Mayur SS...Yaadein, part 10 updated on page 28 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
hey very nice update...
Waiting to know what had happened in past...
Amazing story...👏
Please update soon😊
And if possible please PM me...😳
Keep up the good work 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Very Important Note : Guys please dont misunderstand sajan in this part. They are very very good. Please bear the suspense for 2-3 parts.

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Part – 5

Thanks Dia i will never forget your help. I promise you, i will bring back my life, my son, your di nupur back. I will make everthing fine soon. Mayank said. With this he walked towards his car with moist eyes and determination to bring his angel, his son back into his life.

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In Sharma Mansion

Samrat entered his room, where gunjan was laid on the bed, culddled in herself like a small kid, her head on a pillow, with a frame hugged onto her chest n tears continuously rolling our of her eyes...

Sam ran towards her, instantly pulling her in his arms,he hugged her "baby, kya huva...shhh...ro mat.."

After few minutes, gunjan murmured while sobbing " ye sab mere wajese hua hai sammy, sirf mein zimmedar hoon" How can i face nupur di...i want to say sorry to her sam. Please this guilt is killing me every minute.

No baby, why are you blamming yourself. You are not at fault. Ye sirf tum Arti bhabi aur mayank bhai keliye kiya.

Jo bhi hua wo sirf ek misunderstanding tha. Tumhara koi kasur nahi hai. Please dont cry dear. He tightly hugged her and kissed her hair softly carrased her hairs soothingly

No sam, you dont understand. I am responsible for nupur di's situation. I didnt get any chance to meet her and apolozise after that day. I tried to find out about nupur di. I failed sam and started crying still hugging him tight.

Then you are not responsible gunjan. This whole thing is started because of me. All this happened because of my stupid plan gunjan. I am responsible.

Gunjan lifted her head from his chest and saw his moist eyes. Both hugged each other tightly trying to console eachother.

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Mayank is driving the car. He recollected all the times, Nupur always tried to dress in a saree for him because he loves to see her in saree, how beautiful she looked every time. Her non stop talking, her blush, her eyes. Infact he is crazy about her. He also remembered their first kiss. He was in different world her world. Her soft lips, smooth skin. He always feel aroused when she is around him. While, he did not realize he was hitting the accelerator all this while, and that had touched 150km/hr.

Suddenly, he heard a loud horn. A lorry is coming towards his car. Mayank came back to his senses and looked at the speedometer. He slowed down. He pulled the car over to the side and took a deep breath. He put his head onto the steering for sometime.

Now, i am not going to waste a single second to take nupur and arjun in my arms. Mayank took his phone to call his secretary.

"Good evening Mr. Sharma", Sheena Malhotra said shivering

Miss Malhotra, book flight tickets to shilma for next flight, its urgent and also book a suit in a hotel and inform the details as soon as possible" he shouted.

Ok okkk sir" Sheena replied.

Mayank took a deep breadth and dailed detective number.

Hello, Nupur is in shimla, this is her phone number *********** and i am coming to shimla in few hours. I want each and every detail of her when i reach there. Nothing must go wrong mind it, he warned while disconnecting call.

"I am coming Nupur.. I will win back your heart..no matter what...I know you still love me and your heart beats for me only me...I will have you and Arjun back in my life..no matter what..."

This is the end of fourth part. Sorry for mistakes. Thanx guys for ur support and love till now. Hope u love this part. Please guys hit the like buttone

All types of comments both negetive and positive are welcomed. Thanx guys for ur support and love

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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
@Kiran
your link never worked for me--i don't whats the problem:(anyways coming to update it was short but interestring would love to see Mayur meeting.
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
omg...arjun.. MN's son?😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
awwsome part. mayu is going to shimla.waiting 4 MN meeting plz update ur title with update no and page no.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
so finally mayu is goin 2 shimla!😳
& yes kiran.. d linqs u r pm- ing r'nt working 4 me as well!😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
plzz next time try 2 update a long part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Loved it .Waiting to c how Mayank will win her heart back.
Thnx for pm bt the link ws not working.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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mayank married to aarti but loved nupur? nice upstae
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
nice updt
cont soon
Thanks for the pm but the link was not working

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