Arhi FF: Tangent Worlds. New Ch-6 Updated, pg-16. 25/11/13. New!

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shafqee80

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

oh wow zabardast ...i like dis story already

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savi_malvi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Beautiful and emotional update. Thanx for the pm.

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Wow! Great update. Khushi scene was fantastic. So tragic what happened to Payal & I can't believe her father just left her there & proclaimed her dead!!

Can't wait to see how Arnav & Khushi will meet.

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nadianatalie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Soo intense. Heartbroken about Payal. Can't believe that shashi just abandoned her. I hope khushi is able to rescue her. Great update. Thank you for the pm.

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faree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

awesome update n thanks for the pm

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chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

omg so this explains things
how the hell is it her fault if she was raped
but then i forget this society just blames the victim more than the prep
urghgghgh man this is so not happening but it is
so this explains why he said payal is dead when she isnt
but i dont get how does that have anything to do with arnie
or does it have anything to do with that
hmmm so how does getting married would have stopped payal from such situation explain that to me
man she has no one there and her family has given up on her
how is she where is she
does anyone care i doubt it
ahhh so anji we were trying to find out what her brother thought of shyam
well you will know when he himself is sure of it
cheers for pm

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Srija Singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: foesb
An intriguing story presented with fantastic writing. Just came a cross your story and by the time I finished reading all 3 chapters I was hooked to the story. Usually I'm in to not so complicated love stories but so far what ever you have updated made me want to know what's gonna happen in future. The way you have portrayed Khushi's pain over her sister, followed by her own father's confession that he doesn't want to do anything with Payal for no fault of hers were fantastic. Emotions,contrast in thinking and the role society plays in such situations were penned down aptly. Pararelly Arnav's and Anjali's lives are also been explored, Arnav's shrewdness when it comes to the society was shown very nicely. Awesome writting.Waiting to see how the story will progress...

Thanks a lot for such a lovely comment, I feel flattered. And about rapes, isn't this wat happens, making the victim into the culprit, and really its a shame that we r still living in such a stupid system. Anyhow, a lot more is on its way, hope u'll enjoy the future updates as well😳

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LyssaPie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

this keeps getting more and more interesting.. I love it 👏

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A, Anon, Nony, Anamika :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Arnav-Anjali-Shyam -Khushi. I'll wait to find out how you unfold their life stories. Their dynamics and characters.

But I want to say that for the first time in all FF's that I have read, Payal's character looks actually IMPORTANT to me for story development. And seriously it was about time some one else also experiences this 'bedard duniya' apart from Khushi in Gupta family. Not that I like what happened to her. Rape is a heinous crime. But this is fiction, right?

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Srija Singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Anony_mous

Arnav-Anjali-Shyam -Khushi. I'll wait to find out how you unfold their life stories. Their dynamics and characters.

But I want to say that for the first time in all FF's that I have read, Payal's character looks actually IMPORTANT to me for story development. And seriously it was about time some one else also experiences this 'bedard duniya' apart from Khushi in Gupta family. Not that I like what happened to her. Rape is a heinous crime. But this is fiction, right?

Well I truly wish that Rapes existed in fictions only but the sad reality of our time is that they don't. But yes this story as I have mentioned earlier is more of an IPPKND fan fic than just Arhi romance, so yes each and every character is very central to the narrative and a protagonist in their own right. Btw, I am still working on how to make their paths cross😕

And yes thanks a lot for taking time to read and then comment, it really means a lot and what makes me even more happier is the fact that the comment is from someone whose story I almost religiously follow.😳