angry and apologised..
"Sorry, Baba, Sorry. I couldn't call earlier. Lakhon sorry!",
that was so cute..that simple sentence gav me a tingling sensation..no wonder arnav gulped..
and baaifriends wali bath ki tho kya kahoon...nd the explanation...that was hilarious..asr had no choice but to laugh...i wonder wat explanation wud arnav giv the family..waiting eagerly...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...Awesome update 😊
Love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was an awesome update, ,, loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update. the phone conversation was awesome.khushi is really cute and arnav's smile was adorable...😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
Such a sweet conversation in phone :-)
I loved it so much!!!!
Smitar you are just amazing yar!!!!
I really love your writings like hell!!!!!!
Awesome!!!!!
When is the next part!!!???

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