Mayur SS...Yaadein, part 10 updated on page 28 - Page 10

part 1

good part but little small

but you are a new but good work
try to write more

nice parts
and long too
update soon

wow it was fabulous part
hmmm so sajan did something which created problem for nupur. but as u said they were innnocent so baat shayed kuch aur he thi
now i m waiting for mayurs confrontation
beautiful part

but as usual ur link was not working..:(


hey do update ur title -it would be helpful to access ur update for readers

Part – 6

"I am coming Nupur.. I will win back your heart..no matter what...I know you still love me and your heart beats for me only me...I will have you and Arjun back in my life..no matter what..."

Mayank returned to his home hurriedly entering in the mansion

Ramu kaka pack my bag, i don't have any time " mayank shouted.

Shilpa is looking at Mayank with wide mouth. She was shocked to see mayank smiling after 5 long years. She had tears.

Shilpa: Mayank where are you going?

Mayank turned and ran towards shilpa and hugged her tightly

Mamma i found her, i found my jaan my life my nupur" Mayank Shouted with excitement

shilpa asked pulling himself from him,"What...sachi mayank, She lifted her right hand keeping on mayank's cheek.

Mayank nodded her head.

On hearing the shouts from the living room, samrat and gunjan ran towards living room.

Both was shocked hearing mayank.

Bhai, are u serious? samrat shouted

"Yes sammy, she is in shimla. I am going to bring her back", mayank said with smile.

Mayank walked towards gunjan who is on the last stair with blank expression and he stood infront of her with moist eyes and big smile playing on lips.

Suddenly, gunjan bent on her knees and cried her heart out.

Mayank lifted her up and cupped her face, dont cry gunjan, our nupur will be with us soon, your di, your best friend. Now our happy days are coming.

Thank you jiju, gunjan said

We all will come with you mayank, shilpa said

No mama, trust me, i will bring her back. Nupur is very angry on me. First i have to manofy her mama. You all know how much tough job is that, he said smiling

All laughed aloud in unison

Ramu kaka : Mayank babu, sabb packing hogai.

Mayank smiled and thought to himself "i am coming nupur for you and our son to claim for lifetime"

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In Shimla

At 11.00 P.M, Flight landed at shimla, Mayank switched on his cell phone while getting out of the flight in shimla airport and saw detective missed calls and messages. He read all the messages detective had sent him. He smiled to himself reading each detail of the Nupur and Arjun. when he read the last message, a soft smile played on his lips. It is a cute photo of nupur and arjun at a school.

He called detective and said "Good Job Mr.Singhania and your payment will be accounted in your bank account soon and disconnected the call"

He drove towards his hotel in a car hired by his company.

Nupur, i cant wait now to take you and arjun in my arms, thought Mayank.

On other hand, in Nupur's home

Both Nupur and arjun on bed. She is looking at her cute son who is sleeping peacefully beside her. Suddenly Nupur felt restless..her heart started beating rapidly and her breath became uneven..she felt difficult to breathe…she closed her eyes and kept her hand on her dumbing heart….

At the same time, hotel room Mayank too felt the same..he too closed his eyes and kept his hand on his restless heart…"Nupur..Mayank" both mumbled at the same time..

Suddenly, nupur realised what she murmured and jumped from the bed immediately. She ran into washroom. What the hell? I will never remember mayank. He never existed in my life. I hate him. She washed her face again and again. After sometime, her heart beat became normal. She took deep breadth . She went to bed murmuring "Mayank and his name never existed in my life. I only hate him"

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Early morning, the first ray of sun hit the window of the nupur's room, she slightly opened her eyes and saw her cute little arjun cuddled her like a cute teddy. He stirred a little in his sleep when alarm started buzzing. Nupur stopped the alarm and kissed arjun. Arjun smiled in his sleep making smile nupur too. Nupur got up and thanked her Bhagwan for the happiness he had provided her in her life giving Arjun.

Outside, behind a tree, mayank is eagerly waiting for nupur and arjun to come. He came there in the night itself waiting for them. Last night, he felt restless in the hotel room. So he decided to wait outside her jaan's house.

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wah beautiful part
mayank was excited and happy and nupur was restless

fabulous part
Sajan,mayank and shipa aunty scene was nice

and also loved Nupur scene with arjun

loved both updates
u rocked this FF

wow kiran it was beautiful update
i so loved this FF

and thanx for updating ur title

osummm
how many parts r left lol