Arhi FF: Tangent Worlds. New Ch-6 Updated, pg-16. 25/11/13. New!

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Downhill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

simply fabulous.loved it'...thats brilliant
keep writing
and thnxx for such lovely updates

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Srija Singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: bea_rom
interesting but did not really get it
arnav and shyam were talking about anjali right?
the who called khushi?
waiting for the next updates

Yes dear they r indeed talking about Anji. Also as u must have figured out Anji is younger to Arnav in this story. Also about the way its been written, doesn't Arnav always talk about everything in life in terms of business. And about Khushi's call, it shall be revealed in the next chapter, so do look out for it. Also things in general would become more clearer once the story progresses but I'll try to maintain suspense throughout it, cz thats wat I plan for now. But then m actually new to writing and can only try to make it interesting.

Thanks a lot for taking out time to read this.😳

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Great start!!!

I was a bit confused but realized its more of a mystery that you've created around the story.

Looking forward to seeing where it goes.

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savi_malvi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Thank u for the pm and the update was cool :).

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Uthra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

When is the Shyam-rani sahiba duo going to understand that arnav Singh Raizada is not ASR for nothing. Devil reincarnation.

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shanon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Simply superb.

Loved it.
update soon.
Thnx for the pm.

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nadianatalie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Great up date. I'm very intrigued. Thank's for the pm 😊

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mem1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

For the third time in one day, I have to say you are a wonderful writer. You really are very very talented.

And if anything, I was silly in expecting a light-hearted story after reading your first two. If anything, this one seems darker than the other two. But you have a way of grabbing the readers attention. So now, I am added to the list of readers eagerly waiting for the next update, hoping some of this mystery will be solved.

I like Shyam's introduction and ASR's 'deal' with him.

What I am apprehensive about is the nightmare Khushi was having. Did something terrible happen to Payal?

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Srija Singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: mem1
For the third time in one day, I have to say you are a wonderful writer. You really are very very talented.
And if anything, I was silly in expecting a light-hearted story after reading your first two. If anything, this one seems darker than the other two. But you have a way of grabbing the readers attention. So now, I am added to the list of readers eagerly waiting for the next update, hoping some of this mystery will be solved.

I like Shyam's introduction and ASR's 'deal' with him.

What I am apprehensive about is the nightmare Khushi was having. Did something terrible happen to Payal?

I am glad u enjoyed my stories, thats what keeps me going😊 and ofcourse TW is going to be very different and I know its probably very foolish of me to even get into something so extensive as a novel, when 4 months ago I wrote the 2nd story of my entire life, having written the first a few years ago, but it feels good to be appreciated and I'll try do justice to it😊

Edited by srija.singh04 - 12 years ago