Mayur SS...Yaadein, part 10 updated on page 28 - Page 12

Created

Last reply

Replies

179

Views

22.8k

Users

46

Likes

597

Frequent Posters

Prada_176 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful updates kiran
waiting for their confrontation
update soon
amritannnnnm thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

nice ss

add me in your pm list plezzz

kiran_rati thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
i will update next part in the night dear
yaadien.kiran thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Part 7

Outside, behind a tree, mayank is eagerly waiting for nupur and arjun to come. He came there in the night itself waiting for them. Last night, he felt restless in the hotel room. So he decided to wait outside her jaan's house.

After sometime, a broad smile came on his lips seeing nupur followed by arjun out of a small house. Nupur and Arjun walk outside of their house...Arjun was holding Nupur's hand...he looked so cute with his little book bag and a water bottle hanging from his head...Nupur alongwith arjun was very happily walking on the road towards arjun's school.

Both are walking on the road. Nupur is talking non stop with arjun. Arjun is nodding his head unware of mayank's eyes on them.

Arjun : Mamma please stop talking, school aagay...

Nupur bends down and gives him a hug...Arjun kisses her cheek and runs inside...she waves him goodbye and starts walking unaware of mayank following her.

%%%%%

Nupur made her way into the grocery shop...Mayank is observing her while Nupur was busy deciding on what to buy...and he enjoying her cute antic facial expressions.

As she was walking home after the shopping she bumped into someone causing her to drop all her bags. She bends down to pick it up and the person helps her as well. When Nupur looks up smiling..her smile vanishes. She grabs her things from his hand and starts walking away.

Mayank: Nupur listen to me...i want to talk to you

Nupur stood still as if the voice rooted her to the spot. It send shivers down her spine, made her throat dry, and caused her palms to become all clammy and sweaty..He STILL has that kind of an effect on her, and she cant deny that.

Nupur: I don't want to talk to you especially i never talk to strangers. (She stops and looks at him) Listen, i dont know who are you and dont try to follow me. I am warning you and started running with all her might!!!

" Nupur! Nupur stop, listen to me please listen to me! I HAVE to talk to you!! Please!!" mayank shouted.


Suddenly mayank came from infront of her grabbing her by the waist. She tried to scream, but the large hand on her mouth blocked the voice out!!

Her brown almond eyes became wide seeing mayank's guts to grab her on the middle of the road. She also trying hard to control her emotions not to come infront of Mayank. His closeness is driving her crazy. After 5 long years, they are this much close, both lost in eachothers eyes. Mayank's condition is not less than her. He want to forget everything and melt in her.

Mayank Slowly wishpered in her ears. Nupur, i want to talk to you.

This made nupur hit the reality. She came out of his world pushing him almost with all her energy.

" Let go of me! I dont wanna talk to you", she screamed and started to hit him with her tiny fists, tears streaming down her cheeks.

"Leave my way, otherwise i will gather people" she warned pointing her forefinger towards him.

"Oh i see" he said casually with stubborn face.

"I am also saying the same nupur, dont come into my way. I am going to stay in this shimla for few days. So dont bother me", Mayank said with angry tone which made nupur more angry.

Nupur never come into strangers way, she shouted and walked towards her home fuming.

What he is thinking of himself aakdu kahika, she said curing mayank.

Mayank smiled to himself, "nupur, i know how to manify jaan."

Tumhari raasthe per chal raha hoon darling

Seedi ungli se ghee nahi tho tedi tho sahi.

Now i am going to work on my plan B. I will made this world up and down to bring you and arjun into my life" he thought to himself

This is the end of 7th part. Sorry for mistakes.Thanx guys for ur support and love till now. Hope u love this part. Please guys hit the like buttone

All types of comments both negetive and positive are welcomed. Thanx guys for ur support and love

Please add yaadien.kiran for getting pms of this SS

Maria. thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 12 years ago
Kiran dear your link never worked for me..please send the full link..i just noticed you send the broken link like your link start with india forums while it start from the www.. anyways quite interesting part continue soon
kiran_rati thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Maria.

Kiran dear your link never worked for me..please send the full link..i just noticed you send the broken link like your link start with india forums while it start from the www.. anyways quite interesting part continue soon


sorry dear for troubling you people
but the new id through which i am sending pms is a new baby so i am not eligible to add www. 😕

Edited by kiran_rati - 12 years ago
kiran_rati thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

updated dear
read above😃
WhisperOfDreams thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
Wowie wala chap tha
Finally MayUr meet...
soo cutely written...
Cant wait to see what is plan B
love
Safrena
Irum. thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Oye yeh kya tha?Itna chota and munna sara chap.
Sara kasoor tera hai tu ne likha hi itna acha ai k dil krta hai read krti jaon, read krti jaaon.
So Finally Mayur met.
wah! kya meeting thi.
long 5 years. Mr.Sharama itna assan na hoga Nupur ko manana.
Loved it.
Do update soon, veryyy soon😈
Faria. thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

It was a very beautiful update Kiran

Wonderful

Finally Mayur met and nupur was angry on mayank- it was natural

But mayu knw how to manofy her

Wanna c how myank will get back his Nupur and Arjun'

But this update was to small

Expecting a bigger part next time


Edited by Faria. - 12 years ago

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050 · 11 months ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1019 page no 29

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050 · 3 years ago

Welcome you all to the new thread of RANVEER'S UNSAID FEELINGS #13 Keep Travelling in the world of ISHVEER LOVE Warm Regards sakshi ❤️ Index...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington · 1 years ago

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: abavi · 4 years ago

From the author's desk : Welcome to thread 6! I started to write this story years ago when the show was live and now when I look back on what...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse · 1 years ago

[NOCOPY] Hello readers! I am Aditi, I have been writing stories here but this is my first short story on RiKara. Alike, you all have been...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".